Name: Kisou reviewed Chapter Six on May 23, 2006 10:34 am

It would be really nice if you could stop using the term "luv". I understand that is does have a slightly different feeling, but it, frankly, isn't a word and net speak isn't actually allowed on this archive.

Besides that, though, the story is coming across quite nicely.


Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review. I'm afraid I'll be continuing to use 'luv' though. It's a term of endearment, and I don't think of it as having the same meaning or sound as 'love. I'm sorry it bothers you. And no offense, but if it wasn't allowed on the archive, they'd have told me that during one of my many chapter submissions.