Name: b1elliot reviewed
Sunburn on Jan 29, 2014 07:27 am
Lovely chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Name: Incognito reviewed
Sunburn on Jan 09, 2011 07:35 pm
I love your descriptions in this chapter. I really feel him sweating, being uncomfortable and irate.
Yikes, is Ginny being quite the snarky little - I won't say bint, but I do mean bint. She has her reasons for not liking Draco, but that's some repressed rage going on up in her noggin of hers. Her taking care of Draco while seeming to be Lucy's idea, does hint at a soft edge...kinda soft. Lol.
I like how you're slowly building up the tension between Draco and Ginny - and how Draco notices her, thinks about her touch, is jealous of the delivery man, etc. Subtle hints at things to come. And I especially like that it's one-sided right now. Too often it is Ginny liking Draco, and Draco acting aloof. It's nice to see a reversal - or, in this case, having Ginny hate Draco. Lol.
Author's Response: I think Ginny felt a little guilty about Draco's condition. It certainly wasn't her idea to take care of him, but a small part of her felt responsible, and she thinks so highly of Lucy that she would do whatever she told Ginny to do anyway. Of course, she ends up unknowingly torturing poor Draco. ;D Thanks for the review, Lia. n_n
Name: lilactree reviewed
Sunburn on Jan 07, 2011 07:44 pm
I really like how this story is from Draco's point of view. He's certainly not simple and that's what makes it interesting. Many other fics fail to explain his complexities as they never spend enough time to describe the ins and outs of his mind. -And so I have a mammoth hunch your on the right track to successfully show Draco's development as a person. Love love love it :) Your fic will succeed where others have failed. Keep the chapters coming! Keep up the fantastic quality.
(P.S I love how Ginny is imperfect with her prejudice towards him -I have a feeling that will change as the chapters roll on)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! n_n One thing I really wanted to do with this story was to show Draco's development, show how he personally could be broken and then possibly fixed. How that happens, how he feels about it. I hope that's what I'm accomplishing. :) Thank you for reviewing!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Sunburn on Jan 06, 2011 10:08 am
awwww draco likeeeeees herrr. sooo cutee.
Author's Response: XD
Name: Len reviewed
Sunburn on Jan 06, 2011 07:13 am
Draco and his bear are very cute together!
So Draco can't stop thinking about Ginny, huh? Very interesting indeed *raises eyebrows suggestively*
Love it! Can't wait to know what happens next! =)
Author's Response: Thanks! Personally, and maybe it's just me, I think Draco is adorable in this story, period. He's all sadface and in need of a hug. Too bad Ginny won't give him one. :( But at least he has his teddy.
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! n_n