Name: b1elliot reviewed Chapter 2 on Sep 27, 2014 09:32 pm
That was an awesome chapters...loved the shared carpet ride...makes sense for the magical world.
Name: Shadow_Belle reviewed Chapter 2 on Oct 31, 2013 08:51 pm
I love this so very hard. I can't even express how much I loved this. I cant' wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: :) Thank you! And I love you (in a non-creepy way) for reviewing. Last chapter shall be posted soon. - Ann
Name: brittnymalfoy15 reviewed Chapter 2 on Oct 29, 2013 07:55 am
I do not want this story to end! I love their banter and the sexual tension...

Author's Response: Hehe. Thank you! Unfortunately, it does not have to end. On the brightside, I'll be working on more stories now (not a shameless promotion!). :) Thanks for reviewing! - Ann
Name: Incognito reviewed Chapter 2 on Oct 27, 2013 06:17 pm
Again, the banter in this was fantastic, getting very flirty, which I love. The UST just seems to explode on screen here. It's the will they or won't they tease that I very much enjoy in my DG fics.

“And what lovely dreams they are—tits everywhere,” Draco said.

Lolol! I don't care if you think you've overused Draco's tit obsession, it's hilarious and true to character as anyone who has an obsession will bring up that obsession frequently - or else it wouldn't be an obsession.

What I especially like about this chapter is the expanding on the friendship, giving us some of the background. It makes it that much more believable and enjoyable and their eventual coming together more satisfying. Some of the best romances are rooted in friendship, and especially those that started off with attraction but decided to build on a solid emotional relationship first.

Plus the part with Ginny's dreams and Draco comforting her... just great. It shows not only how comfortable they are with each other but how much Ginny trusts and depends on Draco and how deeply he cares for her. Just perfect. And I also like that the serious moment was interposed with humour, as it is very common amongst best friends, even when at their lowest.

The back and forth is killing me. Lol. Draco really doesn't stay down for long, which is awesome. Hehe. But yet again my favourite line has to do with tits:

“You and my breasts,” Ginny sighed.

“That could be a song,” Draco said.


LOL! Seriously, killing me. Another amazing chapter, had me grinning from ear to ear. :D

Author's Response: I heart your reviews so much. It's true. It is an obsession therefore he must talk about tits, tits, tits. And I was trying to avoid the whole long paragraphs worth of back story thing, so I'm glad you still got the strong friendship vibe without those tetchy paragraphs. I'm so happy you liked this fic, I would have been sad if you didn't. And there may or may not be smut cookies/outtakes forming in my head now thanks to one of my other lovely reviewers. - Ann
Name: Marinka reviewed Chapter 2 on Oct 27, 2013 11:24 am
Lovely ride for them, not:) may be you can do an outtake with some more adventures? It certainly fun to read!

Author's Response: That's a pretty good idea. I think I might...maybe instead of going straight back to England they do some other adventures...oh the plot bunnies! Thanks for reviewing! - Ann
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