OH NY GOD BEST STORY EVER I DID NOT SEE IT COMING AT ALL
Ok wow this was waaaaay too twisted for me. For half of it I was expecting it to be Blaise the whole time, oh man this was like watching dexter, but without the "they deserved it" factor.
STT
Author's Response: I love Dexter, so I'm assuming this is a good review and not bad, haha.
Wow that was simply chilling! I think I expected the first couple of chapters not to be a casual and flirty as they were but really what they did was really pull me in.
The first kill I was certain the killer was Draco (especially in light of Ginny's initial rejection) but then you sort of lulled me into a false sense of security because it seemed like he really cared about her (I realise now maybe he was just savouring her?). Then I thought it was Blaise but thought that seemed too... I don't know... cliché? I think I also thought for a moment it was Harry but because you hadn't mentioned him so he got ruled out for being too random. I might have even thought for a split moment that it may even have been Ron but that suspicion died as swiftly as it was born.
Overall, I really enjoyed this! Well, as much as one can enjoy Draco killing Ginny fics. I think after finishing the whole story I almost wished it you had unravelled the ending slower or that Ginny had taken heed of her initial suspicion or the chills when Draco revealed his empathy with the killer but really I find myself unable to fault these quirks because I don't think it could have worked out better than how you wrote it.
So... I think this review is long enough now. Ha ha. Thanks for this story! :)
Wicked ending. I was not expecting that when I starting reading.
what??? Draco malfoy is the killer! I didn't want it to be true!
Wow that was so intense. The ending surprised me so much. I was sure it was Blaise! Good work though.
Author's Response: Thank you. I wasn't sure how the ending would go, and it seemed lots of people didn't understand it.
Wow, that was... creepy. But I guessed it was Draco. But she didn't reject him, so I don't quite understand that bit. Not too bad, though, I suppose.
Author's Response: When she told him in that one chapter she didn't want to be with him, his brain twisted and he went slightly mad, so to speak.
LOVE IT! I love that he is kinda crazy Draco. You don't see it often. I guessed that he was the killer in chapter 1, but I changed my mind a million times and never suspected him in the end. He is very split personality in a way. Really we only see glimpses of his "evil" self, well except for the end. I'm glad I couldn't predict the ending and that Draco wasn't as nice as we like to imagine. Amazing story! :D
Author's Response: Thanks very much :)
Wow. That's seriously chilling, and very good.
Author's Response: :D Thank you.
Woah, a tiny voice in my head has been saying all along "Draco's the killer!" but a much larger voice has been telling it to shut up because it couldn't possibly be true. Another part of me was suspecting Harry since he hadn't really been mentioned so I thought that there might've been some really messy breakup that had gone on and he was killing everyone that reminded him of Ginny.
The end confuses me: did Ginny somehow manage to survive and is sneaking around to see Draco? Or, has he just really gone round the bend and he just sees a hallucination of her? I'd say that she might be a ghost, but the indications that her hair is red, she's dripping blood that's staining Draco's clothes, and the fact that she can touch him leads me to believe that that is not the case.
All in all, it's been a great read! Congratulations on a job well done! :D
Author's Response: He's seeing her the way he left her, so yeah, he's hallucinating. You're probably the only one who really got it, haha. I was going to make him have a split personality type of deal but then I thought this was better. Thank you for the review :)
came across this story..completely intrigued me and this chapter caught my brain off guard..cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: It's complete by chapter 12.
DRACO IS THE KILLER!!!!Cant believe I missed that!What just happened?the ending confused me.OMG!All the suspense is killing me here!
You made Draco evil..I feel sad now. :(
Author's Response: This is the end of the story, I'm sorry.
Okay...I don't get it!!! I need to read the next chapter! Update soon please...thank you!
You're confusing the heck out of me but I love it!
Author's Response: There is no next chapter, I'm afraid. Draco killed all of those woman, including Ginny.
Oh my goodness! It was DRACO all along? I was totally expecting Blaise! oh my goodness, that is twisted. This is possibly one of the most twisted things I've read in the DG fandom. And that's not a bad thing! I really like mysteries with a surprise twist ending, but...wow. this is really just...*whew!* Only one part that I didn't get, though. At the very end, with the redhead girl...is that Ginny? Or just another redhead? Because it seems like it would be Ginny...And what was the blood dripping down her temple and the hollow eyes?
Other than that, good job on the twist! I'm going to go back and reread the DG parts just to see how twisted this is.
XOXO, JT
P.S. Is this the last chapter? Because it says WIP, but it seems like this would be the end...
Author's Response: It is the last chapter. I just didn't want to change it to Complete until this was up. Yes, it was Ginny, well he was seeing her how he left her anyway.
i am completely and totally bamboozled! its DRACO? blond hair was tell-tale sign...its creeepy! arghh how many more chapters?!
Author's Response: This is it. I wanted people to see things through his eyes, for him to explain why.
This is very interesting. I'm guessing that it's Blaise? Is this the end? I can't wait to read more if it isn't!
Author's Response: It's the end. It's Draco. I made that kind of obvious in this chapter, haha. I had to.