Name: Akt5us reviewed Chapter 2 on Dec 09, 2010 12:48 pm

I really like this! There are some interesting twists that I am dying to understand. I can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: More twists coming. Enjoy :)

Name: DGgirl reviewed Chapter 2 on Nov 29, 2010 08:15 pm

Please update! This is a really good story -- I'm loving the suspense! Don't keep us waiting for too long!! :(

Author's Response: Thanks. I try. :)

Name: citrusabby reviewed Chapter 2 on Nov 27, 2010 04:59 pm

OMG you finally updated. This is too intriguing and complex! Hope to read the next chapter soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll try to update during the holidays.

Name: waterwhistle reviewed Chapter 2 on Nov 26, 2010 07:41 pm

My interest is more than sufficiently piqued. :D I do love a good old mystery story, and I love the dark, weary tone of this one - it's got this underlying atmosphere of urgency.

I like how you portray Ginny, especially how she thinks of Draco's position with regards to the murder - she'll be Gryffindorish and will do the right thing and be unbiased, but all the same she hopes that Draco's innocent. I like how you detailed Draco and Astoria's courtship, and their early marriage.

For the fun of it, I'm going to hazard a guess at Astoria's lover - right now, I'm leaning towards the possibility of it being Pansy. Seriously, I read the letter, realized something, reread it, and was like, "OH, it's *Pansy*!" :P Of course, I might be wrong, but it's always fun to guesstimate.

I shall be looking forward to the next chapter. :]

Author's Response: Pansy!? You've got a dirty mind! Oops! Sorry, we are living in a 21st century already aren't we? Yes, women can be lovers! :) You made me laugh. And thank you for your thoughtful review, it brought me joy! I hope to update during the holidays.