Reviews For On Fire
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Aftermath, Pt. 2: Mourning on Mar 06, 2006 04:02 pm
I almost hate you right now, and I actually shed tears when Ginny said goodbye to Fred and Blaise.

You are evil.
Name: tulzdavampslayer reviewed Aftermath, Pt. 2: Mourning on Jun 09, 2005 05:24 am
you know you really confuzzled me with the "affiliations" things on the tags... pfft. and... Harry's dead. oh well. ... ...oops, sorry OMGWTFLOLBBQ no I can't seem to get myself to care. Draco's alive, in the infirmary. I'm much more interested in that. No I am not selfish. *refuses to share him with Ginny*
Name: Nikita reviewed Aftermath, Pt. 2: Mourning on Jan 03, 2005 01:43 pm
This is really awesome!!! Keep up the good work!!! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please update asap!!!
Name: Esus reviewed Aftermath, Pt. 2: Mourning on Jan 03, 2005 05:37 am
Tesoro, you have already posted the chapter... I can't believe that! But I can easily understand how you feel now and why you need to write your emotions in some way. So don't blame yourself or don't think of you as strange (I'm referring to your reply in the journal), because is normal to react in this way.
But, let's talk about the chapter. I can feel your soul under Ginny's thoughts and all the chapter is full of sadness. It is realistic, obviously, especially when she thought about her brother. Believe me, I could really imagine her standing near him and I can see her memories, too!
But in the speech she made to Blaise, I feel you left some others emotions. In the first version, Ginny was more sarcastic and angry... it would fit better her temper, as you created her. You know, she spent a lot of time with the best type of Slyterin... and, she should be really angry against them! Yes, you put some rage against the two, but it is a little detached from her sadness... and I'm not speaking about her guilty. Yes, she clearly admit it, but doing so, this loses some strenght: it would be better if you leave it to the reader to understand...
But, don't think that I dind'nt like it, because it would be untrue. Really, you made a great job here and I'm only sorry that for doing that you had to pass throught a moment so hard ç_ç.
Coming back to the chapter... why no-one ask you why little Draco, the most famous Death Eater after Voldemort and his own father, was there? (I kept this question, in order to use it in the review, I admit it :P!). And I've got my personal idea about the object drop on Ginny's bed... *evil grin*
About Harry's murderer, I keep my mounth shut: I've got an hypothesis, but I need just some others elements to make it believable...
Last: now I'm really looking forward the moment in which Draco and Ginny would face each other. And I've a big question... seeing that poor Draco (darling, I love you even if you are really a b*****d sometimes) stands to Hogwarts' part, and clearly remembering Blaise tags (people, look at what the tags says about him, his father and mother!), how could deal Ginny with her lack of trust towards him?
Name: Cammy reviewed Aftermath, Pt. 2: Mourning on Jan 02, 2005 09:44 pm
You've have done such a wonderful job so far!! it's good to read a fanfic that isnt all about the mushy stuff! all ur stories had me hanging off the edge of my seat...and that was so sad! Harry AND Fred are Dead...ahh sadness...haha...
Name: th3daysgrace reviewed Aftermath, Pt. 2: Mourning on Jan 02, 2005 10:18 am
Aww man! Another cliffie. That was mean. I'm sorry about your grandmother. Great chapter, update soon please!
Name: Lovely Lioness reviewed Aftermath, Pt. 2: Mourning on Jan 02, 2005 09:46 am
*sob* NO! Too many dead! *sniffles*. Wonderful chapter. Far too sad. And now Harry's dead! GAH! My thoughts are all muddled up at the moment. Must go sort through them. I might produce a more coherent review afterwards. Lovely but horrifically sad chapter - You did a brilliant job with Ginny's thoughts over blaise and fred and so forth - I love this story! PLEASE update just as quickly as you did this time! - The Lovely Lioness
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