Reviews For Ashen
Name: Ksumm reviewed Under Pressure on Nov 08, 2021 05:58 pm
Thanks for updating!!! You most certainly delivered when I wanted to see a more gentle side of Draco... I am just loving the character development between these two. Oh and goyle... what a creeper!

Author's Response: Yes, Goyle IS a creeper. I have half a mind he's the true villain of this story. We shall see what the future holds, haha Thank you for commenting, dear. It's very special to me. See ya very soon,
Name: NTA123 reviewed Under Pressure on Nov 08, 2021 10:56 am
Draco will be on a trip!
Will Ginny be able to tell him sooner?? I am gettin nervous!!! Argggghhhhh....
I just don't want Ginny to go through this pregnancy alone! She does not even have her fam with her.
This is so scary!!

Author's Response: hahahah, Draco will be away for a while, but I promise you she will tell him before it's too late. Dont be nervous! Yes, absolutley scary! I would not do that with our favorite girl! (and baby)
Name: NTA123 reviewed Under Pressure on Nov 08, 2021 10:52 am
What is Lestrange's issue? Yeah I know power play politics etc. But why is he so bothered? He is not young. He is childless. So, no heir (pureblood's most favorite treasure *gross*). Then what's he gonna do with Draco's position?!
Nuisance!
Name: NTA123 reviewed Under Pressure on Nov 08, 2021 10:48 am
Tbh I think Lestrange is one of the biggest loser/useless fellows in fiction. Atleast in those I have ever read. Like why does he even exist? What's his purpose? Why a character like Bellatrix is married to him?! Ok, pure-blood rules and all. But why stayed married after that?

Author's Response: I completely agree! I tried to give him more relevance because he is Draco's uncle but MAN, it's hard, haha Even more after the Cursed Child (sometimes I want to forget this thing exists), where we see that the 'connection' between Bellatrix and Voldy was much more... ahem, deep that we thought first.
Name: NTA123 reviewed Under Pressure on Nov 08, 2021 10:43 am
I really liked Ginny's perspective here. And she acted really well.
Though I do not know why I imagined Voldy dancing in the black tutu this whole time! Don't ask me why. It might be that time of the month( mine has always been irregular) (sorry for the tmi) *awkward*

Author's Response: I was kinda afraid of this chapter because writing Voldemort is bloody difficult! Everytime I have to make sure it's not too over or too bland. Glad you enjoyed it. OHHHMY now I cannot take this imagem of my head, THANK YOU hahhaha black tutu! I'm laughing so hard right now. I'll never see him the same way

Author's Response: I was kinda afraid of this chapter because writing Voldemort is bloody difficult! Everytime I have to make sure it's not too over or too bland. Glad you enjoyed it. OHHHMY now I cannot take this imagem of my head, THANK YOU hahhaha black tutu! I'm laughing so hard right now. I'll never see him the same way
Name: NTA123 reviewed Under Pressure on Nov 08, 2021 10:40 am
I am so glad Mommy Weasley and Ginny met. I truly hope she does not have to go through this pregnancy alone. I am worried about her mental and physical health. Emotional health too.

Author's Response: Hello, dear. You know, the scene between Molly and Ginny is one of these kind of things I did not know that I needed until it is alive in front of me. I think I miss my mum, hahaha (living in two different continents right now) Yes, I agree. Nobody should be alone in a pregnancy. It will be corrected very soon.
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