Name: Esus reviewed Loyalties on Nov 04, 2004 10:06 pm

Ginny wanted to cry out with anguish and regret. She had been steeling herself against them the entire week, but this moment had forced her to acknowledge the side they had chosen. However, Ginny’s brain still refused to accept this.
Strange how everything seems different when serious things happen. It's stupid to argue with people you love for matters that aren't so important... instead of thinking about the real important things. How could she accept to fight against them? Against her best friend and the man she loves? If I were her, I would have really an hard time. But, certain things are the right to do, even if they destroy your heart and your soul. So, probably me too would fight against them.
You put a lot of good hints for reflection in this chapter *mumble*
It hurt me seeing Harry's lack of confidence towards Ginny and the betrayal perpetrated by one of the two slytherin guys (well, I'm almost convinced about Blaise's fault, but I can't exclude Draco... maybe he had to reveal it in order to save his life)... or, maybe someone else heard them talking? Someone was spying them? LOL... I'm making a lot of hypothesis and maybe the answer is here, under my eyes!
You made a strange description of the battle: a mix between emotions, hurts and love. Ginny met her brothers (I hope you aren't going to destroy all her family °°), stupefy Dead Eaters and hate Blaise and Draco (but she still love her). Good job about it and I liked the image of Griffyndor bravery that came back and fell in her stomach. Probably it's for that that Harry was put in Gryffindor, after all: maybe he's got a slytherin mind, but he has bravery: his courage makes possible the world's saving.
And the end of the chapter... you know you're an evil girl? A cliffhanger like that, here! After all that emotions! You want me to die, waiting for the next chapter ç_ç!
But,, really, you made a *damned good* job... I love this chapter!

Name: nani51 reviewed Loyalties on Oct 31, 2004 12:13 pm

you are pure evil that is the best/worse cliffy ever EVIL!!!

Name: beads reviewed Loyalties on Oct 31, 2004 10:23 am

More, more. Now! You'd better not take forever in getting it out, because not only will I kill you, but myself in the process because then I would never know what happened. Write, write, write right now!

Name: Sarah reviewed Loyalties on Oct 31, 2004 08:28 am

write more. now. i love this story so much and i cant wait for more.

Name: Esus reviewed Invasion on Oct 18, 2004 10:32 am

So, here I am. Happy to see me? I hope so ^_^. Well, let's start.

Startled by this revelation, Ginny replayed the entire conversation in her mind. She realized that his jaw had been clenched angrily while she questioned him. In fact, a muscle in his cheek had twitched when she accused him of being a Death Eater. He had obviously been impeding a reaction to her words, but why?

Well, finally Ginny starts to use her brain. She jumped to conclusion and it's obvious that someone like Draco Malfoy simply stared at her, without saying a word. And, wonderful, she noticed the same thing I did: so, do you want to tell us why the ferret was outside after curfew? I can't believe he was doing some Dead Eater stuff!
Uh, yes... where was Blaise? Really, I focused only on Draco, completely forgetting about him. Mmm... it's strange, very strange.
And, Hermione's insinuation to the two guys... why she was speaking of "time left"? What's happening? Someone is going to attack Hogwarts and so they will have to go away? I mean, yes, the Dream Team probably knew what McGonagall was going to ask them, but I don't think it only that.

You are thinking about something... I feel it.

Hermione's invitation to lunch, instead, was a good thing. I mean, I still don't like them and their behaviour, but, at least, she acted civilly with Ginny, even if she wasn't obliged to. And, also, I liked her when she scolded Harry: this is the real Hermione. Probably was her last behaviour that didn't convince me *mumble*

So, this is another good chapter. The only think that didn't seemed good to me was the incipit. Yes, it was well written and represented well a moment in the common room. But it seemed a little forced... just something you put to complete the chapter. Instead, I liked Ginny's meditation in front of the window: she found out a lot of things that interested me too. But, probably it's time to her to act... too much thinking doesn't suit her well (even if, she often make only a big mess ^_-).

Well, I want to see what is going to happen next: enemies in the castle and probably Ginny will run towards Draco and Blaise... am I wrong?

Name: Sarah reviewed Invasion on Oct 17, 2004 05:18 am

Wow. Brilliant story. All the things that have happened thus far are great. I love the confused and angry Ginny you got going on there, I can really feel the desperate lonliness that is going on there. What is Hermione playing at, making her sit with them and then again at the end for the da? I would really like to know what is going through their heads and all. Especially with Blaise and Draco. Loved the cookie, and cant wait for the next update. Cheers!

Name: beads reviewed Invasion on Oct 16, 2004 08:35 am

Make us wait in suspense for nearly a month, and then leave us with a cliffie?! Unfair, unfair! Just make sure we don't have to wait another month for the next chapter, though this story would be worth it..

Name: draco li'l hottie reviewed Invasion on Oct 15, 2004 02:49 pm

hahaha another cliffie! -gasps- too unfair PLEASE update soon really good story

Name: lovely lioness reviewed Tears on Oct 08, 2004 06:29 am

I can't believe I forgot to review for this chapter! So sorry. In desparate need of more D/G!!!! Please ??? Pretty please ??? And it's Draco and Blaise they were talking about wasn't it??? So yes, they're death eaters, but like Snape!!! The IRONY!!! Please update soon! All my fav. authors have come to a standstill in their stories, because of school, I know, but still!!!! I'M DESPARATE!!! So I'm returning to my hands and knees to beg for a) a quick update, and b) some D/G action. Great chapter, loved the confused Gin-The Lovely Lioness

Name: luthien ringgerl reviewed Tears on Sep 27, 2004 10:37 am

good

Name: luthien ringgerl reviewed Tears on Sep 26, 2004 02:52 pm

right more and ill be happy~!~

Name: Ginerva reviewed Tears on Sep 25, 2004 09:51 am

wow that was awesome i was crying i was feeling Ginny's emotions it was perfect. Keep up the good work and update asap.