Draco and Ginny have sort of a thing going. Unfortunately, Ginny has one going with very many people. But Draco doesn't really care. No, he doesn't. Does he?Category: Long and Completed
I really enjoyed the journey that was Draco and Ginny in your story and I like how it ended with them starting their relationship. Sometimes it can get boring when people are in relationships, so I like how your fic was leading up to the start of theirs. I also enjoyed Ginny and her promiscuous ways - I just would have liked to learn why she didn't like being touched, or maybe you addressed it and just completely missed it, and in that case, sorry about that.
Just one small criticism, be aware of verb tense shifts, other than that I enjoyed it thoroughly, plus I finished it, which is something I don't do very often lol.
Good luck with everything!
Ginny learns a thing or two about what being a Slytherin can really be like through an unexpected source.Category: Long and Completed
this chapter really stuck out, especially the end and i enjoyed it quite a bit! i'm really liking luna and blaise and ron's so posessive lol
i can't wait to read what you have next!
snape is so sketchy lol i swear it seems like he has a little crush on ginny too, he's always there whenever she's making out with someone - or maybe he's sexually frustrated and this is how he gets his fix lmao just kidding... kind of :]
and blaise must have serious sexual frustrations if he's commenting on draco's arse cheeks haha
i love it and i can't wait to read some more
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even though this is a draco and ginny forum, i've actually been enjoying these other character's relationships just a little more - i would have never paired any of them together, but they work out quite well!