Ginny thinks the moon looks broken.Category: Works in Progress
Oh my goodness!
I am so glad that I reread this story and I wonder what Harry is going to do to try and stop Ginny and Draco.
I hope he isnt going to resort to violence? Or is he going to kidnap her to make her see reason?
Why? Wasn't that what Hermione had asked her when she first found out that the girl she thought of as a younger sister was dating Draco Malfoy. Well, 'why?' was a good enough place to start.Category: Completed Short Stories
Because
Oh poor Ginny! If only things had not gone so wrong, they may have had a chance, cie la vie!
Hmm, sad to know that Ginny has to apologise. I wonder what happened before that caused Ginny to break away from Draco.
That would have been nice to know.. Oh well..
Good one-shot
Late for Quidditch training, Draco doesn't think to pause before he enters the change rooms.Category: Long and Completed
Oh this is so great!
I loved that you went back to how Draco persued Ginny. I always wondered what it was that Draco did a 360 when it came to Ginny Weasley.
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I like to see him chasing her as well ;)
Absolutely delightful!
I was glad that you had the whole chapter dedicated to how the boys would react to Draco and Ginny!
I thought that they were all funny and that Draco, once again, realized that when you deal with Ginny you have her whole family involved!
ha-ha, loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I couldn\'t resist putting him through the torture of lunch with the boys. He\'s fast learning that if you have one Weasley, you have all seven ;)
She woke, and she doesn't remember.Category: Works in Progress
Nicely done. I look forward to how you work this great idea into your story. I am curious as to why Draco and Narcissa are bemoaning with whatever Lucius is planning with the littlest Weasley! Excited and waiting for the next great chapter!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you're enjoying the product of my bizzare imagination. I'll be posting asap : )
Draco has something precious stolen from him, and he’s determined to capture the elusive thief.Category: Completed Short Stories
Oh I so loved it.
I was particularlt glad that you went the other way with this piece and had Ginny as the "bad" girl & Draco as the "good" boy!
I found the sex that they had in the story just wonderfully "smutty" (think two thumbs up in my book).
Author's Response: I like the idea of bad!Ginny and good!Draco because it changes up the dynamic between them! I don\'t write smut often, but I\'m so glad you enjoyed it!
Draco leaves something very special to him in the library and a certain redheaded witch finds it. His endeavors to retrieve his property ends up with him losing so much more than a mere material object, but he doesn't seem to mind all that much.Category: Completed Short Stories
Fanatastic one piece.
I was particularly moved in how you wrote about Fluffikins and his need to get it back. I am was aware that it to be something close to the heart but I had no idea it was a stuffed cat!
I loved how Ginny had taken it and made it her own. I am sure that Draco was fully aware that Archibald was loved!
Fantastic !
Author's Response: Thank you *g* Oh yes, he had to get Fluffikins back, because well he\'d never survive school without her ;) He was probably a little jealous of Fluffikins, considering she was sleeping so close to a certain someone ;)
Harry's back! Much angst and woe at Hogwarts school. However will Ginny cope?Category: Completed Short Stories
I have to say that your one piece was fantastic!
Truly, I was a tad worried when you went into the Harry Potter foray but then you did this 360 and surprissed me with your dramatic flair. It was great and I loved it!
So much drama that Draco displays, it was great! Truly a great job. Well done!
Author's Response: *twizzles on a skateboard* 360\'s are ace! Thanks so much for appreciating my dramatic flair... :) And for a very lovely review!
Written for Rainpuddle13's fic contest...For the good of all wizards, and despite the love of one man, she fought to uphold justice by breaking the law. To her vexation, the plan backfired... but not for long.Category: Completed Short Stories
Intense! Hot! Passionate!
I have to say that this was a great story. Your mixture character dilema with lust combined make it a worthwhile Draco and Ginny story. I was relieved to know that Draco wouldnt mind helping Ginny by searching the mansion with her!
Author's Response: *snicker* Yeah, Draco\'s just so helpful that way. I\'m glad you liked it, and thanks for taking the time to review!
"Master listens to you," the house-elf whispered. "Master trusts you..." Set 5 years after Footprints.Category: Completed Short Stories
Okay, I liked it. In a way I think you had a good conceot but I felt like you rushed to the good thing at the end. I would have liked to know how it was that they continued on with their friendship and how much of Ginny did he really want in his life.?
Why was GInny the only one to pull Draco out of his rut and solitude?
What would make a family as close as the Weasleys turn its back on its youngest member? Ginny breaking Harry's heart might, as would her sleeping with Draco Malfoy. Too bad she's done both.Category: Long and Completed
I am wondering when Ginny is going to speak with her brother and best friend? I mean I know it was "foolish" but goodness would someone speak with her to find out what was going on?
I love your story by the way, can you tell I am connected to it on some level, its cause I love it so!
Author's Response: As far as the Trio and Weasleys are concerned, they know what happened. All they really see is that Ginny \'betrayed\' Harry by dumping him and sleeping with Draco, and her family by getting pregnant at her age, sleeping with a boy she hardly knew and who apparently hated her and her family. Not to mention the fact that she refused to stick with her family against the Malfoys and deny him paternity so far as she was able. I\'m really working with the idea that the wizarding world is a lot more old fashioned than the muggle world.
Enter a world of thievery and transgression…a tangled web of lies and deception, passion and betrayal, love and sex, birth and death—all threatening to consume the lives of those ready to go up in flames.Category: Works in Progress
Oh wow! Intense, I cannot believe the extent in which Ginny would go to ruin all three relationships. Awesome, I am glad that she woke up at the end and realized that she loves Draco.
