He thinks about her all the time. (November 2003, G, D/G-ish, Post-OOTP)Category: Completed Short Stories
Great job! I love Obsessed!Draco, lol. And the descriptions are great. =)
'Twas the night before Christmas And all through the house Not a creature was stirring Not even a mouse.Category: Completed Short Stories
That was beautiful! Wonderfully poetic.
I think you described her feelings really well! And I don't know why he's dead, but it's pretty sad all the same. Great job!
Draco Malfoy inadvertently comes to Ginny Weasley's assistance during a game of Quidditch. The reverberations from his actions will rock his world for some time to come. Snarky Humor and Romance.Category: Long and Completed
I adore this fic. Great, great job. I've not had such fun reading in a long, long time.
I love your characterization of Draco; it's nice to see a change from the generic cold, unfeeling Draco. I love his potty mouth, haha! And the whose PTSD thing was adorable. The whole thing was excellently written, and I just LOVED it.
Some parts were so cute I went "aawwwww!", especially that part when he woke up to find her arms around him, and just went back to sleep happily. And of course, the kiss.
I just loved it.
Ginny’s being showered with gifts from an anonymous admirer…who just so happens to be a Slytherin that we all know and love.Category: Completed Short Stories
Aww, that was so cute! Just freakin' adorable. I think that sort of a Draco, even if not a Draco I usually like, was just ADORABLE. The whole idea is sweet... I like the romantic notes! And love the ending. Great job! =)
Ginny has a love/hate relationship with Draco. Is there any hope that he will ever treat her with respect, or is she just setting herself up for a fall?Category: Completed Short Stories
Oh, that was really cute! The characterization was great, and Draco was hot. Awesome!
I like the banter – this fic was short, but it was great! ^_^
A silly drabble about what would inevitably happen if Harry and Ginny ever got (God forbid) married. Anyone expecting intricate plotting or vast character development will be disappointed, but leather pants are involved, however tangentially.Category: Completed Short Stories
LOL, this is funny. I like it. ^_^
Harry: (staggering to his feet, pointing a shaking finger at Draco) YOU!
Draco: As sharp as ever, I see.
*laughs*
Draco: Oh, come off it, Potter. Everyone's known since Hogwarts. Ginny, my love, don't you have any suitcases?
That;s funny, too.
Ginny finds another woman's lingerie in her house. When she questions Draco, she is surprised at his answer.Category: Completed Short Stories
Awesome! This is so cute!
Ginny's temper is so typical. I like your style – it makes me not wanna stop reading.
Blaise was cute!
Draco's reaction was hilarious.
Great job!
Category: Works in ProgressIt's an old age tradition - bestowed upon those who deserve. Ginny's experiencing an unwanted boyfriend, Hermione is completely shocked at the morals of the world, and a new tradition sends an entire school into a chaos that no one can handle.
Will things fall into place? Or will they tragically end with cirumstances unbelievable to those around them?
Ooh! That was great! Love Hermione's reactions. Especially that "What has the world come to?" bit. *laughs* And Zacharias is a bit too sweet... But anyway. Blaise was fun, too.
I can see a lot of fun coming in this fic!
Again, great chapter! I didn't think things would be this serious, really – but still, it's good.
Zacharias is hilarious. ;D
I didn't get Ginny's reaction. I think you might've described that more... Why is she concerned about him all of a sudden?
Anyway... I'm reading the others!
“There’s this mirror,” she told him. “And I need to use it.”Category: Completed Short Stories
Winner of Darkest Fic and Best Interpretation of the Prompt at the 2008 D/G Fic Exchange.
Beautiful. Just beautifully written. I love it.
Your prose is poetic and lovely, and there's amazing imagery. I don't know...It's just...beautiful. The way he sees the mark on her, the way he feels HER uncertainty, her pain, while she feels his. The whole idea, of the mirror, everything, was vivid and amazing.
I...love...it.
Amd then, when they switch. How they don't remember anything, but they're themselves again, the way you suggested that.
Beautiful. You rock.
Trying to escape the pain of her daughter's death, Ginny runs to Pennsylvania to start anew. Almost six years later, a man from her past walks back into her life, reopening old wounds and setting in motion a journey of discovery, sorrow, and joy.Category: Long and Completed
Okay, I have to say this story(the first chapter) was really great – but a little too fast. I love the way you showed how Ginny felt in the beginning. Draco, even if a little too... well, nice, was great. But the whole pregnancy thing just went too fast – that;s my only complaint. Other than that, I love it!
Author's Response: Perhaps I will post a little one-shot of different stages of Ginny's pregnancy. My only fault with that is that it really won't include Draco. I suppose I could try my best to do it. It's a definite thought.
Once upon a time there lived a princess. She lived in an odd-looking castle far away in a land called Ottery St. Catchpole with her father, the king, her mum, the queen, and her six older brothers, the princes.Category: Completed Short Stories
Aw, that was ADORABLE!! I LOVE this fic, I really do.
The ferret was so cute! It was so Draco!
I love how you made the language like a real fairy tale...
Ginny's characterization wasn't too clear, but I guess the ferret makes up for it, lol.
My favorite lines:
"Oh, the irony."
"I don’t much like to be sat on," it said haughtily.
"Because that "good sir knight" of yours is the reason I am in my current ferrety state."
Great fic!
Author's Response: Aw thank you!
Yeah, I realize Ginny wasn't characterized so well, I tried to make her a bit like the vapid personality-less princesses in most of the original classic fairy tales haha. I'm an English major, and we just spent a month discussing this in one of my classes, it's quite ridiculous. I did just reread it after reading your review, and I think if I ever do a rewrite, I'll try to give her a bit more personality. Thanks for the review and the opinion! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Here’s the thing about love; no one ever tells you the truth. They don’t want to ruin whatever childhood fantasies you’re going to concoct up in that ‘pretty little head of yours.’ No, no, see, they’re all much more sadistic then that. They would rather you find out later that all the dreaming you did was for nothing. Then that way, you can be just like them, and suffer.Category: Completed Short Stories
That was very cute! I liked it. Ginny's voice is enjoyable and nicely done.
Author's Response: Why thank you very much :)
“Don’t you have plans?” “They can wait.” Short pieces examining moments in Draco and Ginny’s unorthodox relationship.Category: Works in Progress
Hmm...Interesting. I like it. ^_^
Category: Completed Short StoriesHis hair is as yellow as a ‘70s Beetle.
His eyes are as gray as cement.
He’s not really daft, and he makes her laugh.
(But her poetry makes him lament.)
One-shot.
Hehe, I love this. Very funny, and both were in character, too. I like the summary. ;D
So it was all a dream? Nice. And I liked Draco's monologue, lol. And Harry. I like the ending.
Basically, I like it a lot. ^_^