Name: tulzdavampslayer reviewed Invasion on Jun 09, 2005 05:05 am

omg! they're in the castle! everybody... run? hide? snog? yes! everybody snog!!!! ...what?

Name: Esus reviewed Invasion on Oct 18, 2004 10:32 am

So, here I am. Happy to see me? I hope so ^_^. Well, let's start.

Startled by this revelation, Ginny replayed the entire conversation in her mind. She realized that his jaw had been clenched angrily while she questioned him. In fact, a muscle in his cheek had twitched when she accused him of being a Death Eater. He had obviously been impeding a reaction to her words, but why?

Well, finally Ginny starts to use her brain. She jumped to conclusion and it's obvious that someone like Draco Malfoy simply stared at her, without saying a word. And, wonderful, she noticed the same thing I did: so, do you want to tell us why the ferret was outside after curfew? I can't believe he was doing some Dead Eater stuff!
Uh, yes... where was Blaise? Really, I focused only on Draco, completely forgetting about him. Mmm... it's strange, very strange.
And, Hermione's insinuation to the two guys... why she was speaking of "time left"? What's happening? Someone is going to attack Hogwarts and so they will have to go away? I mean, yes, the Dream Team probably knew what McGonagall was going to ask them, but I don't think it only that.

You are thinking about something... I feel it.

Hermione's invitation to lunch, instead, was a good thing. I mean, I still don't like them and their behaviour, but, at least, she acted civilly with Ginny, even if she wasn't obliged to. And, also, I liked her when she scolded Harry: this is the real Hermione. Probably was her last behaviour that didn't convince me *mumble*

So, this is another good chapter. The only think that didn't seemed good to me was the incipit. Yes, it was well written and represented well a moment in the common room. But it seemed a little forced... just something you put to complete the chapter. Instead, I liked Ginny's meditation in front of the window: she found out a lot of things that interested me too. But, probably it's time to her to act... too much thinking doesn't suit her well (even if, she often make only a big mess ^_-).

Well, I want to see what is going to happen next: enemies in the castle and probably Ginny will run towards Draco and Blaise... am I wrong?

Name: Sarah reviewed Invasion on Oct 17, 2004 05:18 am

Wow. Brilliant story. All the things that have happened thus far are great. I love the confused and angry Ginny you got going on there, I can really feel the desperate lonliness that is going on there. What is Hermione playing at, making her sit with them and then again at the end for the da? I would really like to know what is going through their heads and all. Especially with Blaise and Draco. Loved the cookie, and cant wait for the next update. Cheers!

Name: beads reviewed Invasion on Oct 16, 2004 08:35 am

Make us wait in suspense for nearly a month, and then leave us with a cliffie?! Unfair, unfair! Just make sure we don't have to wait another month for the next chapter, though this story would be worth it..

Name: draco li'l hottie reviewed Invasion on Oct 15, 2004 02:49 pm

hahaha another cliffie! -gasps- too unfair PLEASE update soon really good story