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The Devil You Know by CCC    (Reviews - 1004)

Ginny is twenty four, and the war rages on. Draco is a Death Eater, and he needs her help. Of course, he doesn't give her a choice. Now she's surrounded by the enemy. She begins to see that not everything is black and white. Can she come to terms with her new role in his life?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Action, Angst, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 34 | Word count: 69661 | Read count: 218430 | Published: Sep 26, 2007 | Updated: Sep 28, 2010
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Date: Mar 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I like the bit about him saying that what they have is real. It's very touching.

Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Lucius Malfoy is such a charmer *snorts*

I'd really like to know more about the world outside their house, the fate of everyone else, about Leo's mother and whether there is still a resistance or not, but since the story is from Ginny's POv and she doesn't know much, I think I'll remain in the dark a little while longer.

The baby is a nice new twist, I wonder where it will go from here.

The Family Dinner by CCC    (Reviews - 35)

Ginny decides to have everyone over for dinner. It doesn't go as she expected.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1085 | Read count: 5887 | Published: Nov 21, 2007 | Updated: Nov 21, 2007
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like everything about this fic. Everything. But especially that Draco calls her Ginevra. Yes, I am very easily pleased.

His Hands by livvyharris    (Reviews - 38)

She knew what the Order would think, if they could see her: Poor Ginny Weasley, who had been seduced by darkness. Well, the truth was, darkness hadn’t really had to try very hard.

First in the 'His' trilogy
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: His
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 826 | Read count: 7209 | Published: Nov 24, 2007 | Updated: Nov 24, 2007
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: His Hands

Good that started writing, seeing how well you do it. I really enjoyed this piece!

Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed it, thank you for the kind review :)

His Camellias by livvyharris    (Reviews - 21)

Companion/Sequel to His Hands, but both can be read on their own.

“My mother grows camellias in her greenhouse. They’re my favorite. I always thought they were the color of blood, but they’re the exact color of your hair. Whenever I see them now, I think of you.”

Second in the 'His' Trilogy
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: His
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 639 | Read count: 5429 | Published: Dec 08, 2007 | Updated: Dec 08, 2007
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: His Camellias

Just as good as the previous story. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! I always feel that a person\'s second work is really an indicator of whether the first one was a fluke. I\'m glad you enjoyed this one too.

Draco Stirs Things Up by CCC    (Reviews - 47)

Twenty three year old Draco lives at Grimmauld Place with The Order members. He decides to make a move on Ginny.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4315 | Read count: 8574 | Published: Dec 14, 2007 | Updated: Dec 14, 2007
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Brilliant! Very well done!

Potentially Damaged by Pipperstorms    (Reviews - 14)

After the war had finished, many of the Wizarding World’s finest heroes found themselves in need of a little extra help. That is where Healer Damion J. Lukinwinner of St. Mungo’s Mental Stability Ward comes in. He works with only the highest profile cases helping the best of the best get back to normal. Unfortunately it has been a rough day for him, and his most difficult patient is still yet to come.
This is what happens when you’re the daughter of a psychologist
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1132 | Read count: 3153 | Published: Jan 06, 2008 | Updated: Jan 06, 2008
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Mostly Stable

Clever, clever! I liked it.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, and taking the time to review!

Traitors by livvyharris    (Reviews - 27)

Companion/Prequel to His Hands, but both can be read on their own.

Draco Malfoy was a traitor. But then, so was Ginny Weasley, he supposed.

Third in the 'His' trilogy.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: His
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1941 | Read count: 5353 | Published: Jan 14, 2008 | Updated: Jan 14, 2008
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Traitors

So sweet, so sad. What a pity that there isn´t more of this.

Author's Response: Thank you, sweet and sad are exactly what I was going for. I really feel like I\'ve told the whole story, as it is in my head. It was originally supposed to be a oneshot, but it was really incomplete cause I had a lot more in my head than I put on paper. The story, as I imagined it, has now been completely told. I\'m flattered you liked it enough to want more. :)

The Artist by CindaEdna    (Reviews - 101)

When a serial killer who leaves behind no evidence plagues Muggle London, Scotland Yard is at a loss. It's a good thing they have a wizard in their employ. Join the investigation and the race to find the butcher before he strikes again.

A Harry Potter psychological thriller. AU after OotP.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Graphic Violence, Non-consensual sex, Sexual Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 35258 | Read count: 12440 | Published: Jan 21, 2008 | Updated: May 18, 2012
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Date: May 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Shadows and Roses

This is very dark, I wonder where it is going. Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: May 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Bad Day

Hmm, so is Jude Tonks´ sister? Again, well done. I can´t wait for Gin to appear and to read some more about Draco´s past.

