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Mom of 3 kids, single...filling my nights with fan-fic, lol. I love to read, love Draco & Ginny...and would love to help anyone with their stories...
Reviews by luvtheweasleys

Oh Dear God: The Smut Cookie by Myanceris    (Reviews - 17)

The Expanded Smut scenes from my fic 'Oh Dear God'. NC-17 rated. AGE WARNING!!! In this fic Ginny is 15 and Draco is 16. If this is a problem to you, Please DON'T READ THE FIC.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Angst, Drama, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 10542 | Read count: 4706 | Published: Mar 29, 2005 | Updated: May 21, 2005
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Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Mar 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Amelioration and Absolution

Absolutely amazing, mind-boggling sex!! Fantastic, dear....I so want a follow up story!!!! I need to know what happens...pregnancy...I would love to watch how Draco deals with a pregnancy in detail, and a really good birth scene and the first year with a little one...hehe!!!

Sweet Bondage by MercyAller1977    (Reviews - 564)

Life after Hogwarts was a mystery to Ginny Weasley, until one night she spent in the arms of Draco Malfoy changed everything. Now she has to deal with the unforseeable consequences. Will she be able to handle the hand fate had dealt her with?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 19 | Word count: 186966 | Read count: 40281 | Published: May 03, 2005 | Updated: Apr 08, 2006
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Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Jan 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I am having a hard time with this story. The main plot is fine, it reminds me a bit of another fic on here, Dragon and Angel...but all the other "stories" that are entertwined here are a bit distracting from the main story. This is a Draco/Ginny story, so the mess with Bill, Fleur...it all distracts from the story. I don't like it. I also think Draco is deserving of more depth and feeling...you make him sound like the worst prick to walk the planet, when all in all, he was made that way...I am sure somewhere down deep, the wonder Draco has some feeling and some heart, and I would have liked to see it more in this story, ecspecially where Ginny and his children are concerned....The writing flows for the most part, but can be a bit choppy from times, ecspecially when you change topics. I was an English major in college, and if you ever need any help, let me know....but I just wish you would stick to the main story and stop going off on the many tangents that distract the reader..Who friggin cares about Bill? Personally, who cares about Ron, and Hermione and Potter...the whole Blaise triangle makes my head hurt. I have seen Blaise portrayed expertly as Draco's best friend, and one who befriends Ginny, like in Misconceptions...but this is just too much, that he is BFF with Harry Friggin Potter....I like the story for most part..again, I want you to know you have entertained me for several hours, but I feel it deserves much more attention and depth. Good luck...you have a talent, so please harvest it...

The Broken Road by CliodnaHPFan    (Reviews - 299)

Ginny Weasley has gone through a string of men, even suffering through a stint being married to the Savior of the Wizarding World. She keeps her pain bottled up inside, until when she finally snaps, she does something drastic that changes her world forever.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 21 | Word count: 79473 | Read count: 132021 | Published: Aug 11, 2005 | Updated: Mar 03, 2006
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Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Feb 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: 15 :: Revivifying, Part I

I am really beginning to enjoy this story..You are one of my favorite authors, you have a knack for creating a beatiful fun story that develops the relationships and draws your readers in...Great job.

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Feb 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 :: Happy Endings

I must say, I wish there was another chapter, or a follow up story...this ending leaves me wanting more.

The Little Child to Lead Them by StrangerWithMyFace    (Reviews - 46)

Draco Malfoy is a horrible person. Lord Voldemort wants an heir. Can Draco meet the greatest challenge of his life: fatherhood?
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 11 | Word count: 88830 | Read count: 50277 | Published: Aug 23, 2005 | Updated: Aug 23, 2005
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Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Apr 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Never Go Home Again

Hmm...moved rather fast and lacked emotion from everyone. The plot didn't make much sense to me, but I will wait and see what the next one brings.

My Anything by Eienvine    (Reviews - 363)

It's an old spell and an older oath, and Draco Malfoy would have laughed them off were he not in his present situation. Things being as they are, however, being married to Ginny Weasley might just be the answer to his problems. Pre-HBP.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 21 | Word count: 119113 | Read count: 222144 | Published: Sep 20, 2005 | Updated: Oct 16, 2006
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Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Mar 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Bravo, I love it!

