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Real name: Alice
Registered: Oct 19, 2008
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Draco found Ginny in an abandoned classroom just after the Christmas holidays in Ginny's fifth year, and he did something unforgivable. But then, later on, she found him... and they both found that their combined fates could not be fought.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Character Death, Non-consensual sex
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 10 | Word count: 20778 | Read count: 26109 | Published: Jun 07, 2005 | Updated: Jun 22, 2005
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Reviewer: DarkPoyel Signed
Date: Nov 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: 10

The first thing that comes to my mind is : you are a genius.
First because the fiction itself is very marvellous. The feelings, the thoughts of the characters are described in a wonderful, compelling way.
Second because the last chapter is pure genius. I don't know why, but it just seems right, to see Loki and Dream here, plotting with Draco's and Ginevra's lives. Reading your chapter just made come into my mind Dream, saying "Very Well, Loki. Let us talk..." and made me imagine Dream's planning.
You are a very talented writer. You can play with your characters and their emotions, with different scenarios and different stories to create something very intense. I really, really loved it.