Author's Response: Yep.  This is AU after book five, and I decided to take some liberties with Tonk's background.  I hope you don't mind.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I'm glad you liked it.  :) 

To Be a God by Pipperstorms    (Reviews - 20)

I come here, before you, the Order of the Phoenix, not to beg forgiveness, as many of you think I should. But rather, I come with a warning: they know where you are and what you intend to do. They have made their mission to stop you, to kill you, and to rule the world as they see fit. I see you now, murmuring about yourselves, presumably asking if I, with a Dark Mark burned into my arm, can be trusted. If I were you, I doubt I would trust me either.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2011 | Read count: 3374 | Published: Mar 25, 2008 | Updated: Mar 25, 2008
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: To Be a God

I am very touched. I like this version of Draco, very mature, responsible and yet completely in character.

Author's Response: Thank you! I was trying for something of a more mature version of him, somewhat hardened by war.

The First Five Times by ticklemeemoscam    (Reviews - 40)

A short one-shot based on The First Five Times by Stars. Some smut, some one liners, and in keeping with the song, some sap.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2784 | Read count: 3099 | Published: Apr 20, 2008 | Updated: Apr 20, 2008
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well done!

The Fundamental Things Apply by Ruhne    (Reviews - 19)

Ginny wonders why Draco doesn't care.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3041 | Read count: 3067 | Published: Apr 29, 2008 | Updated: Apr 29, 2008
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: May 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: A kiss is just a kiss

This is an excellent piece, especially if it´s your first. I am very impressed and always delighted when Draco calls her Ginevra. Well done.

Author's Response: I know. Makes me go all warm and fuzzy inside when he uses her full name : )

Cowards by livvyharris    (Reviews - 49)

"He hasn’t woken up beside her in almost twenty years, but he still wakes each morning thinking she’s there."

Nineteen years later, Astoria watches her husband and Ginny Potter at the train station.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Other Characters
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 712 | Read count: 4844 | Published: Apr 30, 2008 | Updated: Apr 30, 2008
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: May 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Cowards

This is excellent. The last sentence is very strong, and captures the despair and maybe the contempt Astoria must feel perfectly. Very well done!

Author's Response: Yes! That is exactly what I was going for! :) I almost called this story the Gryffindor, just because I wanted to maximize on the contempt. I don\'t think Astoria is a bad person, but I think she would be extremely put out with Ginny for being such a coward and putting them all in such a mess, particularly because she\'s such a proud Gryffindor. I don\'t think Astoria\'s necessarily being fair or looking at it from all points of view, but I do think her feelings would be, justifiably, mingled pity and anger for the situation. I\'m glad you enjoyed the fic, thank you for the great review. :)

The Nineteen Years in Between by rrunawayromance    (Reviews - 25)

Nineteen years after the Deathly Hallows, Harry and Ginny are married but their eldest son is just twelve years old. This story is about those missing seven years: six of which Ginny spent slapping, snogging and falling in love with Draco Malfoy.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1584 | Read count: 739 | Published: May 07, 2008 | Updated: May 08, 2008
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: May 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Nineteen Years Later

This is very good, I like how you incorporate the evil epilogue in this. I wonder whether there will be more?

Notes on Falling Out of Love by fallingskyes    (Reviews - 281)

It's hard to learn how to live without that one person you thought would be in your life forever. But Ginny Weasley had always been a quick study, and there are always certain grey-eyed boys to help speed up the learning process...
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 19 | Word count: 36178 | Read count: 99536 | Published: May 15, 2008 | Updated: Dec 16, 2010
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Jul 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Dance. Jump in Puddles.

I like it! Can´t wait for the next chapter!

A Conversation After the War by livvyharris    (Reviews - 80)

Draco snorted. “You haven’t won. The Boy Wonder’s won. Don’t fool yourself Ginny, you’re nothing but a groupie.”
She looked at him with solemn eyes. “You’re wrong.”

Draco and Ginny have one last conversation.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1195 | Read count: 6155 | Published: Jul 25, 2008 | Updated: Jul 25, 2008
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Jul 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: One Last Conversation

I like how you manage to make it completely canon compliant and include a D/G love story as well. Okay, the there is more sadness than smiles in this fic, but that works really well for the situation they are in. Last lines are heart-breaking, by the way, because they portray Ginny as a broken woman.

Author's Response: Thanks! I think Ginny was completely eclipsed in that epilogue. I\'d rather think that she at least knew real love and passion, even if she didn\'t get a happily ever after with Draco. I\'m glad you enjoyed it. :)

Contractual Obligations by gidge_8    (Reviews - 751)

Selling herself into a marriage contract, Ginny finds herself playing a deadly game, ultimately pitting her husband against her lover and a father against his son. Many twists and turns, depth and evil characters - and a long story of sweet and true love.

