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Four Days Later by vilgsacolin    (Reviews - 26)

When the Wizengamot ordered Ginny Weasley to search Malfoy Manor, the last thing she imagined she would encounter was a Portkey; A Portkey that would leave her stranded on an island with Draco Malfoy.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Blood
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 4 | Word count: 15585 | Read count: 8447 | Published: Jan 31, 2009 | Updated: Apr 30, 2009
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Reviewer: thelovemachines Signed
Date: Apr 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Day One - Stranded

"She removed every painting from the wall and silenced them. She took such precaution so the paintings would not talk or reveal the details of the investigation to the living family members." Good thinking!

"Ginny lowered her head, bringing her lips to the fires base. She blew, the sparks glowed and expanded. She blew again."
Unintentionally hot and innuendo-like.

And poor Draco... I misses his Ginny-winny.

Author's Response: LOL. I didn't mean for it to be a innuendo! :D Thanks for reviewing! ♥

Reviewer: thelovemachines Signed
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Day Four - Business is a Pleasure

The last chapter was great! It felt nice and epic the way HP fics should!

You should add a bit about the job and what happened afterward, like an Epilogue, short and sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you! :D I tried to make it climatic. Haha. Yes, a sequel is definitely happening this summer. I'm sure you'll make sure of it.