Ginny has a moment of abject stupidity. Now what is she supposed to do?Category: Long and Completed
Aw, Draco was so sweet! In a horny teenage boy fashion, but still. Loved it, as always. :-)
Author's Response: He was about as considerate as an 18 year old male can be.
Harry always gets in the way, doesn't he? Rather annoying if you ask me. Pansy being all accusatory was amusing, especially in light of the fact that they're friends and she doesn't have designs on becoming Mrs. Malfoy. Or maybe she does? And Blaise was great as well.
Author's Response: I do love Pansy and Blaise. They are so much fun to play with.
I'm in an interpersonal communications class and we were talking about pupil dilation the other day. The majority of the guys thought it was crap, and half the girls swore up and down that they've noticed it before. Can't say that I have, though.
I was thinking Lavender meant he'd shagged Cho while dating Ginny, and then it'd be really easy for them to break up, but no luck. Once again, Pansy and Blaise make everything even better.
Author's Response: I can\'t say that I\'ve noticed the pupil dilation myself, but there is scientific data to back it up. Thanks for the review. : )
only some smacks on the arm? really? that was kind of a letdown. :-D and apparently i'm crap at reviewing this, cause it's been a few. but, as always, i love it, so keep going! you have so many freakin' plot bunnies, and they all turn out so well. i'm insanely jealous, and would do something about it if it weren't for finals.
Lol, love Blaise's reaction. And let's hope Pansy *does* make it bad, cause then when Ron gets furious, Ginny can point out that it isn't as horrible as he thinks. He'll still be mad, sure, but less so when he realizes she isn't shagging in the great hall or about to give birth to Draco's love child.
Author's Response: I\'ll have to try to come up with a fun way for PAnsy to break the news to Ron.
how very fifties of Draco, pinning his girl. :-D I laughed at Lavender & Pansy's crown-swapping gossip session. This isn't over, I hope?
Ginny is in a new world after the war. Then Draco shows up along with some companions he wouldn't normally have.Category: Works in Progress
There were a few minor spelling/grammatical errors still in there, so you might want to go through the chaps again. Slow work, I know. And I'm pretty sure last chapter you said they had a Honda Civic, and in this one you mention their Benz on the driveway. Free car? Draco's so sweet, upgrading it for them. Some of the story seems a bit far-fetched, but I suppose there could be background tidbits we don't know. Maybe Lucius told Draco about the attack in NY, and Draco's really not a DE and so packed up w/ the trio and hightailed it to LA? But how did they know that's where she was? Especially if she's dyed her hair (I missed that bit)
Author's Response: thanks for mentioning the car thing. I fixed that.
Ginny makes a brave attempt to get on with her life after she splits from Draco by going on a date with Oliver Wood, but finds it's not as easy as she hopes.Category: Completed Short Stories
yaaay they got back together! I was worried this was going to be an angsty fic where she just pines over the love that was. Very sweet, and as handsome as Oliver was, good thing Ginny got back w/ Draco.
Sometimes, you just want to be someone else.Category: Completed Short Stories
The whole thing was nice-'n'-fluffy, and the last two statements made it even better.
Author's Response: Thank you. I think we need more fluff. Fluff makes the world a warmer fuzzier place.
Ginny decides to have everyone over for dinner. It doesn't go as she expected.Category: Completed Short Stories
oh good god. the Indians, and the Harry and Ron in the pantry, and the bitching grandmothers (well, not yet). Don't even get me started on the three of them together. for once, my family seems tame. and I've always thought the British must get rather bored between Halloween and Christmas, so bravo for Ginny having Thanksgiving anyway.
She knew what the Order would think, if they could see her: Poor Ginny Weasley, who had been seduced by darkness. Well, the truth was, darkness hadn’t really had to try very hard.Category: Completed Short Stories
First in the 'His' trilogy
Well. It was sweet and fluffy, and I loved it. And it was icky and slightly morbid and I disliked it. So, basically, good job; you've made me conflicted, which usually doesn't happen.
Author's Response: I\'m glad I could cause the conflict. I really wanted to keep him bad and her good and show that they could still honestly love each other. Thank you for the review!
Draco is working for the Ministry as an Invisible, an elite and unknown Auror, while the rest of the world thinks he's six-feet under. On a mission in New York he goes into a pub where he thinks he's met the barmaid before. The red hair should really be a tip-off.Category: Works in Progress
aw, that's it? I am very intrigued. Why did Draco become an Invisible? Was it a switch-off, he gave them info and they made him "disappear'? Is he a good guy? or are you ignoring the war? that'd work too. And why is Ginny there? Is it her bar? And please don't kill her; I was so sad when they killed Marie in "Supremacy". arggh! so many questions!
Ginny has a series of encounters that her family would not approve of. Can something come from nothing? Is she doomed to disappointment?Category: Completed Short Stories
Damn that Harry for sleeping around on Ginny. On the other hand, it was necessary. Perfectly lovely, and it was very visual. Which doesn't make sense, because there wasn't much description, but I can just picture the nightclub and what color shirt Draco was wearing and everyone dancing around.
Author's Response: Thank you. For some reason, I think the idea of the dance club makes it easier to see the action. We all have an image of what that type of club would be like.
Harry's not the husband Ginny had wanted him to be. One day a person from her past shows up on the couch to break some heartbreaking news and to try to fix it.Category: Long and Completed
eek, harry was in there for quite a while before he finally left. There are a few spelling/grammatical errors (shab carpeting, rubush), but I'm prone to noticing those things so no sweat.
Clever little prank. And I absolutely love Blaise, but he's a bit kinky isn't he? Love the story, now that Draco's realized he really does love her and won't be pulling anything horrible again. At least, I hope.