Poor Draco, she tortures him so and now he is away trying to forget her. I hope that he has not married. Oh, I want her to go after him and beg him to forgive her.
Exciting and waiting for the next great chapter.
What do you do when the one you love is no longer there? How do you keep going when you’re left to raise three children by yourself? No character death.Category: Works in Progress
OH MY GOD!!!!
This is turning out to be a nail biter and I love it!
I wonder what the heck is going on and it leads to the all important question, when did this happen and is this why she went to France?
OHHHHH, am so excited. Fabulous of you to treat us to two chapters! Love ya!
Author's Response: Yay, I\'m glad you like it! And yes, this is definitely why she went to France. It hasn\'t been said yet, but I\'m letting you in on that little tidbit :)
It gets better and better!
Oh, I cannot wait to see what is going to happen next. I do want to be introduced to Aidan and watch his dynamic with Draco and with their children. I do wonder about Harry and whether he is going to be instrumental in helping Draco regarding his last mission & Bellatrix. Interesting.
Can I say it again? I love this story. I am excited.
Author's Response: Yay, I love that you like it so much! Yeah, the Aidan-Draco relationship is going to be interesting to try to write. Though I think the Draco-Harry relationship might be more interesting, personally :D
i LOVED THIS CHAPTER.
I wonder what is going to happen next with everyone under one roof. What will the children be like with their new "brother"? What is going to happen with Harry and Draco and is there going to be some awful feeling by Draco that he is not part of the life before him?
GREAT, I cannot wait til the next chapter. Thank you, thank you I LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Thanks! I love it when you type out your theories/questions, because it totally gets my mind thinking \"Hmm... I wonder if... I bet I could...\" It\'s a total stimulation, so thank YOU! :D
I cant wait to read another chapter. I loved this story and I cant wait to revisit some of its past and move towards its present. Yay, you are back with this story.
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you're back to read it the second time around! I'll do my best to make a good balance of past and present :)
First off, I prefer italics for present and bold for the past.
Secondly, I am hoping that you will soon be adding on the other chapters and soon. I enjoyed the story and was so glad that it was coming to the home stretch until it was pulled.
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for your formatting input! It is greatly appreciated :)
I know, I take 6 months past forever to update. Thanks for staying with me this long! I used the long 4th of July weekend to work on this, so I'll probably have the next chapter up later tonight or tomorrow :)
When Ginny isn't at St. Mungos, she's out hunting wealthy, single wizards... her favorite pastime. However, when one silver-eyed wizard refuses to give in to her irresistible charms (and retaliates with charms of his own), she does everything she can to ensue that she wins the game.Category: Works in Progress
Intrigued and so thinking about the movie HOW TO MARRY A MILLIONAIRE with Marilyn Monroe and Lauren Bacall & Betty Grable. loved it and you make this story intersting with you making Ginny the one to seek a rich but worthy opponent!
Author's Response: Thanks! Ive never seen HOW TO MARRY A MILLIONAIRE, but I\'ll search for it. Thanks for the reivew!
Nothing ever seems to happen just because it can happen. Things seem to only happen as a result of another action, a consequence, the effect after the cause. Everything that happens is a form of aftermath, it would seem.Category: Works in Progress
Good start. Your direct approach with Draco and his meeting with the Weasleys' is good. I particularly enjoyed the fact that Harry looked at Draco and told him that Ginny was his. Loved it, I so look forward to some more interaction and especially a three way date where Ginny is being pulled at both ends and Draco being the Slytherin comes through at the end. Ha-ha.
Loved it and looking forward to another great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, working on the chapter now =)
Draco and Ginny go out on a date post-Hogwarts. Ginny is disappointed with Draco's lack of originality. Can he make it up to her?Category: Works in Progress
I enjoyed your writing style. I liked the witty banter that evolved and especially the characterization of Ron with regards to his sister - hysterical.
I look forwsrd to the next great chapter.
I loved the banter between Ron & Draco, it is so the relationship I see between them. I loved how you used food as a means to bribe Ron into doing something. I am so excited to know what is going to happen in the dinner and for that matter, if Draco will adhere to the six week rule.
I would love to see how it all goes down.
Loving it!
Falling in love is hard when you have secrets...Category: Works in Progress
Curious, is it or isnt it his baby? Can't they recognize one another? Are they suffering from a memory loss?
I cannot wait til the next chapter to see what goes on.
*DH SPOILERS* Consider yourself warned.Category: Completed Short Stories
This is my attempt to correct some of the wrongs...
Funny and totally hysterical. I loved it! I thinkyour take on the ending being a nightmare is a funny one.
Thank you for the correct perspective. :-)
Author's Response: Well, the epilogue was my worst nightmare...
What really happened in the DH Epilogue of Doom. Poor, poor Harry, so very clueless...Category: Works in Progress
Chapter SIXTY-NINE quote of the day:
Ginny scowled at him. “You don’t know me very well.”
Draco shook his head, his eyes more sorrowful than ever. “No. I don’t. Eternity wouldn’t be long enough for that.”
“Why do I feel as if we’ve suddenly wandered into the set of a men’s cologne commercial?” complained Lucifer.
“Can’t you keep your damn mouth shut, Lucifer?” spat Draco.
“Please… really… I don’t think you should talk to him that way,” whispered Ginny.
Nice..
I am so glad and hope she kills Draco by rejecting him. He deserves it. Poor Ginny driven mad by two men who claimed to have "loved" Ginny.
Good for Mrs. Weasley.