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Nineteen Years Later... the Truth by Anise    (Reviews - 893)

What really happened in the DH Epilogue of Doom. Poor, poor Harry, so very clueless...

Chapter SIXTY-NINE quote of the day:

Ginny scowled at him. “You don’t know me very well.”

Draco shook his head, his eyes more sorrowful than ever. “No. I don’t. Eternity wouldn’t be long enough for that.”

“Why do I feel as if we’ve suddenly wandered into the set of a men’s cologne commercial?” complained Lucifer.

“Can’t you keep your damn mouth shut, Lucifer?” spat Draco.

“Please… really… I don’t think you should talk to him that way,” whispered Ginny.


Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Humor
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 69 | Word count: 315075 | Read count: 138760 | Published: Jul 30, 2007 | Updated: Feb 26, 2011
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Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Jan 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

(((())))s to you, sorry you're going through a tough time. Thanks for picking up the story again, I've missed it and was hoping you'd finish it.

Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Jun 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Happy Birthday! And you just rock! I love this story, you've created such a compelling world and you write so beautifully. You're updating daily and it's not fast enough for me, can't wait to see how it all turns out. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Jul 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Awww, what a sweet description of Draco. Great story!

Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Jul 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

So very clever you are! Can't wait for the next installment.

Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Jul 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

OK, this was too much for me, not so much into the torture thing, but I love this story and it wasn't like I wasn't warned. I'm totally looking forward to the next installment, though. Addicted, I am!

Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Jul 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Good save! I'm really enjoying this story. After last chapter's shocker, it feels like it's back on track. Not sure I agree with your suggestion that it had to be so violent, but I see why you did it. Looking forward to the next one!

Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Aug 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

This story is so creative, I'm really enjoying it. Great job with the characters and especially the plot. It's so interesting, I can't wait until the next chapter!

Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Aug 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Nice, best chapter yet! Loved the kitchy hell. Drama at the end paced well and very exciting. Still on the edge of my seat...

Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Aug 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I agree with you, great chapter!! Perhaps the best yet. I still want it all to work out... silly muggle, I am.

Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Aug 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Deep fried cheese curds? Really? Anyway... I'm a bit confused by this chapter, but still feeling very hopeful. Love that Blaise just showed up.

Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Sep 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

So glad you're back with the latest, I missed the regular updates. I really liked this chapter (although I'm highly confused as to how it's all going to end) because I find the suggestion that Voldemort would continue to abuse children (and others) in a sexual way to be very plausible. He's evil and amoral and he's all about power and domination over those weaker than him, it all makes sense. Combined with the orphanage incidents, British boarding school atmosphere, and the strong suggestion that the Ginny/Chamber of Secrets thing could easily have been turned into much more than psychological terror had Tom had more of a corporeal form, I think you're on to something. You handled it nicely as a writer as well, which I appreciate.

Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Apr 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

Spoons! ROFL!

The Devil You Know by CCC    (Reviews - 1004)

Ginny is twenty four, and the war rages on. Draco is a Death Eater, and he needs her help. Of course, he doesn't give her a choice. Now she's surrounded by the enemy. She begins to see that not everything is black and white. Can she come to terms with her new role in his life?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Action, Angst, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 34 | Word count: 69661 | Read count: 218517 | Published: Sep 26, 2007 | Updated: Sep 28, 2010
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Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Jul 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This has turned into quite the clever and exciting story. The quality of the writing improves with every chapter; it's definitely your best story going right now. I'm already looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Jul 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Quite sweet! Looking forward to how Draco and Ginny will get out of this mess. They will, won't they?

Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Jul 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Nice! I like this story because it is the well written and because I like the way you've created an AU that's plausibly dark for Ginny. I can't wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you. I can\'t believe how much fun writing a dark fic is. Everyones response has been great.

The Rules of Engagement by dragonsangel68    (Reviews - 136)

After accepting a foolish dare at a party Draco finds himself breaking the very rules he set for his own self preservation, and his life has been irreversibly turned upside down. He knows what he has to do to restore order to his once carefree life, but finding the strength is a challenge he appears not to be able to meet.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Narcissa Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 7 | Word count: 30139 | Read count: 39418 | Published: Jul 21, 2008 | Updated: Aug 24, 2008
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Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Jul 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Uninvited Guests

ROFL! I like that Lucius is in on the situation.

Author's Response: Thanks! Lucius thinks he\'s in on the situation ;)

Truth Will Out by dragonsangel68    (Reviews - 175)

Draco and Ginny discover that the truth is a funny creature, especially when you can’t lie successfully.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 14 | Word count: 67462 | Read count: 55820 | Published: Jan 24, 2009 | Updated: Mar 16, 2009
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Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Feb 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Red Roses

I'm really enjoying this story. Even though I think (I hope!) I know how it will end up, I've still thoroughly enjoyed watching it all unfold. Well written and nicely done (like all of your stories!).

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: jomama Signed
Date: Mar 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: The Hardest Question

Awww, very sweet ending to a very nice story. Thanks for another good one!

Author's Response: Thank you :)