Name: NTA123 reviewed
The Two Shall Become One Flesh on Mar 21, 2021 07:54 pm
Shortest chapter as in with the amount of content in it.
Their marriage is unique like them. The part Draco replies back with the Official!! I actually laughed out loud.
They are gonna consummate, right? If you are writing it, it will be good. I remember your one shot. It was classy and not too graphic. I hope this one will be as well, if you plan to write it! Thank you b25;b25;b25;
Author's Response: Funny thing, you were not the first one to mention the fact that this chapter is shorter. I thought it was curious since this story has 14 chapter and 6 of then are shorter than this one hahaha.
Maybe because there are only two major scenes, indeed. Our brain is amusing haha.
Yes, there will be the consummation in the next chapter. You know me already, I really dont feel confortable writing that kind of scene! But I gave it my best and I tried not to be very graphic. It's harder because it was kind of wild, haha
In fact, I've already written it, but the site isn't working. I couldnt update the story =(. Somehow, I dont have the permission to post the chapter. I'll keep trying! Hope I can post it ASAP.
One more time, I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR comments. Thank you, my dear. This story is a little bit yours as well.
Thank you.
Name: NTA123 reviewed
The Two Shall Become One Flesh on Mar 21, 2021 07:49 pm
I feel sad for Narcissa. Though I would like the Malfoys to acknowledge their innate faults as well in the far future, you know? Also Weasleys. I know they are these light side people and all but they also have their follies as well.
This has to be your shortest chapter or I got so excited that I did not realize when I was done reading it! Or both lol.
Author's Response: Hello darling!
Ah yes, this is something I plan to do: acknowledgment is everything! About the Malfoys: I don't intend to change their nature - I don't know if that is the right word to use but I think you can get the idea - but they will have to recognize that these elitist ideals are such a mess! That won't do, Draco and Narcissa! Sorry not sorry haha The world has changed, baby!
Now about the Weasleys ... Well, this is a part I'm really excited to get to. They are the good guys, right? But they kicked A LOT OF THINGS into the long grass. Heavy things.
And they will have to deal with it.
We shall see.
Name: Silvryn reviewed
The Two Shall Become One Flesh on Mar 20, 2021 08:26 pm
Ooooh getting to the good stuff! Liked her encounter with Narcissa too!
Author's Response: Hohoho, good stuff indeed! I promise you the next one will be full of GOOD things if you know what I mean!
Thank you for commenting. It was very kind of you.
See ya soon, baby
Name: quirky_vixen reviewed
The Two Shall Become One Flesh on Mar 19, 2021 12:40 pm
I had been waiting for this update and wow! This was such an interesting chapter. I'm extremely excited for what's to come!
Author's Response: Ohhh, thank you so much! I'm really happy that you liked the chapter. I've already written the next one, but, unfortunately, the site seems to be having a problem. Somehow, I dont have the permission to post the chapter =(
Well, let's hope for the best and wait everything to work again! I hope to continue seeing you here!
Thanks again!