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Registered: Feb 19, 2006
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Not Quite Fate by Hearts Cadence    (Reviews - 933)

*COMPLETE* Destiny knew better than to bring these two together. One man, determined to draw back an errant Malfoy, is not so wise, and Ginny soon finds herself caught up in events that are not quite Fate.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley, Severus Snape
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 37 | Word count: 222518 | Read count: 387282 | Published: Jul 13, 2006 | Updated: Aug 04, 2007
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Reviewer: topaxi Signed
Date: Jul 27, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Conversations

Very intriguing - also well written.
I look forward to reading the rest of this fic.

The Dangers of Mistletoe by CCC    (Reviews - 846)

Ginny is ready to kill whoever put magical mistletoe all over the castle. Draco finds the situation rather amusing.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 24 | Word count: 57029 | Read count: 263437 | Published: Oct 23, 2006 | Updated: Feb 28, 2007
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Reviewer: topaxi Signed
Date: Nov 22, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Excellent!
Alright, so I'm one of those terrible people who doesn't review all that often. Or ever, really. I mean, generally speaking, what more is there to say but "Hey, at least the grammar wasn't terrible!"
But your story, this chapter in particular, has had me cackling evily as I read! I don't really see why Ginny thinks she can get something "real" out of Draco in the first place, but Draco's reaction is entertaining.
The side ships are kinda funny too. (Pansy/Neville is rather entertaining, though also out of the blue.)
Can you tell I'm not in the habit of reviewing? What the hell am I suppose to write in this thing anyway?
At any rate, Ron and Draco seem incredibly in character, so props!

~topaxi

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing my story. You did a great job by the way. I know I just write random thoughts when I review, so this worked for me.

Father and Son by Leandra Elizabeth Aurora    (Reviews - 117)

David Malfoy and his twin sister Diana have a serious problem. After one of their parents' many heated rows, Draco and Ginny Malfoy part. It's worse than ever. Everybody is talking about divorce and even their elder sister has given up hope that their stubborn parents will ever get together again. Diana and David decide that there's only one way to save their parents' marriage: Magic! But something goes horribly wrong and David is transferred to the year 1997, while the seventeen-year-old Draco takes his place in the future. Now it's up to Draco to save his future marriage with the help of his daughters. Pre-HBP!

Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Next Generation
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Blood
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 22 | Word count: 82310 | Read count: 21125 | Published: Nov 12, 2007 | Updated: Feb 13, 2009
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Reviewer: topaxi Signed
Date: May 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Verity of a Malfoy

Ah, I love a good Draco vs. Draco story!

Very entertaining; keep up the great work!

Promise Us Everything by Eustacia Vye    (Reviews - 130)

The fallout of a magical clandestine war is difficult to wade through, and reconstructing society takes work to be done right. Unfortunately, too many old prejudices remain. Ginny sees the world for what it is and is determined to fix it properly. This leads to all sorts of unlikely allies.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Pansy Parkinson
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 10 | Word count: 44871 | Read count: 25120 | Published: Sep 09, 2008 | Updated: Nov 12, 2008
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Reviewer: topaxi Signed
Date: Oct 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Managing Gossip

Um, is this story complete? I mean, it says it's "Long and Complete", but it doesn't really feel done.

Other than that, I'm really enjoying it! (And I'd love to hear more about what Lucius is up to!)

Author's Response: I filed it there because it's going to be ten chapters when I'm done posting this, and I've gotten comments on a 12-chapter story that it should've been filed under "Long and Complete" rather than "Short Story." *shrugs* I get wordy, and have literally written a 52 chapter epic, so my idea of short is a bit skewed. ;) In any case, there's three chapters left to this. Unfortunately, we don't really see Lucius again.

Finding Color by Mell8    (Reviews - 140)

Ginny always knew there was something wrong with her eyes.
Category: Completed Fiction
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 10 | Word count: 24419 | Read count: 52164 | Published: Nov 09, 2008 | Updated: Jul 16, 2009
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Reviewer: topaxi Signed
Date: Nov 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

Very interesting premise! I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.

Not Quite an Affair by Rosalie    (Reviews - 522)

“You mustn’t tell them, Rose! Harry knows but Lily and the boys… you can’t breathe a word…”

When Rose Weasley went to her favorite aunt for advice on how to handle loving someone her family disapproved of, she never dreamed the older woman would have been able to relate so well. In the comfortable safety of her kitchen, Ginevra Potter told her niece everything and swore her to secrecy. But months later, when Ginevra notices that her daughter, Lily, is spending time with Scorpius Malfoy, Ginny realizes too late that the truth can never really be locked away. Children question their parents and their own identities and everyone must confront the past.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Other Characters
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Next Generation
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 32 | Word count: 108603 | Read count: 142616 | Published: Apr 11, 2009 | Updated: Dec 23, 2011
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Reviewer: topaxi Signed
Date: Jul 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: The Fury of Tears

So far... Awesome! I'm loving your fic.

The kids are great (though I'm wondering about Rose... she seems to have gone off the deep end a bit... will we see her point of view again at some point to explain her craziness?).

I have no idea how you're going to turn this around into "happy endings for everyone", but I look forward to it!

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, Rose is definately having a rough time with everything. Her character will come right back into it as far as POV and such is concerned, just not in the next immediate few chapters. And as a warning, as I'm sure you've already guessed, the happy endings may have a bittersweet tinge. But still happy. I'm happy with it at least ;) Once again, thanks so much for your review!

Oh Baby! by whyevenbother    (Reviews - 97)

You thought taking care of a plastic baby was hard work? At least it wasn't magical. Hilarity ensues as the students of Hogwarts learn a lesson in responsibility through Dumbledore's new parenting project. AU DG with several other minor pairings.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 9570 | Read count: 4936 | Published: Sep 25, 2009 | Updated: Jan 08, 2010
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Reviewer: topaxi Signed
Date: Sep 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hilarious!

I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm aiming for funny, so it's good you found it so.