The Expanded Smut scenes from my fic 'Oh Dear God'. NC-17 rated. AGE WARNING!!! In this fic Ginny is 15 and Draco is 16. If this is a problem to you, Please DON'T READ THE FIC.Category: Works in Progress
Absolutely amazing, mind-boggling sex!! Fantastic, dear....I so want a follow up story!!!! I need to know what happens...pregnancy...I would love to watch how Draco deals with a pregnancy in detail, and a really good birth scene and the first year with a little one...hehe!!!
Life after Hogwarts was a mystery to Ginny Weasley, until one night she spent in the arms of Draco Malfoy changed everything. Now she has to deal with the unforseeable consequences. Will she be able to handle the hand fate had dealt her with?Category: Works in Progress
I am having a hard time with this story. The main plot is fine, it reminds me a bit of another fic on here, Dragon and Angel...but all the other "stories" that are entertwined here are a bit distracting from the main story. This is a Draco/Ginny story, so the mess with Bill, Fleur...it all distracts from the story. I don't like it. I also think Draco is deserving of more depth and feeling...you make him sound like the worst prick to walk the planet, when all in all, he was made that way...I am sure somewhere down deep, the wonder Draco has some feeling and some heart, and I would have liked to see it more in this story, ecspecially where Ginny and his children are concerned....The writing flows for the most part, but can be a bit choppy from times, ecspecially when you change topics. I was an English major in college, and if you ever need any help, let me know....but I just wish you would stick to the main story and stop going off on the many tangents that distract the reader..Who friggin cares about Bill? Personally, who cares about Ron, and Hermione and Potter...the whole Blaise triangle makes my head hurt. I have seen Blaise portrayed expertly as Draco's best friend, and one who befriends Ginny, like in Misconceptions...but this is just too much, that he is BFF with Harry Friggin Potter....I like the story for most part..again, I want you to know you have entertained me for several hours, but I feel it deserves much more attention and depth. Good luck...you have a talent, so please harvest it...
Ginny Weasley has gone through a string of men, even suffering through a stint being married to the Savior of the Wizarding World. She keeps her pain bottled up inside, until when she finally snaps, she does something drastic that changes her world forever.Category: Long and Completed
I am really beginning to enjoy this story..You are one of my favorite authors, you have a knack for creating a beatiful fun story that develops the relationships and draws your readers in...Great job.
I must say, I wish there was another chapter, or a follow up story...this ending leaves me wanting more.
Draco Malfoy is a horrible person. Lord Voldemort wants an heir. Can Draco meet the greatest challenge of his life: fatherhood?Category: Long and Completed
Hmm...moved rather fast and lacked emotion from everyone. The plot didn't make much sense to me, but I will wait and see what the next one brings.
It's an old spell and an older oath, and Draco Malfoy would have laughed them off were he not in his present situation. Things being as they are, however, being married to Ginny Weasley might just be the answer to his problems. Pre-HBP.Category: Long and Completed
There are some annoying spelling and grammar errors in this chapter, but I am still enchanted.
but how will they eventually break the oath and fall in love, hmmmm...curious.
I really enjoyed the banter between them in that chapter. The dialogue is impeccable. Well done, I love it.
Oh that was so classic!!! You let me know when you are going to have a book at Barnes& Noble for sale, I want to stand in line to buy it.
Oh, this vacation sounds like fun...another exciting chapter, way to go!!!!
Another fantastic chapter!!!
ahhhhhh.....come on already!!! They both want there to be something more...ADMIT IT!!!!
Finally!!! That was truly beautiful the way he stuck up for her.
ok, I cried.....that was such a heart wrenching story...I felt like I was there, you told it with such detail.
Ahh, Ginny take back that oath!!!!!! That was a very fun chapter, I liked seeing the family interaction.
GRRRRRR....that one did not make me happy at all.
The last two chapters didn't work for me and didn't seem to fit the story, they were completely opposite of your writing style. The previous chapters were slow going and detailed filled with emotion. These last two were so fast, way too hurried and without the depth of previous chapters. The end result was good, but I would have liked it more to your style.
Ginny Weasley is sent to stay with her grandparents until the war ends, as her parents want to keep her out of harm's way. Her grandparents have another guest, another person in hiding, and a relationship quickly blossoms between them. However, with the war and so many secrets around them, Ginny isn't sure how to make it work. Fluffy occasionally, but things can't always be perfect, can they? Decisions have to be made and consequences dealt with.Category: Works in ProgressFor a fleeting moment, she imagined that they would never hear from their families again, that they would remain together in Tuscany until they were old and gray, with great-grandchildren. Much to her surprise, the thought didn’t make her as sad as she thought it should.
ok...cute idea.
I am not "buying" the relationship yet..it is too fake, so apparently they are still in the let's use each other stage.....
A bit of a solemn chapter. I do like the story though...Draco is very sweet.
The beginning of caring...
When Malfoy Manor is targeted by Death Eaters, Draco and his mother are forced to stay with the Weasley's for the summer. Tensions are high, nerves are on edge. Strange things keep happening. What happens when they just can't take it anymore? Post HBP.Category: Works in Progress
I am not sure about this story, not enough character development and I still believe it is moving too quickly, there is no background or solid basis. There seems to be way too much angry from everyone, and for me, imo, the story moves around too much with it being "told" in a rather odd way. Like, it isn't flowing from the characters itself but rather "another person from the outside" and it just seems odd to me. I am sticking with the story though, because I think that you have a nice PLOT idea, you just need it developed a bit more. I am rooting for this story!
I think Draco comes across as stupid in this story, and I could never believe that Narcissa wouldn't stand by her son through anything, she loves him too much to blame him for anything....
Love cannot always be announced from the rooftops and rejoiced in.Category: Completed Short Stories
Wow...that is to so sad. A love that could never live, never thrive...hidden by secrets from so long ago. Very touching.
It would be very interesting to see this story panned out into a much longer version, to fill in all the blanks, to know the fierce love they once shared...but I know not everyone has that kind of time!