Name: penfold reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 19, 2010 04:40 pm
YES, work for it, boy!
Great, can't wait to read more!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 18, 2010 08:08 pm
Really can't wait to read more. So far this is a really good story. Good Luck! :)
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 18, 2010 07:13 pm
I was delighted to find that this chapter was as cute and funny as the last. Draco and Ginny's interaction was priceless. There is a subtle sexiness to this story that I like - 'Malfoy languidly undid a cuff, and then another. Damn him and his sneaky, underhanded Slytherin ways! He had to know the effect he was having on her! How absolutely infuriating!'
Poor Ginny, having Draco 'undressing in the hallway like some—like some—scarlet man!' "Like some - scarlet man" LOL Probably my favorite line of this chapter.
I loved that Draco has carefully planned
all of this:'grey, of course, brought out his eyes...the cologne was chosen specifically to seduce.' Although even he seems to be 'shocked at his persistence'.
'This was something Draco really wanted and he was working for it, just as he worked for every other thing important to him.' I'm a romantic so I'm hoping that he is not just after her because she was 'clearly reluctant – more than reluctant, she was clearly unwilling – to go out with him.'
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 18, 2010 04:06 pm
Oh my goodness. This was just way too cute. I looooooved it! You seem to have a distinctive sense of writing that just so fresh. I really enjoyed the narration and dialogue of this chapter.
1) "Do not undo the cuffs! I repeat, do not undo the cuffs!"
Oh my goodness, this was so funny. While I was reading this, I imagined Ginny saying this through a horn, the way they do in police movies.
2) It’s all hormones, Malfoy,” Ginny told him hotly, trying to convince herself of the fact. “It’s a simple biological response!”
“Nevertheless, it’s a response, isn’t it? Makes you want to… lose control, doesn’t it?” He raked his eyes over her, slowly rolling up his sleeves, exposing nicely muscled forearms.
*shivers* that was just so...malfoy....
3) ndressing in the hallway like some—like some—scarlet man! The more rational part of her brain interjected that you couldn’t really consider rolling up one’s sleeves undressing. But it was more the way he had done it! With such deliberate, slow movements! The anticipation of it had made her hold her breath. He had to have known the effect it’d have on her.
haha, scarlet man indeed
4) As always, she was the first to speak. “Hogsmeade, Malfoy?” she demanded, wanting to know what he meant by the note.
He raised an eyebrow. “I believe that was my line.”
“I wasn’t asking you to go! I merely—what in Merlin’s name was that note about?”
Haha, general Draco snarkiness
5) He knew that Ginny found him attractive, and there was no shame in using that knowledge to his full advantage. Grey, of course, brought out his eyes, and the cashmere was thin enough to hug but not to cling, suggesting a defined musculature. His jeans were cut neither too baggy nor too tight, emphasising the length of his legs. The cologne was chosen specifically to seduce. Yeah, world domination didn’t come easily.
THe imagery of this is so good...makes me want my OWN malfoy!
Anyways, I'm really loving this story. It's just way too cute. Please tell me that you aren't giving up and are going to finish this fic...Fantastic job and please update soon!
XOXO, JT
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 18, 2010 01:19 pm
"The Night Her Hormones Said Hi"; "The Night Her Hormones Ran Wild";"The Night Her Hormones Took Over Her Brain"...LMAO. I love the way her hormones slowly increase their quest for Ginny-domination. lol so good. i love where this is going. plz dont take too log with the update. its helping me procrastinate in the most spendid ways when i should be studying for my law exams. keep the goodness coming :D
Name: MzGG reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 18, 2010 12:31 pm
oh my god.
this is so god.
i mean i really liked the first chapter but this is even 10000 times better!
PLEASE , please, please update soon!
Name: readhead1755 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 18, 2010 11:06 am
This story is greatly amusing to me. It very much reminds me of my first relationship.
Hilarity abounds.
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 18, 2010 09:12 am
a great chappie & lovin' by the way.... draco was seducing ginny. i like his style, he rope ginny right in!!!! a cute plot!!!
Name: eveil woman reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 18, 2010 07:42 am
This is really good, I can't wait for more!
Name: hpfreaklk reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 18, 2010 12:25 am
;aslkflsihbg;salkflasjdf this is good.
Draco is getting me all flushed ;)
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 2 on Jan 17, 2010 11:36 pm
Is this all the thrill of the chase for Draco? It kind of seems like it, given the fact that she's the one girl "clearly unwilling" to go out with him.
Thanks for the update! I confess: I'd forgotten about this fic.
Name: Temptation Bites reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 14, 2009 01:55 am
Like A Falling Star,
this was a great story! I cannot wait to read more. Are you going to write another soon???
Name: psyche reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 11, 2009 09:43 pm
I did enjoy this. =) Update soon.
Name: ginnywitch reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 10, 2009 06:56 pm
please do continue =]
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 09, 2009 10:12 pm
Wonderful start to this story. My favorite line - "He rationalised that if everything he thought about himself were true, then how could he be arrogant? He was merely being truthful."
Second favorite line-"Well then, I’d better leave and let you sort yourself out. We wouldn’t want you to be running around all wet and flustered now, would we?"
Can't wait to see more. This is cute and funny...love it.
Name: shadieladie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 09, 2009 12:50 pm
oh i like were the story is going!!
Name: Akt5us reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 08, 2009 10:18 pm
This is intriguing and I can't wait to read more! :)
Name: babigurlchels reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 08, 2009 07:56 pm
Yay! Very interesting and please continue soon! :)
Name: Flighty Temptress reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 08, 2009 05:55 pm
Oh! This is marvellous!! I couldn't stop smiling from beginning to end! I cannot wait until you post again! So funny and I love the way you wrote it; you have a fantastic style! Love love love it!!
Name: singin_in_da_shower reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 08, 2009 05:50 pm
Ah, our hormones. Realistic but fun Draco/Ginny relations! I cannot wait for the couple next chapters! And thank you for inspiring me to lose weight. : )
Name: dancingonstars reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 08, 2009 05:24 pm
that was so cute. i really liked this. and loved the little ron/hermione mention to ginny how her and draco are like that. cant wait to see what else you've got for this story.
Name: CCC reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 08, 2009 03:18 pm
He rationalised that if everything he thought about himself were true, then how could he be arrogant?
Love this line. It rings true to his character. Good job.
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 08, 2009 12:24 pm
They would begin to notice things – people – differently, perhaps to their surprise or disgust.
Couldn't describe the beginning of a D/G relationship better!
In every fic it starts taht way, there's no escaping!
Malfoy’s cool stare had then morphed into a smirk. “I don’t mind actually. Enjoying the view?”
“I, uh, well—that is…”
My exact reaction...although i would rather to be a little more darin and have a reaction like"are you gonna drop that towel or do i have to?'
Guess, i'm more this Ginny than a dominatrix one
;p
She wondered how securely he had knotted his towel.
*snorts*
I loved this!
“Well then, I’d better leave and let you sort yourself out. We wouldn’t want you to be running around all wet and flustered now, would we?”
Oh yeah, i ahd to read it twice before getting the innuendo myself!
^;^
Luna turned back to Ginny. “Just like how your brother and Hermione can’t stand each other?”
Oh yeah, Loony has far too much of a smart mouth to do her any good!
And besides pushing Gin towards Malfoy, i can't wait for her to have Zabini!
+D
kisses
Name: bad_angel_109 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 08, 2009 08:21 am
ohh, cute chapter. i wonder how things are gonna pan out in the next chapter :)