A foul curse cast on Hermione and Ginny leaves them forced to search out one vital ingredient from their soul mates. Will Draco and Severus help them in their time of need? This is my response to a Potter Place Winter Prompt Challenge.Category: Long and Completed
I see heartbreak coming around the corner.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah....
That is horrible!! Great chapter, but horrible!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I know, it is horrible!
I am thinking ALOT of making up is in order!!! This story is so much fun and emotion. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks! I know, they need to do some serious sweet talking, eh?
Way to go..first time those two gits actually did anything worthwile!!
Author's Response: LOL! Glad you enjoyed it!
Potter makes me want to throw up!! The twins are so much fun!!! I am glad Ginny is attempting to forgive Draco.
Author's Response: LOL! See, I actually like Harry, just not with Ginny.
I have only felt sorry for Lucius in one other story.....but this one really redeems him. Very sad..GOD, I want some man to love me like that!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I like for Severus to have at least one friend, and for some reason it\'s usually Lucius. Probably because we know the most about him, and he\'s Draco\'s father... I do too!
What are these Potter Place Challenges? Do they still exist? I would love more information if they give me more D/G fics!!
Author's Response: Potter_Place is a Yahoo group that you can join to discuss all things Harry Potter! http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Potter_Place/ I\'ll be honest with you though, most topics and couples discussed there are SS/HG, but all topics are welcome. You should join us! We\'re getting ready to start a new challenge now called Anything Goes Challenge!\r\nHere is a link to see some different challenges we\'ve done in the past and to read a few of the fics: http://www.thepetulantpoetess.com/categories.php?catid=34&parentcatid=34\r\nYou\'ll have to join www.thepetulantpoetess to read the mature rated fics, but they have all different kinds of pairings there!
AHHHHHH....so sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you!
This story was an absolute joy to read. It wasn't filled with alot of negativity for the most part, but everyone learned to get along with one another, and be happy. The redemption of many of the characters was refreshing. I love how Snape & Draco fell madly in love with their wives. The plot was unique, the story flowed well, it was full of emotion and there was great character development. Everything blended superbly. A really nice job and I thank you so much for the read. You have magnificent writing skills. Your words are very eloquent. I am so glad that I found this story.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! You have really made my night by saying that! I have another fic here called Reconcilable Differences if you want to check that out....
What would make a family as close as the Weasleys turn its back on its youngest member? Ginny breaking Harry's heart might, as would her sleeping with Draco Malfoy. Too bad she's done both.Category: Long and Completed
I love the story, but I find it very hard to believe the Weasleys would react that way. I love how comforting Draco is...very sweet...Great job with your writing skills.
Author's Response: THis story came from the question, under any circumstances, would the Weasleys turn their back on Ginny, and I started wondering how I could manipulate everything to make her turn to the Malfoys instead. With the way Molly feels about Harry, how she treated Hermione when she thought she\'d broken up with Harry in book four, and a presumption as to the wizarding world\'s view on underage, single mothers, I came up with this idea. I think given Molly\'s strength of temper, it wouldn\'t be too off the mark to have her react that way, and Ron has seemed to favor Harry\'s feelings over Ginny\'s in the books at times. Arthur pretty much just follows his wife here, and the ones that would skirt around their mom\'s temper- the twins, Bill, and Charlie, all come around to Ginny\'s side in the story. I also used their reaction to Percy as a guide; all the kids sided against him, and any feeling Arthur and Molly would have gotten from the combination of Ginny\'s perceived treatment of Harry, the embarrassment and shame of her condition in the Wizarding world, and the insult of her siding with Draco Malfoy against them I presumed, would counteract the sympathy they had viewed Percy with.
Good story, I think it went to fast at times, and I would have liked more dialogue...could you possilby do a follow up so we can see how they grew closer together as man & wife?
Author's Response: I am working on some ideas for a sequel, but I\'d like to get Hearts and Soul parts done first, and work and school are still conspiring against me in the regard. Hopefully soon, there will be some progress on the sequel front- I\'m thinking about continuing Secrets of Slytherin Royalty, and a HP crossover of mine too. Time will tell. Thanks for the review.
Draco and Ginny hate each other with a passion. The end. Well, no, not really.Category: Long and Completed
this is a very cute and fun story, and I am really enjoying it. Great job.
What fun!!!! Nice job, I love the budding relationship aspect and the fact they are both fighting against it. The dialogue is superb.
Another lovely chapter, your technique and story telling skills are superb. Your plot flows nicely. Great chemistry between the characters. I love it.
OMG, I cannot believe you left that chapter hanging there like that....whatever shall I do while waiting for you to post??? Great job!
Over...over? But I wanted it to be long and drawn out? It was a good idea for a plot, original. This chapter was fantastic. I would like a sequel? Come on, where she has to tell the family, they continue to work together, she gets pregnant and then he worries about her...pretty please? It's just there seems to be a shortage of good fics and good writers nowadays, and you are definetely a great writer. I hope you write more very soon. Thanks for a great story.
What really happened in the DH Epilogue of Doom. Poor, poor Harry, so very clueless...Category: Works in Progress
Chapter SIXTY-NINE quote of the day:
Ginny scowled at him. “You don’t know me very well.”
Draco shook his head, his eyes more sorrowful than ever. “No. I don’t. Eternity wouldn’t be long enough for that.”
“Why do I feel as if we’ve suddenly wandered into the set of a men’s cologne commercial?” complained Lucifer.
“Can’t you keep your damn mouth shut, Lucifer?” spat Draco.
“Please… really… I don’t think you should talk to him that way,” whispered Ginny.
This is really different than anything I have read so far!
Can't they ever be truly happy?
Moves kinda fast for me...
This story is kinda confusing for me..I don't understand the timeline.
I am utterly confused.
I need a timeline for each chapter..that might help...but I am so lost!
Miss Weasley,Category: Works in Progress
The War has caused a drop in the population of the wizarding world. To correct the situation, the International Confederation of Wizards is arranging marriages for every witch and wizard of age. The marriages are determined by a soul mate spell. Each couple will have to produce three children minimum. All forms of contraceptive are banned. Please come to the Ministry of Magic at 9:00 on Monday morning to be paired with your soul mate. If you do not show up to receive your fiancé(e) on the date above, you will be exiled from the wizarding world.
Sincerely,
Rufus Scrimgeour
Minister of Magic
Love the plot idea, however I think it is moving too fast. Everyone is emotionless and the dialogue is predictable. You need to be new and inventive...give some background, some emotion and throw in some character depth..I will see where this is headed.
The dialogue isn't working for me...Regarless of the situation, Hermione would not talk to Prof Snape like that. I like the plot line, so I am sticking with it....I just need to see some meat of the story!
This chapter flowed a bit better, but was still a tad rushed.