Draco finds out he is a veela and in the process of trying to save his mother, he finds his mate at Hogwarts. Lucius tries to neutralize the veela blood while Draco's mate proves to be rather "unwilling".Category: Works in Progress
I'm sad that I can't read to the end. I normally try to select only fic that are completed.
I don't mean to rush you along...but please please please...finish this. I like what I see so far.
COMPLETE! Strolling through Diagon Alley Lucius Malfoy comes across a little boy who could have been Draco's twin. Has his family tree been expanded, without his knowledge? Has Draco been keeping secrets? Or is he oblivious to the fact that he may have an heir?Category: Long and Completed
You managed to create one of the most traditional family units I have ever read. I have never witnessed a more integrated family in fiction or reality.
It is a long story and I made sure I got to the end to see if you had anything in mind for Ginny or Draco outside of their relationship with one another, their parents and Ginny's siblings, or their children. I find this story fascinating in that I don't know what the kind of adoration Ginny has from everyone especially when each brother and each grouping has its own anguish and anxiety. It is this very singular focus on one character that I like about fanfiction. It can be joyful and frustrating all at the same time. Would we want this much attention if we could achieve it in our lives?
Keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Would we want that much attention? I think most would not; in fact, it would probably send a good many of us screaming into the night ;)
Since childhood, Pansy has known that she's destined for Draco. Trouble is, she hates him, he despises her, and his frustrated desires are turned towards Ginny Weasley, the one person on the face of the earth who is most forbidden to him. This doesn't fit into Lucius Malfoy's plans at all. So one autumn afternoon at the manor, he teaches Pansy a lesson in seduction, lust, and the twisted paths of power...Category: Long and Completed
I wrote a more complete review but lost it. I think it was dead on, but I admit I did want Lucius to be subject to the character Elliot on Law and Order: Special Victims Unit after I read it.
Keep writing. I was looking for some 15+ chapters but I see you do short stories. I haven't written anything for a four years... so I take my hats off for you.
He showed her everything. What they didn’t get to the first day, after flying kites and riding boats and feeding swans, they did the next day, and the next. She realized, after spending seemingly endless weeks with him, that she didn’t want to go home, but go home she must.Category: Works in ProgressTen years have passed. They’ll always have Paris.
I like Post Hogwart stories.
Yours intrigues me for several reason: James and Scorpius were not disciplined after drawing their wants on each other resulting with one injury, Harry and Ginny's family are the bad guys for not accepting a decision Ginny took to have an adulterous affair resulting in a child her husband thought was his own and a subsequent divorce and a quick second marriage, and finally the couple doesn't communicate over the important parts of their past, thoughts or feelings. It feels like a regular everyday Muggle family set into a magical space.
My question as I've been reading is do they care about what the present and future are shaping into as they maintain their space and distance? At this point I am more sympathetic to Draco than I am for Ginny. Ginny hasn't paid for her choice to leave him, come back expecting him to receive him with open arms, and then guilting him into returning to a place he fled because she only consider her worldview. When it does gel together like a perfect blended family, she wants to know why he won't 'talk' to her?
Life is hard enough. I am reminded that being self absorbed is one thing but being convinced Ginny's best intentions are best for all is something else.
Author's Response: This is such an amazing review. James, I think, feels bad enough as it is. Scorpius, the little weasel, kind of snaked out of punishment by getting injured, and then his father can\'t bare to discipline him. I\'m glad you see the whole dysfunctional family as something you would see in a regular house, because that\'s really how it is. Ginny will come around. These next few chapters are going to be very important for her.