Name: EnchantedBelle reviewed
Draco's Detour on Feb 02, 2005 07:49 pm
I found it thanks to you for sending me the link in yahoo groups! =] I was almost tearing up when I was reading that and yeah. I am glad to see that Ginny will have to do some growing up. :] Hopefully the next time she sees Draco she can be a lil hard on him as well. Well imma go now cuz I have to go to bed. Hope to hear an update from you! Bye!
Name: beads reviewed
Draco's Detour on Feb 02, 2005 01:48 pm
Meh.. Poor Ginny.. And Draco.. And Blaise.. I nearly started crying, and now that I have time to actually think about it, I think I just might cry. Delayed reaction, yes, but I feel like it.
Wonderful chapter. I really wish her eyes had opened when he started to walk away and said something, but I'm sure it's for the best.
Update again soon! Sorry the review is so late. Finally found the chapter, aheh.
Name: Cammee reviewed
Draco's Detour on Feb 01, 2005 05:16 pm
Awwww...that was so sad...the guy that loved her dead...the guy she loved hates her...and harry dead...wut mroe is to come??
GREAT JOB!! hehe
Name: potatomaker reviewed
Draco's Detour on Feb 01, 2005 12:58 pm
Oh my, poor Ginny. You're right, she does have some growing up to do and I'm glad that you're taking your time with this story. Each of your characters are so well drawn but mysterious at the same time. I love your Draco and I hope we see more of him soon. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. I can't wait to find out what else you have planned.
Name: dracosslytheringal reviewed
Draco's Detour on Feb 01, 2005 12:26 pm
Wow amazing what a few changes will do. The chapter is even better than when I betaed it - love what you did with it! Can't wait for the next one - oh and I think Draco was much more believable this way!
Name: Elena Malfoy reviewed
Draco's Detour on Feb 01, 2005 10:07 am
It's so sad. *sniffles* I need to control myself. Great job.
Name: imelda reviewed
Draco's Detour on Jan 31, 2005 04:20 pm
Why didn't she SAY anything???!! Arrghh!
And oh...my poor Blaise.
Name: Nikita reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 2: Mourning on Jan 03, 2005 01:43 pm
This is really awesome!!! Keep up the good work!!! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please update asap!!!
Name: Esus reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 2: Mourning on Jan 03, 2005 05:37 am
Tesoro, you have already posted the chapter... I can't believe that! But I can easily understand how you feel now and why you need to write your emotions in some way. So don't blame yourself or don't think of you as strange (I'm referring to your reply in the journal), because is normal to react in this way.
But, let's talk about the chapter. I can feel your soul under Ginny's thoughts and all the chapter is full of sadness. It is realistic, obviously, especially when she thought about her brother. Believe me, I could really imagine her standing near him and I can see her memories, too!
But in the speech she made to Blaise, I feel you left some others emotions. In the first version, Ginny was more sarcastic and angry... it would fit better her temper, as you created her. You know, she spent a lot of time with the best type of Slyterin... and, she should be really angry against them! Yes, you put some rage against the two, but it is a little detached from her sadness... and I'm not speaking about her guilty. Yes, she clearly admit it, but doing so, this loses some strenght: it would be better if you leave it to the reader to understand...
But, don't think that I dind'nt like it, because it would be untrue. Really, you made a great job here and I'm only sorry that for doing that you had to pass throught a moment so hard ç_ç.
Coming back to the chapter... why no-one ask you why little Draco, the most famous Death Eater after Voldemort and his own father, was there? (I kept this question, in order to use it in the review, I admit it :P!). And I've got my personal idea about the object drop on Ginny's bed... *evil grin*
About Harry's murderer, I keep my mounth shut: I've got an hypothesis, but I need just some others elements to make it believable...
