Trying to escape the pain of her daughter's death, Ginny runs to Pennsylvania to start anew. Almost six years later, a man from her past walks back into her life, reopening old wounds and setting in motion a journey of discovery, sorrow, and joy.Category: Long and Completed
Ooh La ! La! Very nice ;)
I loved Ginny's crotch-less panties :P
Good work with this chapter...finally Ginny is figuring out what went wrong with her relationships with Draco and her daughter.... they must spend more time with Serena as her parents for now....the sex must wait ;)
Although I want ginny to be a merciless tease and drive Draco insane with lust...... the clueless dork deserves it... Can't wait for them to fall in love with each other though....
I wish this chapter was longer.... I am really curious to see how Draco deals with the new Ginny - I saac dynamic....
Plz update soon lady, or else I shall send nanchuck weilding Ninjas after you..... ^_^
Author's Response: Yes, they do need to work on that family dynamic. And Draco does deserve some of what he got. I will try and not take too long, if only to not have ninjas come after me. :]
Oh My God An Update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Faints*
Have I told you lately how much I love you Ann? ^_^
Lovely Chapter and I really like to see Ginny give Draco a hard time , he is such an Ass really .
Every chapter of this story is a new delight as delicious as each of titles.
Can't wait for the next and I hope Draco gets his head out of his arse.
Author's Response: I told you I would be updating soon last week. *rolls eyes* You're so dramatic. And, no, you haven't told me how much you loved me lately. I'm starting to go into withdrawal. You've all but disappeared. Eh, Draco will redeem himself, don't worry.
Ok, so this was one of my favourite chapters, of the lot, ofcourse, I have loved all of them , but this one's special because our daft boy comes around and accepts his feelings for Ginny, and loved how passionately he tracked her down and ravished her, so to speak ;) Brilliant job Ann, it would be difficult to accept the fact that Buttercup is ending...one of the best stories I've ever read..we await another moving masterpiece from you love :)
Author's Response: Hehe, thanks! I guarantee that as much as I said I was going to give myself a break, I'm going to end up writing something else. But I do need a tiny break first, one where I don't have to stress about updating. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. It really is one of the best, if only because Draco says he loves her (it was the worst chapter to write--so difficult). By the way, where have you disappeared to missy?
When Ginny wins a bottle of Felix Felicis strange things happen. (This is set in Hogwarts era, but it's AU. We'll assume Slughorn still works there.)Category: Works in Progress
Oh Nooooooooooooooooooooo !
:(
Why did this have to happen?
Promise me that you will make this better?
A chubby Draco and the physical trainer from hell. What more can I say? A D/G twist on dieting and an ending sweeter than candy floss. Enjoy. :)Category: Long and Completed
It's always a pleasure to read your stories :) They make me smile. I love your concept for this one and both Gin and Draco are adorable ! What I liked best about Die with a T is that you have retained both of their childish traits . I wish you would update sooner :)
Wanna read more soon!
Author's Response: Well, I'm definitely working on it! Nothing like writing a happy plot to keep the Nargles away. :)
thanks so much for letting me know you enjoy them. It's wonderful to know that my work makes folks happy.
“You mustn’t tell them, Rose! Harry knows but Lily and the boys… you can’t breathe a word…”Category: Works in Progress
When Rose Weasley went to her favorite aunt for advice on how to handle loving someone her family disapproved of, she never dreamed the older woman would have been able to relate so well. In the comfortable safety of her kitchen, Ginevra Potter told her niece everything and swore her to secrecy. But months later, when Ginevra notices that her daughter, Lily, is spending time with Scorpius Malfoy, Ginny realizes too late that the truth can never really be locked away. Children question their parents and their own identities and everyone must confront the past.
Hi there! i am a great fan of your writing am liking the theme of this story,since you have molded it in such a manner that the readers will keep guessing as to which direction this story will take.... will ginny & draco come together? will it be an S/R or S/L story??? i know i belong to a small minority, but i like Lily's vivacious personality more.... no offence, but Rose seems a little boring and dull like Hermione so obviously i like the Scorpio Lily interaction more but then again, confusing love triangles are fun! :P plz update soon!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the compliment! I'm glad you like it so much! And it's okay to be in the minority, you never know what will work out ;) Thanks again!
Hey there! interesting chapter.... and i think you are gonna kill us all with your formula of intrigue!
When you say that this is essentially a love triangle, do you mean that Scorpius has a crush on both Lily and Rose???? Because Lily as of now has not shown any signs of having any romantic interest in the young Malfoy.
Please answer my query and update soon :)
Cheerios!
