Draco and Ginny go out on a date post-Hogwarts. Ginny is disappointed with Draco's lack of originality. Can he make it up to her?Category: Works in Progress
hahahahahaha.
"and when she smiled, a felt like i was seeing a naked woman."
lmao. pretty funny. i hate it when harry acts all "you cant get over me cus im harry potter"
grrrr.....
update soon!:D
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Sparks fly and glasses shatter when two elite Aurors, Ginny Weasley and Draco Malfoy, are assigned to pose as Ashton and Bryhoney Seaton, a newly married couple, to catch the Death Eaters roaming free even twelve years after Voldemort was defeated. Surely they would catch the Death Eaters, only if they could remove their wands from each others' throats. They would kill each other, even if they kept alone with each other for more than an hour...or so they claimed.Category: Works in Progress
this story needs a lot of work. you really need to check your grammar, and there are countless continuity errors. you spelled nicole two different ways. and there's no flow.
do you read the chapters before giving them in?
you should get a beta.
sorry if that was too brutal.
but other than that the ideas are there and you have some of the wit that's needed for their characters. you just need to find a way to make everything work and make it good and interesting because it took effort not to move on to something else.
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Ginny finds that she is only attracted to men she can argue with.Category: Works in Progress
thats so funny.....lmao.
cant wait for the next chapter :)
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GASP!!
what an ass!
lol this is really fun to read. hope you update soon.....
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Author's Response: Thank you. I\'m working on my evil cliffhanger chapter endings.
ahaha wooowwwww. the claustrophobic thing. did someone actually say that? lmao.
great chapter.
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hooray for an update! :)
draco is dumb. lol. that's all I have to say.
a quick update would be MUCH appreciated :)
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hehe cute ending, good chapter overall, but so short!!!
I was so excited when I saw the update, and to be honest I'm disappointed at the length, if not the story :)
update sooooon please!
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Ginny talks in her sleep. Draco finds out some interesting things.Category: Long and Completed
In order for Draco to regain control of his assets after the war, he is required to marry. For Draco, this can mean only one witch - Pansy Parkinson. Who, you may ask is the Ministry liason for both Malfoy and Parkinson? Ginny Weasley.Category: Works in Progress
and she updates! :D
very cute :)
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this story is really intriguing :)
and really funny too lol. i like it a lot :D
keep it coming.
gah thats it?!?
lol i really like it :D
please hurry!:D:D
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Throughout his childhood, Draco had always been known as "The Prince".Category: Works in Progress
definitely not what i was expecting with that title! :D
awesome story :D
keep writing!!
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Author's Response: Thanks so much!
GASP!!!
that really sucks!! poor ginny!! well, and draco....
but yeah good chapter. thanks for finally updating ;)
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Author's Response: XD Thank you!
Valentine's Day brings a surprise, but not the one Ginny was hoping for.Category: Works in Progress
this story is awesome!!! :D very funny, with appropriate amounts of insecurity and CREEPINESS (wtf Draco, memory charms? I can just see that blowing up :D).
I hope you don't take too long to update :)
and who is this mysterious woman?
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ahhh I finally caught up and I'm sad I did :(... this story is awesome. I feel so bad for Ginny :'(
great slip, at the end, with Draco telling Blaise no.
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Ginny is twenty four, and the war rages on. Draco is a Death Eater, and he needs her help. Of course, he doesn't give her a choice. Now she's surrounded by the enemy. She begins to see that not everything is black and white. Can she come to terms with her new role in his life?Category: Works in Progress
and he's off to profess his love of her to his parents!!:D:D
lmao the whole hickey situation's pretty funny :D
woot!
update soon please!
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:O
effective last sentence. it kind of reminds me of WWII.
update soon please! its really good :D
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Author's Response: Thank you.
gah! you and your cliffies!!
more more more!!!:D
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finally :P
i was beginning to think you were putting it off because you were embarrassed ;)
good chapter! update soon please!
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oooooh very good!!
almost poetic, that death was ;)
update soon please!!:D
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Author's Response: Thank you. I wanted a nice bit of evil Lucius
hahahahahaha!
i like the new hermione :D
lol she broke into his office....keep writing please!:D
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wow that was a really good chapter.
I LOVE HERMIONE. SO MUCH.
SO MUCH.
:D:D:D:D:D
and good plot development :)
update soon please!:D
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:'(
I feel really bad for them.....
sad for harry....
this story is a little bit depressing....but in a good way :)
update soon please!
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ooooh very interesting!
the ending is a little bit abrupt though. I felt like it could've been a bit smoother.
good intrigue though :D
update soon please! :)
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OOOHHHH!!!!! :O:O:O:O:O:O
SNAP!!!!!
good chapter!! good build up to the end. you could sense the tension throughout it. well done!
update soon please! :D
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