Draco is behaving strangely. Ginny is becoming upset. Whatever may be going on? ;-) Christmas fluff, written for Persephone33!Category: Completed Short Stories
I did enjoy the story. I loved the plot and characterization of Draco, as well as his parents. What really annoyed me were the asterisks. I don't think that you needed them. I felt like the story was wonderful on it's own without the extra emphasis. Overall, though, great job!
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know! I\'ve taken care of it, so I hope now the story will be thoroughly enjoyable :) Thank you also for your kind words! Much appreciated!
Draco and Pansy are the perfect dungeon duo, but a secret from their past will change everything for them, and for any Gryffindors that get caught in the middle of it.Category: Long and Completed
Wonderdul chapter! I loved the last part, with Pansy and Harry sharing thoughts and all. Keep doing what you're doing--it's wonderful.
Draco and Ginny had a messy break up after Ron found out about their secret relationship. Each is trying to forget the other with little success. In the meantime, Draco is having an identity crisis about the war and where he fits into it, Narcissa is making trouble and Sirius is trying to keep her under control and out of Lupin's trousers.Category: Long and Completed
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it's a masterpiece, and i never get tired of reading it. c'mon, write some more!
What really happened in the DH Epilogue of Doom. Poor, poor Harry, so very clueless...Category: Works in Progress
Chapter SIXTY-NINE quote of the day:
Ginny scowled at him. “You don’t know me very well.”
Draco shook his head, his eyes more sorrowful than ever. “No. I don’t. Eternity wouldn’t be long enough for that.”
“Why do I feel as if we’ve suddenly wandered into the set of a men’s cologne commercial?” complained Lucifer.
“Can’t you keep your damn mouth shut, Lucifer?” spat Draco.
“Please… really… I don’t think you should talk to him that way,” whispered Ginny.
He showed her everything. What they didn’t get to the first day, after flying kites and riding boats and feeding swans, they did the next day, and the next. She realized, after spending seemingly endless weeks with him, that she didn’t want to go home, but go home she must.Category: Works in ProgressTen years have passed. They’ll always have Paris.
Oh. My. God.
Don't stop there! Awesome story...I've been following it for a couple of weeks now, but this is the first time I've reviewed. Usually I don't like fics that comply completely with DH, even the dreaded Epilogue. This, however, is a work of art. Your character development is amazing. Your adherence to the original story line is admirable. And I really enjoy that fact that none of your characters are the Mary-Sue type.
It is so hard to find readable fan fiction, and thankfully this site exists with authors such as yourself, producing awesome stories.
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Oh, thanks for reviewing then! I\'m so glad you\'re enjoying the characters, and I\'m pleased with how everyone is responding to this chapter. I\'ve tried my hardest to make this comply with the original story line. :) I\'m working on the update!
Ginny always knew there was something wrong with her eyes.Category: Completed Fiction
This is really great! I love your descriptions of her slow descent into blindness...
I can't wait to see what happens :D
From their first meeting in Diagon Alley until after Harry defeated the Dark Lord, Draco and Ginny have always been there.Category: Completed Short Stories
If there was a warning for FLUFF, I'd put it in there! :D
This is perfection, right here. You nailed all the lines without making them too forced, cheesy, or obvious. Here's to properly executed, fluffy, delicious songfic!
Oh, and the last three lines are amazing. Perfect ending; you really have the touch, girl.
The resistance is coming to an end: Harry races Voldemort in order to control the five Magical Sites that would enable a victory to overcome Voldemort's Elder Wand while the Hound, Echo, and the Thieves converge to overcome the Death Eaters.Category: Works in Progress
Meanwhile, near Old Kerry, a comatose patient suddenly disappears, and the number of freak murders and kidnapping by the old brothels and night-clubs seem to follow the pattern of a well-planned route of vengeance.
Ooooh, I like! More, please :P A little confusing, but all the best stories begin that way. I can't wait for an update!
Being selfish has its merits sometimes. Marcus Flint is selfish enough to bend every Death Eater rule to keep Katie Bell safe.Category: Completed Short Stories
(Companion piece/sequel to Somnambulist)
HOT! *fans self* *holds out hands for more awesome chapters* I am now officially in love with M/K. Or maybe it's just you...yeah, I think it's you.
Author's Response: Wow, not bad for my first attempt at writing them, then. :D From here on out we get to the main story, tho. So there's not quite as much smut. lol
Malfoys do not cry. Draco Malfoy learnt this unshakable rule at the tender age of three, but when has Draco ever followed the rules?Category: Completed Short Stories
*sniffle* so unfair. i loved the symmetry, and how, in the end, draco and his two year old cry over ginny's grave. so sad :(
Ginny is one of the few surviving Weasleys after the War. With little money to her name, she has been working a low end job at a nearby restaurant to pay for her Healer training. It's been a long four years, but she has finally made it and earned her license. Problem is: there's only one position available, and the very idea of it is appalling. Slightly AU.Category: Long and Completed
"You know what's ridiculous? I wrote that Draco's migraine went away, and the very next day, I had a migraine."
oh no! migraines are horrible...give draco as many as you need to keep yours away!
Author's Response: Haha! Noted. Thanks for reviewing!