Author's Response: Well as the chapters progress, a lot of their minds change. Lily did not start out liking Scorp as more than a friend. I suppose it's a love triangle not only because Rose suspects Scorp and Lily but because of how they all act around eachother. Up till now, Scorp and Lily behave very flirtatiously around each other. If they didn't, Rose wouldn't be so jealous. I can't say too much more about whether Lily likes Scorpious right now, because that will start to be answered in the next chapter. Thanks for your review and I hope that answers your question! ;)
YOU . ARE . EVIL
*groans* really now? the million dollar questions... is an L/S or R/S ship? will DG get back together? what will happen to poor Harry? it isnt really his fault you know... i kinda feel bad for him.
Gah! you are screwing wid my head! i dunno where my loyalties lie ! I dunno whom to support..*groans and holds the said screwed up head in hands in frustration*
Author's Response: So sorry to screw with your head ;) I honestly never thoughtwith it was that full to bursting with intrigue, heh, guess it's cuz it wasn't ever a secret to me. Is it horrible if I say a lot of those questions aren't answered until the ending chapters???
Still driving me crazy woman! But you totally deliver :) You got the teen angst down pat between RoseLilyScorpius. to be very honest and i think i have mentioned before, i don't like Rose at all. Yeah Lily is better suited to Scorp in many ways more than one but i have a feeling that you are gonna make Scorp end up with Rose eventually... that seems to be the logical trajectory although i would have wished otherwise. Ginny's trip down memory lane was wonderful and so was Draco's thoughtfulness, he never ceases to be the eprfect man didn't he?? But let's not forget that Harry got the raw deal as well... He is a great guy just clueless and i must thank you for the correct portrayal of Harry as opposed to what some DG loyalists do , make Harry the bad guy or incompetent just to make the path easier for DG ,but life isn't like that. Indeed you have taken up the challenge to make the story as realistic as possible , and you are doing and excellent job at it. This story is so 'alive' , a proof of it being the way people reading your story feel so strongly about each character. That's the winning moment, and the moment of truth for any writer.
btw, i totally found one suggestion by a reviewer interesting, to make Draco and Ginny in-laws... that would be some kind of poetic justice for them... ;)
Whether Ginny ends up with Draco or not, i really hope that she does the right thing.
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you so much for your comments! I'm glad you like it so much, and I'm sorry for driving you crazy too. I definately love writing realistically, I figure people can forgive me for that, you know? Really, though, thank you. That was a lovely review! Hope you like the rest of the story!
I think whatever I wanted to say to you regarding the latest installment has already been eloquently expressed by stickofgum in her review...
My initial reaction was that of disbelief when I read this chapter when you finally ended the whole R/S/L debate, I mean we have been through so many twists and turns that I still can't believe that you have brought the debate to a closure... in fact, i suspect that you are gonna give the story another unpredictable twist! :P
But seriously, well written chapter as always :) I am on Team Lily so loads of Chocolate chip cookies for you :D
I loved all the snogging ;) Lily is one feisty lil... 'witch' She is the one who can truly keep Scorp happy .
I do hope that Rose gets someone better suited to her temperament... I feel bad for her,having inherited some of Ron's and Hermione's less than charming traits.
Can't wait for Draco and Ginny to enter the scene ...
Author's Response: You're definately right in saying that I love twists and turns, I'll be sure to throw in a few more just for good measure! ;) Thanks for the review!
Oh my God! What a fantastic chapter! It's amazing how you can picturise a real fight in your head... I mean it was so real, that it's hard to believe that it is a fictional account... the chaos, the irrational accusations, everyone's reactions.....everything.. you write amazingly well.
Ah... the first D/G interaction...hmmm it gets interesting from here... and its so cute to see Scorpius being so protective of Lily :) they are perfect.
God! you making me hate Rose more and more... i understand that she is heart broken but Lily is not the one to be blamed entirely. But you have written Rose exactly the way I had imagined her to be.
Great job and the best part is that you update regularly... I love you :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the fight scene so much (there are more arguments in future chapters too). Your review honestly made me really smile too. I'm so glad you like the story and the characters so much. I'll try to have the next chapter out sometime in the near future, lol. Thanks again!
I really don't know what to say except that my heart just broke into pieces for Draco and I am sure that what Ginny has been doing is right or wrong... maybe , their fate was supposed to be this way...
I only know that this chapter(and the previous one)the most painful thing that I have read in years... I am actually feeling depressed.the pain of unrequitted love truly has a destroying effect...
once again, I will say that you write like no one else does, your writing touches the very soul... Thank you once again, for making us 'feel' through your writing... I will truly miss this story once it's done. *Sigh*
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it despite it's depressing state ;) And I agree, I'll miss this once I'm finished too. Still unbelievably frustrating trying to manage that though ;) Again, thanks so much for your review and I'll try and keep the next one from being too depressing. ;)
Your updates are like soul food! :) It's pure bliss to read them. And I think I am falling in love with Scorpius... his dad has got some fierce competition :P He is so similar to his dad,yet so different and I adore the way he loves Lily *sigh*
I think I am beginning to enjoy next gen more than D/G in this one!I never thought that would be possible so Credit goes to you ofcourse... :D not that I would desert my fav couple for anything.
