Name: researchinmotion reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 15, 2009 03:49 am
Wow, super duper amazing. It was dark in just the right way but amazing in all the right ways! What a great story.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm not sure where the darkness came from, but it just seemed right.
Name: slygal reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2009 10:20 pm
I ADORE!!! a sneaky and malicious Malfoy! At first I was like, "Wow she's gone around the bend" but he plotted and got a leg up on Potter! Oh this is easily a favorite short story for me! I especially love the "That was a nightmare" line. You rock as always!
Author's Response: Thank you. I thought the last line was fun. Draco was definitely malicious and dark. Not sure where that came from.
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2009 08:27 pm
OMG!!! I'm lovin' this plot! Draco is so bad!!!!
Author's Response: Draco is actually evil in this fic which I haven't really written before.
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2009 07:31 pm
oh, this is such an interesting story! i like how we find out whether or not Ginny was married to malfoy or harry. my favorite line was the last one, and i agree with another reviewer that said that this seems to be somehow similarly linked to draco's pet, (which i love and hope you update soon). once again, you've done a marvelous job.
Author's Response: Thank you. I sometimes feel like all the plots are running together.
Name: scubarang reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2009 05:35 pm
I have two favourite lines -
1- “He keeps me locked in the attic because he loves me.”
2- “That’s not a dream, Ginevra. It’s a nightmare.”
This was fun. I felt like I was with Ginny trying to figure it out. Even while Ron and Harry are speaking in the kitchen I was trying to figure out how that could be since Ginny obviously had to be with Draco.
Will we a get a little more background into Draco? Like how/when he fell in love with Ginny?
I like the subtle darkness of this story. Is the the prologue to Draco's Pet? If it is, does that mean we'll be seeing an update for that soon?
I'd also love if we saw something for Demented Cherubs. I've rather lost hope on seeing that one though.
Author's Response: Sorry I haven't written on demented Cherubs lately. My plot bunnies have traveled far and wide. I'll try to get back to that one next. This story is similar to Draco's pet, but it's supposed to be a stand alone fic. After a while all the plots seem familiar. The line about the attic is probably my favorite. Thanks for the review.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2009 04:11 pm
“I dreamt I was married to Harry.”
Draco chuckled. “That’s not a dream, Ginevra. It’s a nightmare.”
Mostly they drank hot chocolate, griped about being locked up, and for some odd reason they baked cookies.” He chuckled. “Can you picture Malfoy in one of your mum’s aprons baking cookies?”
Ron snorted. “Not bloody likely.
Dunno about yours,but i loved these!
i know this is a sickand twisted way for them to be together but liked it!
I liked it a lot
I love possessive Draco!
=D
GRRREAT chapter!
Although this whole thing about being with one memory than the other is amazingly confusing!
It was an exceptional idea!
only you could have though of it!
;)
kisses
Author's Response: Thank you. I played around with the idea for a while. At first I had Harry taking her from Draco and then Draco takes her back. But, I couldn't leave in the Ron/Hermione stuff that way. In the end Harry was good and Draco was evil. What's wrong with all of us that we like him that way?
Name: PrincessWhizbee reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2009 03:45 pm
Wow, that was creepy! But very well-written, of course. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I think this is the darkest fic I've written.
Name: DGgirl reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2009 03:27 pm
Twisted reality, indeed! I realy enjoyed reading this - it's so well written and mind-boggling, I just can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you. I meant this as a one shot but I never know what my plot bunnies will bring to me.
Name: darkloveangel reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2009 03:00 pm
o wow. im speechless.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll take that as a compliment.
Name: Imaiya reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2009 02:23 pm
Oh, and by the way, my favourite line is:
"You wore an emerald, strapless gown. My mother pitched a fit.”
HA.
Author's Response: I loved that one too. I can hear him speaking in dry but amused tone.
Name: Imaiya reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2009 02:23 pm
Wow, that is one twisted story (in an excellent way, of course). I feel terrible for Harry, and I actually want him and Ginny to be together. But of course, the story just wouldn't be what it is without Draco and Ginny ending up together like you have written. Other than that, extremely well written, fluid, and descriptive. Congrats. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. Harry is supposed to be sympathetic in this fic. Draco wins in the end. We hope for the best for Ginny.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2009 02:23 pm
danngggg. malfoy's freaking manipulative. jeeeeze. hahah.
Author's Response: I liked the idea of a dark Draco coming back for revenge.
Name: Incognito reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2009 02:05 pm
I sense that this is a sequel to a story you have written before. You must inform me which story has them both housed in Grimmauld Place together. I demand it! ^_~
I really like this short story. You're really left scratching your head as to what is real and what is fantasy.
I'd like to think that Ginny would fall in love with Draco of her own free will, but this is almost as good. *laughs* As much as I do love Harry, any story that has Draco one-uping the Boy Wonder is A-Okay in my books! ^_~
Author's Response: Hmmm, I've written a few Grimmauld place stories. This one stands alone. I'm glad you liked it.
Name: Licentia poetica reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 14, 2009 02:01 pm
*shudders* Dark Draco. Sending the boys home in pieces? Ah well, revenge is best served cold.
Author's Response: I liked the idea of an evil Draco returning for revenge. You know Harry would go to the ends of the earth to find Ginny if Draco didn't have an extreme threat to hold over him.