Draco and Pansy are the perfect dungeon duo, but a secret from their past will change everything for them, and for any Gryffindors that get caught in the middle of it.Category: Long and Completed
I'm so glad Ginny hugged her. What a traumatic thing to have to hear. We're assuming that they are boyfriend and girlfriend, right? I sure hope they haven't made out. Wretch. But yeah -- very good! ;)
HA HA HA! Love Pansy. Love her! And I love that the women were actually well informed but chose to make their hubbys see them as only caring for womanly things. Grat chapter!
I love it. I really do. Now I am desperate for more. Well done! ;)
AGGHG! SUCH a good chapter. Firstly I must say YAY for the snogging. YAY! But then the cliffhanger at the end... I'm all a flutter! Great Great Chapter. YAY for quick updates! ;)
Evil Evil Hermione. I was about to say how much I loved her deducing things... but now.. nope! ;)
"It had felt right. Maybe it was right. " IT IS RIGHT!
Great update! ;)
SUCH a good chapter! REALLY REALLY well done. I was half suspecting Ron to bust out of there and freak on them for kissing one another... and that would have ruined the mood considerably -- so you did fabulous not adding that bit! ;)
Really suspenseful. Really fabulous. Loved it. Now I can't figure out why I wasn't alerted to the chapter update... but I will because I don't want to miss a thing! ;)
YAY... please tell me this will turn out Harry/Pansy too... ;)
LOVED IT! This chapter was love. I love fidgeting!Draco -- and that he wants to take care of his mother and sister... Yes -- it is LOVE! LOVE it I tell you! ;)
Really really wonderful. I am glad to see Pansy deal with her grief in this way. I liked the talking down to Harry - and I liked their interaction. Who else to pair with Harry than Pansy, eh?
Perfect update, my dear! ;)
*clap clap clap*
Though I think he's rushing it a bit -- I love it anyway. Brilliant. Love Draco. Love the women in his life pushing him around. It's all awseome. ;)
An angsty drabble from both Draco's and Ginny's POV. PWP. Draco thinks back on what he did, and Ginny mourns the memories.Category: Completed Short Stories
Wow. It was really painful - but not ina bad way. Beautiful in it's painfulness. I actually had to doublecheck that it was complete when I read that last line - hoping that there would be more... but it is perfect as a very depressing one-shot. Great job! ;)
Author's Response: Yes, it is a very short and quite angsty oneshot!! Thanks for the review :)
A foul curse cast on Hermione and Ginny leaves them forced to search out one vital ingredient from their soul mates. Will Draco and Severus help them in their time of need? This is my response to a Potter Place Winter Prompt Challenge.Category: Long and Completed
I have really enjoyed this first chapter. I think the characters are well done - and yeah - Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much jandj! :D
Ouch. I feel bad for Draco. A lot. Ouch. But I am impressed with Hermione - if only she wouldn't overthink everything Snape does. - but I suppose that's just in her nature, isn't it?
Anyway - fabulous chapter.
Author's Response: I know, I felt bad for both Draco and Ginny. I could see both sides. Yeah, Hermione does over think but too, she thinks she knows him when actually she only knows him as a student would a teacher, not as a woman would a man. Glad you liked it!
It was brilliantly hillarious in some parts and just fascinating in others. SO SO glad Draco didn't actually do what he was going to - - the next morning with them made me giggle, "He’d been nibbling on his wife and was angry at the intrusion" HA HA HA! And then Lucius... he was just GRRRR!
Wonderful wonderful chapter. Now I sit and wait for the updates, my dear! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks jandjs! I am glad you enjoyed it! Yeah, Lucius is just so... Lucius! ;-) More updates coming!
AGHGHG! SO SO good. And then that bit of darkness at the end there.... AHGHGHG!