I really liked the way Rose played 'big' sis and best friend,no questions asked to Lily coz we know that Lily still has to grow up a lot... I like the fact that the two girls are on their way to make peace... and I loved the part when Scorp says 'I love you' and i think i drowned in a vat of fluffy sweetness when he nicked muffins just for her... *sigh* he is adorable..
Can't wait to read more.
And I am amazed each time to read other reviewers' comments, everyone is reacting so strongly for your fic, the love, the accusations... I think you make people forget that this a story and not reality... people have grown so attached it's crazy! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your review was glowing and I loved knowing how much you liked it! Thanks so much for supporting this story and hopefully I can get the next few out relatively quickly ;) Thanks again!
Ah! our very own Romeo + Juliet, trying to elope and everything :P Well written as always, and it's a great relief to see them get over their differences...
Well this chapter and the previous two were obviously some sort of filler chapters before the big secret is gonna be revealed so obviously can't wait for the next :)
Author's Response: Yeah, obviously filler. The information HAD to happen though and this is all in the same day as Ginny's meeting with Draco in his office and what the next chapter will be, so it was really more of a time order sort of thing ;) But yes, Ginny's secret finally comes out in the next chapter!
My heart just broke into pieces reading this.... how the hell do you do this so well Rosalie???
More than the story, it's the way to write it is what is so great about the whole thing....I am talking about the little little things...
... Like the way you described Ginny's musings in the coffee shop, how she observes the Muggles running from the rain and how she would feel superior about the fact that she could Apparate,but now she felt nothing....
Ginny in the kitchen, with the messy kitchen-counter...Draco ,looking helpless,hurt as she leaves,unable to comprehend why she would do such a thing,the release form lying crumpled,forgotten on the floor..and the sacrifice that went in it..
Draco, as he watches the ceiling above him, reminiscing....
Ginny, observing that it isn't raining anymore as she reaches home, the cheerful welcome mat...making a mockery of the whole situation..
Harry...hurt, drunk,accusing..
Ginny in the shower, the last notes of the piano....and many more...
It's all those beautiful details and the nuances and complexities of emotions that you write about matters more to me than the story itself...
I have loved all your chapters, but by far this is the best chapter...the crown jewel among jewels...
You need a weeny bit of polishing and you should be ready to write your own novel....We need sensitive writers like you,after the kind of 'bestseller' trash that readers are subjected to..
I agree whole-heartedly with your Mom...afterall, mothers know the best :)
Once again, thank you for this delightful, bitter-sweet,beautifully written story...It won't be easy getting over it... just as Draco and Ginny can't get over each other...
Author's Response: Oh I am so pleased that you noticed all those small details! I loved incorporating them. I like vividity. ;) And thanks so much with the novel comment. I am thinking of one actually, have it all mapped out just no time (of course) Hopefully I'll have the next chapter out soon! Again, I'm so glad you liked this!
Hmm... I like Travis! He's adorable! :)
Go for it Rose I would say...the poor guy swallowed up his Slytherin pride and all for her...he really cares for her Awww
I only wish you would write longer chapters...
Lily is quite the volatile one,isn't she??? spitting fire one mo and water-works in the next... typical of Weaseley women eh?
Ok, so I am gearing up for the angst...
Author's Response: Yeah, sometimes I wish I'd write longer chapters too, but they're chopped up for a reason, for example the next one's with D/G. Writing their two stories at once sort of necessitates a lot of smaller chapters :) Don't worry though, in the near future, they'll be lengthening a bit ;) Thanks for you review and I'm glad you like Travis, he was never planned, just sort of came into being... I like him very much though.
Would Draco's sixth year have gone differently if someone had reached out to him? Peer into Draco's mind as he goes through this pivotal point. It is a year of extreme importance, and everything should be running smoothly. Unfortunately for our hero, an insistant redhead keeps disrupting his plans and making him doubt his intentions. Is Ginny enough to save Draco from the dark path he's traversing? Maybe.Category: Works in Progress
hey! i liked the beginnig...your characterisations are especially nice... i am looking forward to an update soon :)
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Ginny Weasley is absolutely sure that Draco Malfoy is hatching a particularly evil plot as junior head of the Ministry Department of Culture, and that it definitely involves puppy-strangling, bribing officials, and consistently wearing trousers tailored very tight in back. Or at least it's a theory that makes sense when she's been surviving on two hours of sleep a night for far too long, and Draco keeps vetoing her sketches for the new marble statues at the Ministry fountain. But then Luna Lovegood gives her a potion with some very curious effects, and Ginny finds that she just may have to revise her opinions about those evil trousers...Category: Works in Progress
I am still on my way to recovery after that brilliant piece of smutmuffin that you dish out (on a regular basis..THANK GOD!) i mean hearing Of Draco's desire for Ginny was oh so hot ..mmmmm
Ginny, that uber lucky wench!
