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Name: NTA123 reviewed The Battle of Hogwarts – Part II on Aug 30, 2020 03:42 pm
Today I have divided my review into 2. I keep getting logged oit and my "nicely written" (I do hope they are nice XD) reviews do not get published. And I have to start again which are not as good as the actual ones!
Anyway, as I just made an observation that you are really good in writing dark themes! Please take it as a compliment (albeit a weird one at that)!
My feelings stayed constant with the sadness prevailed within the chapter. But it actually cyanges to instant relief when the chapter ends. Utterly cathartic.
Thank you again for updating. I am looking forward to the new CHAPTERS.

Author's Response: Oh my, your reviews arent only nice, they're THE NICEST EVER. I'll take your words as a compliment, of course. I always gravitaded towards the angst. I suppose our beloved characters will still suffer the twists of fate until the end EARN YOUR HAPPY ENDING, BRO I hope it remains cathartic for you. Ah, you better expect a lot more chapters, hehe. Once again, thanks for the kind and thoughtful comments. It's worth writing because of them.
Name: NTA123 reviewed The Battle of Hogwarts – Part II on Aug 30, 2020 03:34 pm
Hey! I was waiting for this part of the story. As far as I can remember you have kept all the crucial events of the battle (I thank you for that. Again less wondering for me during this part).
I think the main plot twists and adaptations will come from now on. Right?
The whole chapter has a general gloomy context to it. I am very impressed that you have, though basically, described/summarized these canon deaths already present in the actual books, I can still feel the morbidity throughout your writing.
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Author's Response: YES, from now on the story will be all on me, for better or worse, hehe. I see what you've meant: despite the sadness that permeated all this chapter, I can say I liked to write it because it was a part of the story - especially Fred’s death - that moved me a lot back then. I may not have digested that very well yet, so many years later. So it was sort of a way of saying goodbye, putting all my sorrow on it. But if you managed to get over my unconscious desolation and liked the chapter, I'm very happy, hehe
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