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Date: Mar 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

There are some annoying spelling and grammar errors in this chapter, but I am still enchanted.

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Mar 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five

but how will they eventually break the oath and fall in love, hmmmm...curious.

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Mar 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six

I really enjoyed the banter between them in that chapter. The dialogue is impeccable. Well done, I love it.

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Mar 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Oh that was so classic!!! You let me know when you are going to have a book at Barnes& Noble for sale, I want to stand in line to buy it.

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Mar 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Oh, this vacation sounds like fun...another exciting chapter, way to go!!!!

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Mar 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

Another fantastic chapter!!!

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Date: Mar 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

ahhhhhh.....come on already!!! They both want there to be something more...ADMIT IT!!!!

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Mar 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen

Finally!!! That was truly beautiful the way he stuck up for her.

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Date: Mar 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen

ok, I cried.....that was such a heart wrenching story...I felt like I was there, you told it with such detail.

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Mar 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen

Ahh, Ginny take back that oath!!!!!! That was a very fun chapter, I liked seeing the family interaction.

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Mar 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen

GRRRRRR....that one did not make me happy at all.

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Mar 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty

The last two chapters didn't work for me and didn't seem to fit the story, they were completely opposite of your writing style. The previous chapters were slow going and detailed filled with emotion. These last two were so fast, way too hurried and without the depth of previous chapters. The end result was good, but I would have liked it more to your style.

Vineyard Summer by jessica k malfoy    (Reviews - 387)

Ginny Weasley is sent to stay with her grandparents until the war ends, as her parents want to keep her out of harm's way. Her grandparents have another guest, another person in hiding, and a relationship quickly blossoms between them. However, with the war and so many secrets around them, Ginny isn't sure how to make it work. Fluffy occasionally, but things can't always be perfect, can they? Decisions have to be made and consequences dealt with.

For a fleeting moment, she imagined that they would never hear from their families again, that they would remain together in Tuscany until they were old and gray, with great-grandchildren. Much to her surprise, the thought didn’t make her as sad as she thought it should.

Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Blood
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 23 | Word count: 123807 | Read count: 65510 | Published: Sep 24, 2005 | Updated: Jul 25, 2011
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Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Apr 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to Tuscany

ok...cute idea.

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Date: Apr 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: White flags, white skirts

I am not "buying" the relationship yet..it is too fake, so apparently they are still in the let's use each other stage.....

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Apr 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Bad News, Bad Advice

A bit of a solemn chapter. I do like the story though...Draco is very sweet.

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Nov 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Hope and Other Pretty Things

The beginning of caring...

Hereditas by thememory    (Reviews - 42)

When Malfoy Manor is targeted by Death Eaters, Draco and his mother are forced to stay with the Weasley's for the summer. Tensions are high, nerves are on edge. Strange things keep happening. What happens when they just can't take it anymore? Post HBP.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Action
Warnings: Blood
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 17737 | Read count: 14537 | Published: Nov 01, 2005 | Updated: Jan 12, 2006
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Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: May 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Goodnight

I am not sure about this story, not enough character development and I still believe it is moving too quickly, there is no background or solid basis. There seems to be way too much angry from everyone, and for me, imo, the story moves around too much with it being "told" in a rather odd way. Like, it isn't flowing from the characters itself but rather "another person from the outside" and it just seems odd to me. I am sticking with the story though, because I think that you have a nice PLOT idea, you just need it developed a bit more. I am rooting for this story!

Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: May 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Faint

I think Draco comes across as stupid in this story, and I could never believe that Narcissa wouldn't stand by her son through anything, she loves him too much to blame him for anything....

Unspoken love by JuliusCaesar    (Reviews - 9)

Love cannot always be announced from the rooftops and rejoiced in.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 601 | Read count: 2605 | Published: Nov 25, 2005 | Updated: Nov 25, 2005
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Reviewer: luvtheweasleys Signed
Date: Jun 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Unspoken love

Wow...that is to so sad. A love that could never live, never thrive...hidden by secrets from so long ago. Very touching.
It would be very interesting to see this story panned out into a much longer version, to fill in all the blanks, to know the fierce love they once shared...but I know not everyone has that kind of time!