Very nice!

Dark, twisted, perfect, hopeful. I am very impressed by your writing and I think you´ve managed to show how difficult life must be for Draco.

Luna is always excellent for comic relief; another very welll written chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks! I don\'t use Luna too often in my fics, but she seemed to work well in this one :)

This is a brilliant line: "Unhand the woman, get the spiders out of my department and don't let me see you for the rest of the day,"

Author's Response: Kingsley was actually showing a great deal of self control here. He really wanted to throttle Draco ;)

Well done! Your portrayal of Ginny is almost as good as Draco´s (he is the star of the fic, but I suppose that depends on who is reading). I loved how Draco stated that he is shy, and you managed to get hospital-awkwardness just right.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, Draco is the star ;) Draco may not be shy in some areas, but there are simply some tasks he\'s used to accomplishing without an audience ;)

I really really liked it.

Author's Response: Thank you for all your wonderful reviews :) I\'m glad you enjoyed it!

“On a shallow, physical level, Malfoy is completely hot.”
I couldn´t agree more. But I assume that we´ll get to the part of his romance-novel-esque personality. Oh my , was that even a word? *scratches head*
Anyway, I loved it.

Author's Response: More r-n-e personality will be forthcoming. : )

Really, it’s not my fault I’m having Malfoy’s love child. We were at the beach.

(I wonder why there aren´t more fics in which Draco goes swimming. Such a nice mental image. Again, well written, and well done.)

“Wonderful, my life will now be influenced by a girl who thinks vegetables are accessories.

(Have I mentioned that I love this fic?)

Wow, very intense. And also exceedingly well written.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and for reviewing :-)

I am so happy about the update. I really like your story, especially Draco in his dual role of father and murderer. Him showing his darker and more powerful side is extremely interesting, I´d love to see more of this. Another thing I´d like to see is how he interacts with deatheaters or Lord Voldemort, when Ginny is not present. But seeing how your fic is mostly from Ginny´s POV, I can understand perfectly if this won´t come to be.

Let me stress again how much I am enjoying your work before I get to the teeny tiny criticism I have.

“That would be quite a site.” -> It should be "sight".

And after reading all 17 chapters, it does get slighty annoying to have either Ginny or Draco say "Libby, we would like something to eat." or "Libby, we would like a bath." and so on more or less once a chapter. Don´t get me wrong, I do not complain about the rights of house-elves, I´d just like another way of expressing their use. Something among the lines of "Ginny called Libby and asked her to draw a bath, which was promtly done." or "Draco demanded dinner, which he elf was happy to supply.".

Wow, that was an impressive scene, a man murdered over dinner and no one seems bothered. But it makes sense, seeing which circles Draco and Lucius move in.

I wonder whether (or when) the story will shift to Hermione and Snape again, will the play a bigger role? Also, I am very interested in the fate of the Weasley clan, I wonder what happened to all of them. It might help with developing Ginny´s character to see some more of how she deals with suddenly standing on the other side of the war.

And even though this goind to sound very fangirly: Your version of Draco is hot.

Author's Response: Why do we find someone who would kill for us hot? It\'s slightly disturbing...