Last: now I'm really looking forward the moment in which Draco and Ginny would face each other. And I've a big question... seeing that poor Draco (darling, I love you even if you are really a b*****d sometimes) stands to Hogwarts' part, and clearly remembering Blaise tags (people, look at what the tags says about him, his father and mother!), how could deal Ginny with her lack of trust towards him?
Name: Cammy reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 2: Mourning on Jan 02, 2005 09:44 pm
You've have done such a wonderful job so far!! it's good to read a fanfic that isnt all about the mushy stuff! all ur stories had me hanging off the edge of my seat...and that was so sad! Harry AND Fred are Dead...ahh sadness...haha...
Name: th3daysgrace reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 2: Mourning on Jan 02, 2005 10:18 am
Aww man! Another cliffie. That was mean. I'm sorry about your grandmother. Great chapter, update soon please!
Name: Lovely Lioness reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 2: Mourning on Jan 02, 2005 09:46 am
*sob* NO! Too many dead! *sniffles*. Wonderful chapter. Far too sad. And now Harry's dead! GAH! My thoughts are all muddled up at the moment. Must go sort through them. I might produce a more coherent review afterwards. Lovely but horrifically sad chapter - You did a brilliant job with Ginny's thoughts over blaise and fred and so forth - I love this story! PLEASE update just as quickly as you did this time! - The Lovely Lioness
Name: Shortie xx Lor reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Jan 01, 2005 11:56 pm
As you said lots of people thought Ginny died. I didn't but I didn't realize that Draco was trying to save her so I was quite outraged but even more delighted when the lightbulb turned on. I was very surprised when none of the Weasleys were there and I thought I would weep when I found out Fred was gone, I had had an itching feeling something like this would happen when George asked about him. A Very big loss to the Weasley family, poor George will be walking around like he's missing half his body. Anyways as always a great addition to a fab story. Can't wait for updates!
Name: Talie reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Dec 22, 2004 09:22 pm
omygoshomygoshomygosh.i love this story, it absolutley AMAZING. i couldn't stop reading it, i think it took me a good hour and a 1/2 to read everything up to this.and i just loved how you portrayed all the characters and the FEELINGS. jesus you had my heart clenching at certain parts and i felt like giggling at other. excellent job :)
Name: Brittany reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Dec 22, 2004 04:30 pm
Why Fred? If you had to kill one of her brothers, why not Percy? No one liked him! Even George would have been better than Fred!
Other than that, it was really good.
Name: Audrey reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Dec 22, 2004 12:33 pm
Wow this story is AMAZING! I can't believe that so many people Ginny knew and loved died. Write more asap!!!!!
Name: Esus reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Dec 22, 2004 06:59 am
/me gives you a *really* big hug
Dear, this chapter now is really good! Believe me, reading it I've changed completely my mind: now it's nearly perfect, especially compared with the first version.
The dialogue at the beginning was good: you mixed well the hints and her visions (and I see that no-one's still noticed the IMPORTANT hint that you leave there... *evil grin*), revealing us that Voldemort was defeated. But, still, there are a lot of question un-answered...
Than, I liked you way of following Ginny's confused mind: her wondering about her family, her reflexions about Draco (may I tell you a couple of words little Slytherin? Really, you must improve on you public image, everyone here is starting thinking that you have betrayed her! - Me)... she really thinks that he tried to kill her? How stupid of her! I mean, she is a smart girl, but about feelings she is like a blind child!
And so, I have a lot of questions too: where are the Weasleys? And the wonderful Trio? and, how coul Voldemort be defeated by a sword (even if it was Griffyndor's one)?
Last, good end: now it was the right end for the climax that you built during the chapter: her awakening, the dialogue, Lupin injuried and her curiosity drive us to the discovers of the deads' chamber. Now, you have to write soon the next chapter!