I favor bondage too but i think it would have been better if
ginny was in her senses and 'begging' him for it, i mean who wudn't in their right senses give in to Draco eh? but still.... you know, i feel it would have been better,but hey thats just me talkin, u hold the reigns of the plot bunnies... its totally your wish...
but great work, its commendable how you write these deliriously high on LSD stories.... keep up the good work and stay crazy that way woman! :D
Awww.............. so fuckin hot and awwww...... i think i am insanely in love wid your Draco.... can plz ship him to me pweese???? and oh yeah , the reason i cudn't review the last chappie was coz i had passed out in sheer pleasure, Gods woman, u give a new definition to DG Smut.....so crazy and wild yet so classic.....muah!
Draco Malfoy is tired. Tired of having his life dictated for him. Tired of the pressure he feels to take on the Death Eater lifestyle his father wants for him. No one notices that Draco is unhappy, though. No one, that is, except for the one person he doesn't want around.Category: Long and Completed
Hey there!great piece of writing! i have never seen a better portrayal of confused Draco ... plz update soon :)A promising start!
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch!
hey, nice chapter, i liked their interaction... but i was a bit surprised by the lack of venom on Ginny's part since she knows that he is a Death eater... i expected her to hex him or something :D
plz update soon...this looks promising.. i liked the way you wrote Ginny's character..
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like Ginny. She was a bit hard to write in this spot... kind of tired and grumpy and confronted with Draco. She did leave her wand in her bag, though, so that explains the lack of hexing. Anyway... I'll post the next chapter soon and I hope you like that one, too!
Ginny is shocked to discover just how different Muggles are when it comes to sex.Category: Works in Progress
Me likes it ;)
its refreshing to read a fic that is fun and promptly ignores the 'dark' themes.. sometimes we need to see the characters acting like normal teenagers..i must say, i loved your Ginny... and the whole concept.. can't wait to read more, i happy that you decided to try your hand at DG fanfiction...welcome aboard :D i hope you shall update soon.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you for your compliment! :) I feel like I've got the Gryffindors down, but I am a bit worried about how to portray the Slytherins adequately. I plan to update once a week. I didn't write the story out beforehand. The idea suddenly flew into my mind this weekend and refused to leave, so I started writing! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Draco Malfoy, at only sixteen, is given a seemingly impossible task that will call for him to harness every ounce of wit and courage that he posseses. Hogwarts is no longer safe, with watchful eyes stalking his every move. However, this problematic situation becomes increasingly troublesome as this thorn meets his rose...Category: Works in Progress
Read on for Draco's untold (that is, until now) version of HBP.
Very,very interesting! I like the way that you are writing it like a book, especially the ending to each chapter and Draco seems convincing so far and I totally agree when you say that some vital scenes are missing that should be written about .
Keep up the good work, and I am most definitely looking forward to an update :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing...haha, yes, I just decided that everyone needed a little bit more of classic-JK Rowling writing style in their life ;D
Wow! you are terrific writer :)
I loved Roger....
It's wonderful how you brought seemingly forgotten scenes from the series like Frank Bryce's murder back in focus...
I absolutely loved your Draco and your scene descriptions are superb!
Keep up the good work.......something tells me I am gonna be addicted to this story in the future but please update soon ok?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your sweet review :) Your compliments and feedback are invaluable. I'm sorry about the lack of updates. I did have a second chapter written long ago, however, I just wasn't happy with it. After much revision, what you're reading now is what I am truly proud of. My motto is quality over quantity, however, I deff. will be working on improving my update speed. Thanks again for reviewing love! :)
Your hard work and excellent imagination shows in your writing... I think with Thorn and his Rose, we have found the perfect sixth book in the HP series through the eyes of Draco.
Each of your scenes is so vivid..
I especially loved the last few lines where Draco reminisces about a Christmas past and the pain with it...
Can't wait for the next chappie!
:)
P.S : I remember that the Malfoys had Albino peacocks ...
Author's Response: I truly love your reviews! :) They are so sweet; seriously, I'm blushing. I'm so glad you appreaciate the time I put into my chapters, it really is invaluable. Yes, haha, I'm glad you liked the reminiscing scene. I was debating wether or not to include it, as it was somewhat OOC, but I decided to go ahead. I'm still not completely happy with it, but I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'll try to update soon!
P.S oh wow, I totally forgot that! Thanks for reminding me. Maybe once I'm further into the story, I'll go back and change that. But for now, let's just say the Albino peacocks magically transformed into bright, colourful ones ;)