Ginny is twenty four, and the war rages on. Draco is a Death Eater, and he needs her help. Of course, he doesn't give her a choice. Now she's surrounded by the enemy. She begins to see that not everything is black and white. Can she come to terms with her new role in his life?Category: Works in Progress
hmmmm I sense an arguement! and I so knew she was pregnant :D
but I'm not a fan of the ending. it was a bit abrupt. other than that the plot's good :)
update soon please! :)
bee245
oohhhhh sweetest thing to say. I'm liking all the little reminders of her old life, especially with Hermione and her dreams. makes you feel guilty with Ginny so that's good :) and bad :( lol
I still think your ending could a bit more fluid though. I think the chapter before was the same in that sense. I think it'd be more conclusive with another sentence or two of action.
but! the story is really very good :) so it's okay!
update soon please! :)
bee245
very sweet :)
I'm expecting some hardcore action at the party. explosions, theft, threats....
update soon please! :)
bee245
OH SNAP. Great chapter, great tension, and fantastic cliffhanger!!! Even though I HATE you for it!! ;)
It has been a while, hasn't it? But thanks for updating! Looking forward to the next one!
bee245
Love the chapter, but it seemed incomplete! That's my biggest criticism of this story, actually. The plot is SO awesome and the prose is SO fantastic, but I find most of the chapter endings to be too sudden, you know? Like, chapter 33's ending was REALLY awesome, but this ending seemed too abrupt, you know?
Either way, I cannot WAIT until the next chapter :D:D.
Update soooon please! :)
bee245
A fanfictional adaptation of the well known tale about the Frog Prince, in which Draco is a frog and Ginny is a closeted kleptomaniac.Category: Completed Short Stories
hahahaha that was awesome :D:D
and that story was really well incorporated. lol i loved it!:D
Ginny has a moment of abject stupidity. Now what is she supposed to do?Category: Long and Completed
lol thats really funny. and good too. keep it coming :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I\'m glad you like it.
lol i love the whole "kissing on the neck thing.
bee245
lol thats so cute!!! :D:D
his favourite cloak pin!!:D
lol. thats really cute. but short!
keep it coming!:D
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Ginny Weasley's life has been engulfed by a vibrant swirl of color ever since the day she was born- everything from her family to her House to her own personality is as vivid and fiery as the hair that tumbles across her shoulders. Maybe that's why she can't help but be drawn to the boy whose personality and life has been as cold and colorless as his piercing grey eyes. DG winter fluff.Category: Completed Short Stories
that is fantastic!!!! :D:D
very sweet, and very, very good ending :D
PERFECT ending :D
well done! :D
bee245
Ginny and Draco both begin the new year at Hogwarts with hesitation for what lays ahead in their future, not aware that they have a lot more in common than they realize.Category: Works in Progress
this is a very good story!
can't wait til the next update!:D
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Twelve days can be a lifetime, yet Epiphany must always come.Category: Completed Short Stories
oh my god.
i have no words for this.
Author's Response: Well, when you find them, I hope they\'re good words! Thanks for reading!
Draco forces Ginny to reevaluate her opinion of a certain red-and-white holiday with a simple gesture.Category: Completed Short Stories
Cute, fluffy, simple, no real purpose other than to amuse myself and others.
very, very cute :D
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Draco overhears Ginny giving a friend advice, that dating is just a game. He decides to try to play with Ginny.Category: Works in Progress
ahaha.
"you kissed its hoof" lol :D
lol as i was reading it i noticed you spelled it centred instead of centered. good for you!:D
constructive critisism (since you asked for it); it was really good but there were parts where it couldve been a little more fluid. and you don't need to keep repeating their names that often. as long as you don't start talking about someone else randomly in the middle of a paragraph you dont need to repeat the name of the person whos thinking or doing it or even what they're thinking about.
just something i noticed that might help....
other than that it was pretty funny :D
i am intrigued ;)
When Harry leaves Ginny for Hermione, Draco decides it's time to fulfill an old fantasy. Twenty five is a little old to experience her first one night stand, but Ginny thinks she can handle it.Category: Works in Progress
lmao i was waiting for the smack :D
great story :D actually all of your stories are pretty good.
cant wait til the next chapter!
bee245
short!
good, but short :)
cant wait for the next one!
bee245
ah!:D
thats awesome. keep writing!!:D
bee245
god.....what an idiot.....
great chapter :D
im really glad im reading this story, cus its turning out to be really good and intriguing :D
more would be very much appreciated :)
bee245
no! no! nonono!
draco you arse! where are you?!?!?
very good chapter. update soon please!
bee245
lol draco and his presuiading skills :D
good chapter. please update soon!!:D
bee245
nice update. rather uneventful though. give us some action!! :D
bee245
A simple game in the Gryffindor tower turns into a complex heist, but in the end, whose heart will be stolen? DG with just a smidgen of BZLL on the side. Written hurriedly for Pud’s Great Draco & Ginny Fic Contest 2007. Crossposted at Fanfiction.net.Category: Long and Completed
:D
that was thoroughly enjoyable.
bee245
It was just something that they had to do. To find out for themselves if it was really worth it. But sometimes things don't always turn out the way you want.Category: Long and Completed
ok GOOD!!!
it's just marriage. i thought you were gonna get her pregnant lol....
bee245
ahahahahahahahahha THAT sucks.
honestly though. its called 'lock the door' lol.
update soon!
bee245
Author's Response: Yes, well, this is Draco we\'re talking about. He kind of has a one track mind at this point.
ginny, what the hell? i mean come on.
lol.....please update soon :)
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