Name: Lovely Lioness reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Dec 22, 2004 05:58 am
NO! No no no no no. How could you kill Fred? And Luna and Neville and ARGH! *sniff* I was so excited when I saw you'd updated! And now I'm dying for more more more! How could you end there! All I can say is thank god I'll be on the road for the next week because otherwise I'd be obsessivly checking the site for any sort of update. And how could Ginny think Draco tried to kill her???? Doesn't she remember the thing against her leg?? (i was really flattered, by the way, that you used my review). PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update really soon! If you celebrate Christmas think of it as a christmas gift to your reviewers! Or a late hanukkah (I'm sorry if it's spelled wrong!) present, if that's what you celebrate! I LOVE your story, so please please please please update soon. Love it - The Lovely Lioness
Name: beads reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Dec 21, 2004 05:37 pm
Argh! You must REALLY enjoy torturing us so! Your stories are so good but the chapters aren't NEARLY long enough! C'mon, we're more important than school! You should write more for your loyal fans!
Just kidding. It was a good chapter, but it was horrible of you to leave us like that! Update SOON.
Name: mynameisbob reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Dec 21, 2004 02:03 pm
*sob* how sad! i can't imagine how george feels.....please, update soon
Name: Shalei reviewed
Aftermath, Pt. 1: Death on Dec 21, 2004 10:51 am
Hey Jawy! Tis your rommie from FAP!
Now that you've loads of time on 'On Fire', please do come by at FictionAlley and enlighten us there :D Or maybe update your GJ or your LJ :D
About the note:
You are a perfectionist then? It's not wrong especially if your perfectionist skills is for Draco and Ginny, that would be a really lovely talent.
And then I've read the new chapter and yes, you really are one.
Good job, mate!
Anyway, will watch the fic for updates.
-Shalei (Do you remember me? I'm from FAP, your roommate, right?)
Name: lovely lioness reviewed
Loyalties on Dec 09, 2004 07:26 am
where are you!!!! I wanna know what happens!!! PLEASE tell me you'll be updating soon! Did Draco save her? What happens with the Ron killing Blaise thing? Is Ginny okay??? You might find me lurking around your LJ if I get too desparate. . . JK. I wouldn't do that, but I would want to. -The Lovely Lioness
Name: Sammy reviewed
Loyalties on Nov 24, 2004 08:38 pm
ARGHHHH!H!!!H!H!H!H! Can't wait. Please, please hurry. So good. But hurrrrrrrrryy!!!!
Name: imelda reviewed
Loyalties on Nov 24, 2004 07:41 pm
Oh my god. I'm nearly crying...that was so awful, I can't believe you would leave us hanging like that.
I loved how this fic began (though I think your writing got better as it went on), and I miss the idyllic, carefree days of G, B and D's platonic trio. I don't know what the state of things are now, i don't even have any theories. You've let us down so many twists and turns in the story that I never know what to expect. For most of the story I was sure that the boys were good (after all, Harry was kind of mad there for a while, wasn't he?), because I trusted Ginny's judgement and, well, I trusted them. But after this...even if it somehow turns out that it was all a big misunderstanding and they were double agents or something, I don't know if I can even forgive them for using the information about the Honeydukes passage. And if they were under some spell (I'm thinking of that scene where Draco was coughing and saying he couldn't tell her anything) then they should have not let her give them that information.
Sigh. I just don't know what to think, really. But I really really really wish you would update soon.
Name: Tryphe reviewed
Loyalties on Nov 23, 2004 07:32 pm
That was a horrible cliffie! How could you do this to your readers? *screams in frustration* Draco tried to kill her? What? No! Same for the Blaise dying, but it was pretty obvious it would happen. Dammit, Draco! There's still so much left unexplained. Please, please explain! For instance, where they really using her? Why did Ron kill Blaise? Why Hermione's sudden change of heart? Why are all of the characters acting like such jerks? *sighs* Guess I'll have to just wait for chapter 17. Could you e-mail me [xtryphex@yahoo.com] when you post it?
Love, hugs, and hershey's kisses
x0x Tryphe x0x
ps Yay! You quoted Linkin Park and Breaking Benjamin! Yippee!