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Name: Ksumm reviewed Draco Dormiens Nunquan Titillandos on Aug 14, 2021 09:10 am
That... that was just evil..*crushes coke can in fist*

please don't prolong my pain! Also, I'm really ready to see the more gentle side of Draco, even if it's just a glimpse!

Author's Response: hahahaha, I'm sorry I ruined your drink, it wasn't my intention. To redeem me, the next chapter is ready and should be up soon. and to further reward your suffering, we'll see more of Draco's gentle side as well as get inside his head! I can't wait to show you more how he thinks! Thanks for the comment! It was very kind and I loved it see ya very soon
Name: app reviewed Draco Dormiens Nunquan Titillandos on Aug 12, 2021 04:43 pm
holy mother of god

i'm so suspicious of olivia, and can't even be annoyed at ginny for being stupid i'd probably do something similar this world of hers is so confusing

Author's Response: hahahah, breath! Dont be suspicious of Olivia, please, haha. She's only a woman trying to protect her husband and herself. Not sooo different from Ginny. Yes! It might seem easy to judge Ginny (she was a bit of an idiot anyway), but in her situation, it's not such a hard thing to make mistakes. She is struggling to protect her children, and misses and hits through the path. She's very human. Thank you so much for your words, they were very kind. Hope you keep enjoying the story see ya very soon
Name: NTA123 reviewed Draco Dormiens Nunquan Titillandos on Aug 11, 2021 07:23 am
I am sorry but Ginny was a bit...asking for it to happen.
I am worried about Draco jr but I caanot say the same for Ginny.
Given all her flaws being realistic and all...Ginny is quite annoying, no?

Author's Response: yes, she is hahaha Of course, I'm saying this from the comfort of my couch, safe and sound. She's a big pain in the neck with some things, but I couldn't say that I'd act differently in her shoes. She's a mother and is trying to protect her children. She kind of sacrificed herself to protect James. And she can only think about her new baby, not even about herself. She was dumb, sure, but I think stressful situations tend to bring out our dumber side, haha Oh, dear, I LOVE your comments, really. Thank you for everything you've been doing for this story. Hope you continue enjoying it! See ya very soon
Name: NTA123 reviewed Draco Dormiens Nunquan Titillandos on Aug 11, 2021 07:20 am
I think Draco will come to save Ginny. She might need a doc. And then he will know!

Author's Response: I think he will, right? I cannot resist the cliche of the gentleman saving the girl. About him finding out... It's not now, hahaha. Sorry to disappoint you, but it will really take a while. I REALLY need to develop some points before it. I dont want them to approach because of a child and I think you dont want it as well. It's so... forceful, maybe? I need them to become closer by themselves.
Name: NTA123 reviewed Draco Dormiens Nunquan Titillandos on Aug 11, 2021 07:18 am
This character Mrs. Olivia, she is quite interesting. But is she good, or bad? Good for whom and bqd for whom? Is she and her husband secret spies for Trashos I mean Duo and team (You know who I mean)? Or is she baiting Ginny?
Also, where and who is her husband?? Is he involved with whatever she is doing?
I mean it seems he is at a very top post. Yet, he is only mentioned by others. Never read him talk or anything.

Author's Response: Ah, I really enjoy writing Olivia. I imagine she is what Ginny would become after a few years of living in that society. Someone who, despite having their own ideas and convictions, has adapted to the rules of the game. She's a good person and really can relate to Ginny, even though she's not sure why exactly at this point. Her husband is the Minister for Magic, but he's being controlled, that's why Olivia has to fight to be the sweet and perfect wife, so they don't harm her husband. I suppose he will appear more as the story progresses. (I always laugh at the depth of your resentment towards the golden trio. And you're not alone in this, hahaha)
Name: NTA123 reviewed Draco Dormiens Nunquan Titillandos on Aug 11, 2021 07:12 am
Ginny had so many chances to reveal her pregnancy to Draco!!
*groans*

Author's Response: Yes, this is true. But remember, she is VERY frightened mother-to-be, alone, with no one to support her. I think in this case her first maternal instinct is to hide because secrecy means safety. I'm sorry for her, in fact
Name: NTA123 reviewed Draco Dormiens Nunquan Titillandos on Aug 11, 2021 07:11 am
I slapped my forehead reading this chapter.
#Fact

Author's Response: hahahaha, I'm not sure why but I really could visualize you doing that! =P
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