Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Mar 06, 2006 03:53 pm
NOOO!!!!
Name: tulzdavampslayer reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Jun 09, 2005 05:18 am
omg. Fred... Fred, a Death Eater? Without George? Now there's a turnout for the books... and Pansy's dead. And fought for Hogwarts.
And Goyle fought for Hogwarts too.
sniff!
Name: Shortie xx Lor reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Jan 01, 2005 11:56 pm
As you said lots of people thought Ginny died. I didn't but I didn't realize that Draco was trying to save her so I was quite outraged but even more delighted when the lightbulb turned on. I was very surprised when none of the Weasleys were there and I thought I would weep when I found out Fred was gone, I had had an itching feeling something like this would happen when George asked about him. A Very big loss to the Weasley family, poor George will be walking around like he's missing half his body. Anyways as always a great addition to a fab story. Can't wait for updates!
Name: Talie reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Dec 22, 2004 09:22 pm
omygoshomygoshomygosh.i love this story, it absolutley AMAZING. i couldn't stop reading it, i think it took me a good hour and a 1/2 to read everything up to this.and i just loved how you portrayed all the characters and the FEELINGS. jesus you had my heart clenching at certain parts and i felt like giggling at other. excellent job :)
Name: Brittany reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Dec 22, 2004 04:30 pm
Why Fred? If you had to kill one of her brothers, why not Percy? No one liked him! Even George would have been better than Fred!
Other than that, it was really good.
Name: Audrey reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Dec 22, 2004 12:33 pm
Wow this story is AMAZING! I can't believe that so many people Ginny knew and loved died. Write more asap!!!!!
Name: Esus reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Dec 22, 2004 06:59 am
/me gives you a *really* big hug
Dear, this chapter now is really good! Believe me, reading it I've changed completely my mind: now it's nearly perfect, especially compared with the first version.
The dialogue at the beginning was good: you mixed well the hints and her visions (and I see that no-one's still noticed the IMPORTANT hint that you leave there... *evil grin*), revealing us that Voldemort was defeated. But, still, there are a lot of question un-answered...
Than, I liked you way of following Ginny's confused mind: her wondering about her family, her reflexions about Draco (may I tell you a couple of words little Slytherin? Really, you must improve on you public image, everyone here is starting thinking that you have betrayed her! - Me)... she really thinks that he tried to kill her? How stupid of her! I mean, she is a smart girl, but about feelings she is like a blind child!
And so, I have a lot of questions too: where are the Weasleys? And the wonderful Trio? and, how coul Voldemort be defeated by a sword (even if it was Griffyndor's one)?
Last, good end: now it was the right end for the climax that you built during the chapter: her awakening, the dialogue, Lupin injuried and her curiosity drive us to the discovers of the deads' chamber. Now, you have to write soon the next chapter!
Name: Lovely Lioness reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Dec 22, 2004 05:58 am
NO! No no no no no. How could you kill Fred? And Luna and Neville and ARGH! *sniff* I was so excited when I saw you'd updated! And now I'm dying for more more more! How could you end there! All I can say is thank god I'll be on the road for the next week because otherwise I'd be obsessivly checking the site for any sort of update. And how could Ginny think Draco tried to kill her???? Doesn't she remember the thing against her leg?? (i was really flattered, by the way, that you used my review). PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update really soon! If you celebrate Christmas think of it as a christmas gift to your reviewers! Or a late hanukkah (I'm sorry if it's spelled wrong!) present, if that's what you celebrate! I LOVE your story, so please please please please update soon. Love it - The Lovely Lioness
Name: beads reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Dec 21, 2004 05:37 pm
Argh! You must REALLY enjoy torturing us so! Your stories are so good but the chapters aren't NEARLY long enough! C'mon, we're more important than school! You should write more for your loyal fans!
Just kidding. It was a good chapter, but it was horrible of you to leave us like that! Update SOON.
Name: mynameisbob reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Dec 21, 2004 02:03 pm
*sob* how sad! i can't imagine how george feels.....please, update soon
Name: Shalei reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Dec 21, 2004 10:51 am
Hey Jawy! Tis your rommie from FAP!
Now that you've loads of time on 'On Fire', please do come by at FictionAlley and enlighten us there :D Or maybe update your GJ or your LJ :D
About the note:
You are a perfectionist then? It's not wrong especially if your perfectionist skills is for Draco and Ginny, that would be a really lovely talent.
And then I've read the new chapter and yes, you really are one.
Good job, mate!
Anyway, will watch the fic for updates.
-Shalei (Do you remember me? I'm from FAP, your roommate, right?)