New! Epilogue is up! Yes, I know, the story has been "complete" for a couple of years, but this ending has been partially written for a long time and it ties up some loose ends.

Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Non-consensual sex, Sexual Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 32 | Word count: 165632 | Read count: 101820 | Published: Sep 05, 2008 | Updated: Jan 05, 2014
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Nov 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Anything but a White Wedding

I am sure it was Draco. There was this line about aristocratic features and he did know her name, even though I do not remember her mentioning it to him. I like this story, well done!

Author's Response: Hopefully it will keep you guessing... :) Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Nov 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Appreciating the Unusual

They made Draco think of a pair of animated, garishly red-haired bookends.

Lovely piece of imagery. Well done!

Author's Response: I just *love* the twins. They seem to come out so very easily when I type. :)
Thank you!

Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Suspicious Activity

This story is fantastic. I'd love to say more, but there is another chapter waiting to be read and I cannot resist.

Author's Response: Wonderful to hear!!!! Your feedback means the world to me! Best wishes!!! - G

Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Apr 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - In the Company of Snakes

Your Lucius is both very human and scary, I think it's a very good mix.

Author's Response: Thank you! That's a huge compliment!!! I actually like him very much, because while he's quite evil, he doesn't think that he is. This story has been quite an adventure in psychology for me.

The World Inverted by rowan_greenleaf    (Reviews - 228)

Draco doesn't remember their past together, and now she's just a Weasley to him. Ginny will do anything -jump through all the hoops, pose as an interior decorator, tap dance -ANYTHING- to break the spell that erased his memory and make him love her again.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Narcissa Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 8 | Word count: 43535 | Read count: 18589 | Published: Oct 14, 2008 | Updated: Feb 12, 2009
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Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Jan 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: D Is For DRAGON

FINALLY! (Not as in finally an update, but as in finally, they have gotten back together.) I love love loved this chapter, and even though this is incredibly politically incorrect, a smoking Draco is über-hot.

I really enjoyed this chapter, thank you for sharing!

Author's Response:

Hey! Sorry for the delay in both the reply AND the chapter: I'm having computer trouble. *sulks*

I am happy to hear that you enjoyed this chapter! It's one of my favorites. :D

I'm editing the next one! ^_^

Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Nov 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: The Sex Doll

I really enjoy the story so far. Narcissa seems very out-of-character, but I like this different version of her. Another thing I am rather fond of is that whole Italian origin thing. Well done!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reviewing! Glad you're on board with this one as well. Narcissa seems like out of character? I dunno...I don't think we ever got much insight into her in canon, anyway, all we really know is she adores Draco. I've always thought she was just playing a role. Anyway, Narcissa's character here is the product of twenty years of emotional abuse at the hands of Lucius, so I think her defense mechanism of being always Happy! is understandable. Either way, I'm glad you like my portrayal! The Italian thing I already explained, but I should tell you I ALWAYS characterize Draco as part Veela, half Italian, which makes for a very powerful combination! :D

Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Nov 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: The Russian Period

Yay, an update! This was a lovely chapter, the Ron/Hermione interaction was sweet and even though I hate it when authors describe the clothes their characters are wearing in too much detail, the image of Draco in Jeans and Converse shoes is rather hot, I must say. But isn't it a bit out of character for him to wear muggle clothes from head to toe?

Author's Response:

Hey L! Thanks for taking the time to review! I'm glad you liked the chapter, and it's nice to hear I am capable of Ron/Hermione sweetness even when I hate that pairing! I think they're all wrong for each other! LOL.
Anyway, glad you liked the mental eye candy :D You're right in the sense that normally it would be OOC for Draco to dress like a Muggle, but, as you'll see in the next chapter, there have been a lot of changes in the wizarding world after the war. There's a new Muggle-loving Prime Minister of Magic, and he's steering society towards these changes. Draco woke up from a coma, he's not really paying mind to these things. In many senses he's just "going with the flow", and as you'll see in further chapters, it's fashionable to dress like that. ^_^
Again, this is not something you could have known just from reading up to now, so it was a good question. Very observant!
I hope you'll be a bit tolerant of my love of detail! I paint mental images almost obsessively and always describe hair and clothes, especially for the next chapter, which is the Ministry party! ^_^

Reviewer: LovelyLytton Signed
Date: Feb 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: The Boy Who Fainted

I enjoyed this fic and you wrote a very lovely ending to it! Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy to hear that. ^_^