When Ginny returns home after months of work she sees that many things are different and, unable to cope, she flees from the Burrow. What she doesn't know is that things in her own life are about to take an interesting turn when she runs into Draco Malfoy.Category: Long and Completed
It was kind of confusing in bits, and I'm really surprised at how anti-Muggle everyone's being. What's the deal? I mean, I understand them being upset when he just appears at the Burrow--they don't know him and it's their (heavily concealed) home--but it might be a touch too much.
Love the chapter titles--is the next going to be heart of life? or perhaps moving back to a classic like great indoors? (after skimming other reviews: has no one else noted the songs? huh. thought there'd be more jm fans...)
Author's Response: Well, I just randomly downloaded one of his CDs. I don\'t really like him, but he\'\'s all right.
Every year it was the same routine. The entirety of the Ministry’s Auror division held a little shindig on their own time to celebrate Father Christmas’s annual trip around the world.Category: Completed Short Stories
very cute n fluffy, and nice and christmasy. quick thing: "I would’ve thought you’d have realised by now how hard it is to admonish me" I think you meant "astonish".
Author's Response: Thank you. And I\'ll look over that line again in context. Thanks for pointing it out!
Twenty three year old Draco lives at Grimmauld Place with The Order members. He decides to make a move on Ginny.Category: Completed Short Stories
Aw! I never read this before, I love it! I love that Draco is still snarky while being romantic; it fits his character and it isn't as far-fetched (and gag-worthy) as Draco who becomes all sweet the whole time.
A series of drabbles depicting Ginny and Draco's holiday experience.Category: Works in Progress
very interesting setup, I've never read anything arranged like this (although I will be off to read your inspiration piece next). It's very short, but it entertains and gives a good character sketch.
One nitpick: I think the days of Christmas start *on* Christmas, the Epiphany being just after Twelfth Night
Twelve days can be a lifetime, yet Epiphany must always come.Category: Completed Short Stories
Okay, I am completely confused. First, I thought he had discovered her and was healing her (and she didn't have a relationship with him). Then, you reveal they had a kid, she thought he was dead; I'm good so far. But then I'm lost. Has she been kept captive and it's all faked? Have they just left together? Or was it all a hallucination & she's been dying in the snow the whole time? I think it's the last one, but I'm not really sure. At all.
Anyway, other than that, it was good. I love your writing style; it's very descriptive without being flowery or ornate.
Author's Response: Well, all of those guesses are partly true. But, to clarify, they\'re both dead before the story starts. He died on the way to the safehouse; she died in the snow. It was meant to be ironic at the beginning that she guesses the truth that is later revealed. Draco was keeping her captive without even really thinking about it. He really did think that he was going outside, even though he wasn\'t. The cottage is an in between place, for them to reconcile and resolve their differences before moving on; the story is an exploration of life after death, in a way. I used the twelve days of Christmas mode because the twelve days (which is plenty of time to have it out) lead up to Epiphany, which is the revelation of God in human form (Jesus), but the word today also means any sort of profound realization, and I also liked the religious overtones it set, especially for birth/rebirth (to a new \'life\' together) in the context of death, since it was both fitting but also ironic. So you could also say it\'s some sort of hallucination.\r\n
\r\nHopefully that clears it up some. Your confusion follows the path of Ginny\'s awakening to the truth, so that\'s a good thing. Thanks for reading!
Two co-workers decide that something needs to be done about the excesses of Christmas spirit.Category: Completed Short Stories
I love Ginny & Draco the pranksters. The story was sweet and amusing, and is there possibly more coming? it *is* chaptered...
History tends to repeat itself and someone always needs protecting.Category: Completed Short Stories
Ooh, interesting, having both Ginny and Lily be involved in this. And it could explain part of why Snape's so against Harry. Still, for some reason it seems a bit implausible; at least the Harry being Snape's not James's part. The story, though a bit confusing at times, was good.
Author's Response: Although implausible--we all know it\'s implausible for a D/G chance to exist in canon--I still feel like there was so much in the text that could hint at the possibility. Anyway, thank you for reading, reviewing, and liking the fic despite the confusing bits!
When Harry leaves Ginny for Hermione, Draco decides it's time to fulfill an old fantasy. Twenty five is a little old to experience her first one night stand, but Ginny thinks she can handle it.Category: Works in Progress
Arghh! Draco is SUCH a git. A thick-headed, commitment-phobic, stupid, silly boy. I hope Pansy knocks some sense into him, and Blaise, too. Draco won't just listen to Pansy.
I was so ready for him to agree to her plan (a good compromise, if you ask me. and besides, he LIKES having sex with her; he'd be basically guaranteed amazing, mind-blowing sex. Again, why is he not taking her up on the offer? idiot.) Hopefully, there will only be one more--or, at most, two more--chapters of angst before they finally get together. Get it together and get together! hmph.
ouch. Okay, now you have to do more where she gets back at Draco somehow. He got to fulfill his high school (or whatever) fantasy, now she gets to do something. Use him for a change. And I really like Ron & Pansy; they were cute and slightly ooc, but I like BrazenHussy!Pansy when she's not all over Draco, and Ballsy!Ron was adorable. Book soup, anyone?
Author's Response: Ginny went into the situation with her eyes open. I think Pansy and Ron\'s relationship will contrast nicely with how Draco does things.
haha, I love the ending. I love this story, because I really can't figure out how long it's going to take Draco to come to his senses. I was thinking a long time, but now Blaise has alerted Draco that he's interested as well, Draco may move more quickly. And I just love Pansy and Ron. They're so cute, getting all flustered before their date. Please write more scenes about their budding relationship!