Name: mary reviewed
The Snake Pit on Nov 26, 2004 06:09 pm
i loved the way u ended the passage
"Because," he said softly, his tone completely opposite of his actual words as he dabbed her cheek with the handkerchief again. "If you died out here, we'd have to find someplace else to party- and that would be a damn nuisance.”
Name: rembrandt reviewed
The Ring on Nov 01, 2004 06:56 pm
I love this story. I'm reading it right now, and I'm loving it...until I read this:
"She found one almost at the very rear of the train. Spreading her book out onto her lap, she tried to read: “Pride and Polyjuice” by Jayne Awestone. It began:
‘It is a fact universally acknowledged that a single wizard of good fortune…’ and then, unbidden, her mind drifted to Draco again."
Ew, ew, ew, ew. Why couldn't you have just let her read the actual version of the book? I mean, it makes it look like someone copied it off of someone else. Whether it be muggle-wizard or wizard-muggle...
Gah. Why did you have to ruin such a great chapter with that?
Other than that, the story is great so far!
Name: rhina reviewed
Mrs. Draco Malfoy on Nov 01, 2004 05:15 pm
This was a bloody amazing story. I could not stop reading this. I loved your characterisation of Draco Malfoy. He was brilliantly done and really I loved the cool Narcissa - so elegant and together. It was just brill. Just brill. Gods... I can't say enough about how good a fic this was. Congrats!
Name: Neatochick reviewed
Malfoy Manor on Oct 29, 2004 02:02 pm
Good story thus far, just thought you should know that in the first chapter, you wrote Ginny's real frist name as Ginerva, and in the third chapter, you wrote it as Virginia. JKR's website says that her real name is Ginerva, just thought you should be alerted to the typo. Everything else is fantasmic!
Name: Shriya reviewed
Mrs. Draco Malfoy on Oct 17, 2004 01:59 pm
Lovely! Just read through the entire thing, and you managed to combine a plausible story, Cinderella and the Twins all in one! yay!
Name: mary reviewed
Mrs. Draco Malfoy on Sep 06, 2004 04:18 pm
i luv the fic, especcially the how do u sign a merger without magical curses? haha
Name: mary reviewed
Breakfast on Sep 05, 2004 08:34 pm
haha i luv draco in this one, very malfoyish-- no charm essay and the saturday? one word!
Name: mary reviewed
The Snake Pit on Sep 05, 2004 08:05 pm
haha i luved draco's last sentance, it is soo him! he's evil enough with a good side--- if that's possible? ive read this fic on ff.net, and now im reading it agian cuz its one of my favorites!
Name: Camilla reviewed
The Ring on Sep 05, 2004 12:45 pm
this is the furth time i´ve read this story, and this letter still makes me think ´wow´.
desperately wanting a Draco of my own (not that my boyfriend would approve, but oh well)
Camilla- off to read till the happy ending
Name: Ariana reviewed
Mrs. Draco Malfoy on Sep 04, 2004 11:40 am
that was an amazing story. also, thanks for mentioning my name. usually dont see it.
Congrats!
Ari
Name: mrsbmalfoy reviewed
Mrs. Draco Malfoy on Aug 29, 2004 05:08 pm
This was such a sweet story! I LOVED it! At first, I thought it would be like all the boring stories with the similar plots, but this one was amazingly unique! Way to go!
Name: Liv reviewed
Mrs. Draco Malfoy on Aug 26, 2004 06:00 pm
I really enjoyed this, nice job!! I was hesitant to read it at first, I must say, b/c I've read other fics w/ a similar presence that were pretty lame. But this one was really well done! You kept both Draco & Ginny pretty much in character & the ending was great fluff & stuff. :-)
Name: rebecca aka endorwitch reviewed
Mrs. Draco Malfoy on Aug 26, 2004 02:46 am
I started reading this on TourjoursPur but for some reason chapter 6 wouldnt load properly so i went in search of it elsewhere..YAY for this archive. This story was just wonderful! Draco and Ginny misunderstanding each others actions...but still they are crazy about each other. i loved it!!
I especially loved how you wrote Draco. Thanks for a beautiful story!
Name: Draco Luva reviewed
Mrs. Draco Malfoy on Aug 18, 2004 03:45 pm
Mmmmmmm, Draco Malfoy, yummy. Huh? oh, sorry. *looks around embarressed* Uh, great story. Man that Draco is FINE!
Name: Makeshift Wings reviewed
Mrs. Draco Malfoy on Aug 15, 2004 11:46 pm
It was bloody brilliant!! I cant believe Draco was going to have to marry a Servent girl!! I knew something was weird when the girl with blue eyes saw Ginny holding the ring!!
I really liked how you ended it though- with the marriage invite. Very awsome, indeed!! You must keep writing stories, your soooo talented!!
Name: Dead reviewed
Mrs. Draco Malfoy on Aug 15, 2004 08:05 pm
Nice. This story was really good. It could've used some more tension and such, and some parts were a little confusing, but on a whole, it was a really good story.
Name: nani51 reviewed
Mrs. Draco Malfoy on Aug 15, 2004 04:45 pm
aww what a sweet ending
Name: Jules reviewed
The Invitation on Aug 15, 2004 02:48 pm
a wonderful piece of work. gave me the fuzzies. I love how you portrayed Mrs. Malfoy. good job!
Name: Eris reviewed
The Invitation on Aug 15, 2004 03:15 am
I'm so glad that you decided to post this here. I first read it at portkey and when I went back to reread it, it was gone.
I tried toujourspur but it wasn't posted in its entirety.
*sighs* Finally now I can gush all over it again
Name: Disty reviewed
The Snake Pit on Aug 14, 2004 10:57 pm
The ending of this chapter was interesting. I didn't expect Draco to say that. I liked it though! it was cool! ^_^