Name: NTA123 reviewed
If It Makes You Happy on Oct 09, 2020 01:51 pm
I still do not understand how can someone justify cheating or infidelity like this?!
Name: Silvryn reviewed
If It Makes You Happy on Jun 08, 2012 08:12 pm
somewhat comfortable closure of the relationships - nicely done. can't wait to find fulfillment in the next chapter and the last!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Everything is written and I'm just waiting on my beta, so hopefully I'll be able to post more soon. :)
Name: SunnyStorms reviewed
If It Makes You Happy on Jun 08, 2012 07:27 pm
It's unusual reading such a nice, understanding Harry in a breakup scene for a DG fic. Haha. That Astoria and Harry are both such nice characters are a rarity in DG stories, but you made said characterizations work in this story.
I really liked how you handled the breakup scene for both couples. The only part that seemed a little odd to me was that bit with Ginny smiling as she said I'm sorry-I think she probably should still be feeling bad at this point as this was before Harry told her he's not mad. I'm certainly forward to DG's next confrontation now that both canon couples have been broken up. ;) I'm also curious about how you'll be handling Ginny's kids' reactions.
Author's Response: That was one thing I decided on before I even began writing this. I didn't want to turn Astoria and Harry into "bad guys" in any way. But trust me when I say that Ginny is definitely still feeling bad, and you'll see that in the next chapter when Draco and Ginny meet again!
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
If It Makes You Happy on Jun 06, 2012 09:49 pm
well since both women are free.. i wondered if ginny or astoria will follow what true heart desire.. great break up scences..
Author's Response: Everything will be resolved in chapter 11 and the epilogue, I promise! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Name: Dark__Angel reviewed
If It Makes You Happy on Jun 03, 2012 06:49 pm
sweet great job very good
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Name: Dark__Angel reviewed
If It Makes You Happy on Jun 03, 2012 06:04 pm
sweet great job very good
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Name: Sleepless reviewed
If It Makes You Happy on Jun 01, 2012 06:37 pm
Oh I Loved it! It's hard to let go but sometimes it is the best thing for everyone. You did amazing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the way I wrote this. :)
Name: ReverseBeauty reviewed
If It Makes You Happy on May 31, 2012 06:24 am
This was such a beautiful but sad chapter :3 Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Hopefully the next chapter will be a little less sad for you. :)
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
If It Makes You Happy on May 30, 2012 06:16 pm
okay they let their wives go. and now what? they swap families?
Author's Response: Haha, not quite. I guess you'll have to see what happens in the next chapter, won't ya? :P
Name: bigreader reviewed
If It Makes You Happy on May 30, 2012 04:15 am
YAY! I'm glad every thing is smoothing out. Now I'm waiting for the draco and ginny interaction! I especially loved Draco's pet name for astoria that was adorable. Can't wait to see the next chapter. I love this story!
Author's Response: Next chapter + epilogue will be heavy on the DG. Promises! Thanks for the review :)
Name: FireNIce70 reviewed
If It Makes You Happy on May 29, 2012 05:01 pm
Great! the realization on everyone's part that was was right, is right, and what was wrong, well... it's no point dwelling on the past. Lots of maturity shown on all parts, which is probably no what would happen in real life, but makes this particular story work so well. The hidden resentment is a great theme that is so common in almost any relationship. You've handled it very well. Looking forward to the ending. Should be a good one!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and thought the character reactions were good. I was so worried about how this would go over! Thanks for the review :)