Name: Harvey Harfblah reviewed
Memoria in Aeterna on Jul 21, 2004 05:18 am
Feelings about this story:
It was like the bastard child of Raymond Carver-- like Ray Carver meets Fitzgerald.
I think the main character had a sort of Holden Caulfield bent crossed with Humbert Humbert, and then in that sort of pseudo-Russian-novel ilk. I think it's Phabala's best work to date.
Name: Nokomis reviewed
Memoria in Aeterna on Jul 20, 2004 02:01 pm
Ooh, this was wonderful! The imagery and tone of the mental ward were pefect, and Ginny's progressively unstable thoughts and behaviours as the solstice approached was chilling. The ambiguity of the ending was fabulous. I especially loved Draco mourning who Ginny had been before he had cleaved her memories of Tom. Excellent, excellent story!
Name: Sindergirl reviewed
Memoria in Aeterna on Jul 20, 2004 05:50 am
Wow, that was amazing, I love your imagery and the way you portrayed Ginny's personality. It was so sad though at the end, I don't know whether she's better or worse off. I love the way you write, so write more soon.