Needless to say, I enjoyed that chapter. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks jandj! You know me by now... ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks jandj! You know me by now... ;-)
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Wonderful job. I KNEW that the Slytherin men would come upon them and have a cow! I hope they both are very truely bitchslapped for their behaviour... once they realise what was happening to their wives.
Wonderful job! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much jandjsalmon! Yep they did! ;) You know me by now! They will feel like shit for sure!
I love PunchingBag!Draco. But I am so incredibly frustrated by both of them that I think they ought to be hit with a shovel. Ah well... brilliant chapter! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah I wanted to shake them myself!
This was a wonderful chapter! I actually must say, that I love Ron - just a little. Usually I don't have feelings for him, neither positive nor negative, but inthis fic - I love Ron.
And " I don’t understand how he can claim to love me and yet think so badly of me at the same time" -- That would hurt a lot. It all ties into self worth and HER never trusting him either. He didn't trust her, that's true, but does she really believe he's any different from when they went to school? Interesting. I love the idea that he's liked her for a long time - that just sits well with me. Like from when they were in school. I hope that when they have 'their' heart-to-heart that sorta things comes out.
Poor Severus - Evil bint Lily. Wonderful cocoachristy. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks jandj! Yeah, Ron did good! ;-)\r\n\r\nIt would hurt, but haven\'t you ever said anything in the heat of the moment or lashed out--wanting to hurt the person who\'d hurt you? That is what he was doing here. Not an excuse, but an explanation. Right, he has matured a bit, but he\'s still Draco Malfoy. It will all come out!\r\n\r\nLOL I think Lily wanted to love Severus, but the heart wants what (or who) it wants! So glad you enjoyed!
LOL. I giggled when I read about 'spotted dick' - I KNEW a rude joke was going to be coming... even if it was only in Snape's head.
And though I have a terrible time imagining Snape in nothing but his boxers.. I thought his comforting her after her dream was really wonderful!
And Draco....
Firstly, Lucius is a creepy old man... but Draco- I lvoe him. Oh how I do.
"The next time, I will hex before I speak" -- GUH!
and *claps wildly for retribution* YAY - the boys defend their wives!! WOOT!
Wonderful Chapter, my dear! WONDERFUL!
Author's Response: TeeHee! Thanks jandj! I worried I went to far and said forget it! I\'m leaving it! ;-)\r\n\r\nOh, I love sexy Severus! \r\n\r\nYes, Lucius so far is creepy, I am going to explain him in chapter 10.\r\n\r\nYep, SS and DM needed that for a lot of reasons. One being they feel that they needed to do something since they weren\'t there for their wives when they should have been.\r\n\r\nMore up soon!
*squees like a little fangirl*
Harry/Pansy. I LOVE H/P and then Ron/Luna. You write Luna exceptionally well. And yeah -- Hermione and Snape's conversation was very well done indeed. YAY for the happy couples! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you jandj! I do love my fangirls! Glad you are liking my pairings! :D more up soon!
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Lucius is redeemed in my eyes! *squees a little at how wonderful Snape is*
A really lovely chapter. I love the Harry/Pansy relationship coming along! YAY! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks jandj! Glad you could see Lucius in a different light! He and Snape have been great friends for a long while, so Snape decided to let him have it--as it were!
It's a WHOLE party of ships today! YAY! I think I loved Ron/Luna the best today. Luna was fabulous, all concerned and about to leave and then he kisses her... AGHGH!
Wonderful update! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks jandj! I had to have a bit of Ron in there--couldn\'t let Harry and Pansy have all the fun! ;-) So happy you enjoyed!
Super good chapter. Poor Pete.
*claps loudly*
Author's Response: Thanks, jandj! More on Pete next chapter!
It was a wonderful ending. Great job! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you jandj! Glad you enjoyed!
Draco wants Ginny, but she knows it's only a prank...right?Category: Completed Short Stories
I love your Draco. The little barbs and the (ouch) knee action was brilliant. And then him explaining what she does when he kisses her... AHGHG!
Really good. ;)