Category: Completed Short Stories"I read (perhaps too carelessly) / A mingled feeling with my own" Unraveling Draco's defection.
this is GORGEOUS. i adore how draco loves ginny so intensely, he hates her. this is *so* him. i was also pretty taken with how you introduce her death. it was a total shock, and yet...it was kind of like a velvet fist; it makes an impression, but draco (and me! the reader) doesn't really notice the hurt that it inflicts until the very end, when he wishes she's in hell for leaving him alone with people who don't trust him, who are locking him in after he's let this unassuming girl break down all of his defenses. bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I was really trying with my Draco characterization in this one, glad it's getting across well. I really intended that to be sort of out of the blue. It's why I put it so bluntly... but 'velvet fist' is an excellent term I never would have expected to be on the recieving end of. Thanks!
Ginny finally has everything she's ever wanted. The boy of her dreams, top grades, and a way to finally break into the Golden Trio. When perfection turns out to be less than perfect she finds herself seeking solace in another journal. When this journal writes back, she is understandably worried—until she discovers the person writing back is a fellow student. A fellow student who refuses to divulge his identity. Does she want to know who this mystery person is? Or has she already revealed too much of herself?Category: Works in Progress
OH NO WHAT'S GOING ON??!!!!!111!!!oNE?!!
ahhh update soon! ;)
I LOVE THIS. it left me feeling warm and fuzzy, too! pleasepleaseplease update soon...i think this is becoming a new favorite; it's always awesome to discover a new author/story.
Author's Response: A favorite? I'm flattered! Next chapter will be up some time tonight I hope!
Ginny's reality becomes mixed with her dreams. Which life is real? Why would her family insist she's married to Harry when she knows she's married to Draco?Category: Completed Short Stories
this is a VERY creepy story. i love it.
Author's Response: Thank you. I enjoyed writing a dark draco.
Pansy Parkinson spun the bottle. Time seemed to slow down for Draco and he just knew that it was going to land on him. It did.Category: Completed Short Stories
this was the perfect blend of sweet and poignant. i had tinylittle tears in my eyes (quite suddenly!) at the last couple of lines. *runs off to read your other fics*
Author's Response: Yay, I am so glad you enjoy it. I hope you like my other stuff too. Hopefully, I can get more up soon:)
A sixth-year ensemble comic romance. It could be standing before you, needing a bit of a push. Or sitting beside you, waiting for you to let go. Perhaps it's sneaking up from behind, hoping you will turn around. But sometimes, love falls from a clear blue sky, and you just have to catch it. How do you decide which is the right path, when you're only sixteen? Seamus/Dean, Harry/Hermione, Draco/Ginny, Ron/Padma.Category: Works in Progress
oh man oh man oh man! this is good! i'm looking forward to updates :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
"Father preferred deer; he was more of a stalker."
I know this wasn't meant to be funny (...or was it?) but damn, I laughed pretty hard when I read it. You have a real gift, and its a joy to read.
Author's Response: Well, at least ironic, but I will never say no to a laugh!
Thank you so much, what a compliment! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
"Honestly? When you figure it out, tell me because I don't fucking know."
ah, teenage love. so full of angst. so wonderful to read.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all these wonderful reviews! I'm glad that you are enjoying the story!
by the way, may i just say that i absolutely fell in love with your title? my poor little brain can't decide whether it just likes the sounds that the words make together, or if there's a more cerebral and intellectual meaning, but damn, girl...you're good. where have you been my whole life?
Author's Response: Thank you! Since you asked, the title is based in part on that colloquial expression "six ways from Sunday" but changed to eight for the eight main characters. But the deeper meaning is a reference to the Buddhist concept of the Noble Eightfold Path to enlightenment, and each of the characters map to one of those paths. But I'm very glad you like the story! Thanks!
"Nah, Nin, it gives Ron the opportunity to check out my arse without the others noticing." Seamus straightened, turned and winked at Ron, whose ears had gone pink.
"I never!" Ron shouted.
HA!
and didn't this just make my heart go pitter-patter...
"Ginny found Draco standing near the entrance to the changing rooms, as his housemates congratulated the other members of the team. His wistful expression as he watched the other members of his house turned to a bright smile once he caught sight of Ginny."
Author's Response: I'm pleased you're finding the story funny AND romantic—that's what I'm going for. Thanks for such a lovely comment!
Draco sat in a chair opposite Dean's bed. "A month ago, I was running around, acting like a little shit—"
"As opposed to four years ago, when you were running around, acting like a little shit?" Ron interrupted.
"Oi!" Draco shouted.
"What? That wasn't homophobic."
fyi, i almost died of laughter here. this is wrapping up quite nicely, isn't it? i like.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Hermione raised an eyebrow. "I will have you know that I am as pure as the day I was born!" she insisted, hands on her hips.
"Really?" Ginny said as she emerged from her dressing room in a royal blue gown that unfortunately clung in all the wrong places. "I'm not."
*squeals* *loves* dies*
*revives*
Parvati giggled. "All of Gryffindor House knows, I imagine. You know those open showers."
"It's our bloody sixth roommate," Seamus confirmed.
*dies another long, laughing, hysterical death*
you know, clothing descriptions are usually hideously boring, but you somehow managed to bring me into the dressing room with those girls, in a non-obnoxious way. major kudos for that :)
Author's Response: I like describing clothes when they're important, or when it's at the center of the scene, so I'm glad you didn't find it boring! And I'm pleased you think the story is funny! Thanks!
He smiled. "You look like my Hermione," he replied, and kissed her.
so sweet.
and this:
"Harry, do not underestimate the bond between a fag and his hag. Seamus tells me everything. I tell Seamus everything. Deal with it and stop avoiding my question."
well. i don't think you need me to tell you how funny this was.
the camaraderie in this chapter was just tremendous. really awesome. i think i smiled the whole way through.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really wanted the friendships to be as important as the romances so I'm very pleased that came through!