Reviews For Ashen
Name: quirky_vixen reviewed Occlumency on May 15, 2021 11:21 am
Wow! What a thrilling chapter! The dance between Draco and Ginny is everything and I am really looking forward to their lessons together.
Also, what a clever plot twist! I never saw that coming at all! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter :D

Author's Response: hello, dear! Thank you for your words, you're so supportive! I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far! Yes! I've started to write their next lessons! It's soooo fun. Your wait will come to an end soon since I'm already editing the next chapter. Thank you so much, really
Name: NTA123 reviewed Occlumency on May 13, 2021 12:25 pm
Btw Draco likes feet? Oh...okay...
*no kink shaming here though.*

Author's Response: Who would have guessed that Draco would've a special fondness for the feet section on OnlyFans, hahaha One more time, tahnk you for your time and your disposition to share your thoughts. They are very dear to me. Hope you can be a little happier with the fact that the next chapter is already coming See ya soon, my dear
Name: NTA123 reviewed Occlumency on May 13, 2021 12:24 pm
The chemistry is shifting between our most favourite couple.
I want Draco and James to interact more. Their meetings are cute and funny in a weird way XD

* Personal wish: I want James to support Draco or like him more, or just want him as his dad when Harry will be back which he'll be obviously. (from whichever hell-hole he is in).

Author's Response: Indeed, it is! Things are warming up! They started to acknowledge their connection, even it's solely based on lust right now. (or so they think) How could I deny a wish of yours? There will be more interactions between Draco and James, I promise. Maybe it will take a little longer because I need to set up a new development (you'll see soon in the next chapter)
Name: NTA123 reviewed Occlumency on May 13, 2021 12:18 pm
I am sorry for the last review.
They just only had to tell Ginny and made the strongest vow. That's it. I mean they are not like regular humans! They would be compelled to keep it a secret.

Author's Response: No reason to be sorry, my dear. I love your comments. In my mind, the reason they didn't tell Ginny anything isn't linked to the fact that she wouldn't have kept the secret Harry was alive. I'm pretty sure she would, as Ginny is extremely reliable and loyal. I think Ron and Hermione's decision has more to do with the fact that they know - as we do - that Ginny would wait for Harry as long as it was necessary. And what chance of happiness and safety would she have, being stuck with someone who might never wake up again? Certainly, it wasn't their decision to make and they were extremely pretentious and sneaky, like good martyrs they are. But, when they weren't in the books, right? Especially Ron (and Harry himself)
Name: NTA123 reviewed Occlumency on May 13, 2021 12:16 pm
NO ONE has the right to judge Ginny. Not her family, her friends, the good side, ANYONE.
Ron is a great friend but he has failed as a brother and an uncle.
No matter how bad things are, just telling Ginny that Harry is alive, would have been okay.
No excuse here!
Even as a writer if you want to present a side for the Trio, I will not agree with you.
I am officially done with the trio.

Author's Response: I totally understand you, I swear. And that was my intention, to show the golden trio is also formed by humans and that they will make mistakes and screw things up. But don't be upset. Think that it was Ron and Hermione's actions (and later Harry's, I suppose) that will make Ginny get even closer to Draco. And you're right too! No one has the right to judge Ginny! Maybe Draco, who was her victim, but she did her best with the information she had at the time.
Name: NTA123 reviewed Occlumency on May 13, 2021 12:12 pm
Stunned

Author's Response: I love your reactions, haha, I really do.

Author's Response: I love your reactions, haha, I really do.
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