I love the Scorpius/Lily pairing, for me, its like a dream, us Draco/Ginny shippers, we knew that our favourite ship (at least my favourite ship, having switched from D/Hr to D/G fairly recently) would never become canon has the possibility to come true will Scorpius and Lily.
I imagine Scorpius to be so much like his father but without (at least strong) prejudice against muggles and muggleborns. While Lily i imagine her being a Slytherin through and through, even if she is sorted into a different house.
I loved this story, i thought it was brilliant and well written. I loved how you incorporated the Draco/Ginny relationship into the story, it seemed like it really could have happened in the books. I would have loved to see the parents reaction, like with them all present at King's Cross or something, i think it would be really interesting how they would have reacted.
I wanted to also congratulate you on how well it was written, it flowed smoothly between the present and the flashbacks and i thought the dialogue flowed well as well (i hate it when the dialogue just sounds fake, you know, it is something i have trouble with but i believe that i am eventually getting better)
There was only one minor inaccuracy, which you either was not aware or changed for the purpose of this story and that is that Scorpius' middle name is Hyperion, like a said only a minor point and one which did not make this story any less enjoyable
Mitchell
P.S. I just thought that i'd add that i'm in the process of writing a (sort of) Scorpius/Lily myself, having just taken a break from writing to read this story. Its really about Albus and Scorpius' seven years at Hogwarts (both seperate house, Scorpius a Slytherin while Albus a Gryffindor). i still writing their fist year but i plan on adding the Scorpius/Lily late in Scorpius' sixth year, Lily being two years below him and any younger i feel would be quite unrealistic. I just found that rather weird, thought i'd add it on at the end
P.S.S. (is that right?) Sorry for the long review, loved the story, i think i just went off one, oops, but that is a positive reaction with me, hope you keep writing and i plan to check out more of your stuff.