Jack Tamara [Contact]

Real name: J.T. Lynn
Registered: May 29, 2009
Membership status: Member

I joined the D/G fanfiction community a couple of months ago, but I've just started trying my hand and writing my own. I really adore everyone here at FIA for being such a supportive and kind group of people. I do try to reply to every single review I get because I appreciate the effort and time that people put into giving me feedback. Plus, it's a nice way to make new friends and share the D/G love. :)

Always feel free to PM me if you want to just chat about D/G. I'm especially open to people who want to give me recommendations. :)
Reviews by Jack Tamara

As You Wish by Alexandria Malfoy    (Reviews - 14)

Ginny wants a change of pace. Draco is gifted with a magic lamp. Who he finds inside is the last person he’d ever expect. Originally written for the D/G Fic Exchange on LiveJournal.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 7104 | Read count: 8154 | Published: Jun 19, 2010 | Updated: Jun 24, 2010
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Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Jun 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww, this was so cute! I like the take of Ginny being a genie. I have NEVER seen that before. How unique! GOod joB!

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

The Wedding Night of Draco and Astoria Malfoy by Anise    (Reviews - 38)

Draco married Astoria, but on their wedding night at the Malfoys’ private island off the coast of the South of France, he dreams only of Ginny. How much fun will that honeymoon be? Don’t freak out! It’s all going to be okay. Take deep breaths… oh, just read it. ;) A three-shot companion piece to Draco’s Dangerous Dilemma, it takes place during the events of Chapter 26.

From Chapter Three:

“You simply don’t understand,” Draco told Ginny. “And you might be a bit more appreciative of the fact that I made that sacrifice for you. I can assure you that seeing Astoria in a white dress and not bursting into laughter immediately was a sacrifice indeed. Then, when I was forced to share air space with that skinny slag in her lingerie-- ouch! What did you do that for?” He snatched his hand back. She’d scratched her nails down his skin.

“You seeing Astoria in lingerie,” Ginny said passionately. “That’s why.”

“It’s not as if I liked it!” Draco shuddered.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: Ever Since Draco and Ginny: Reflections on Their (Un)Natural History
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 25012 | Read count: 5889 | Published: Jun 21, 2010 | Updated: Jun 30, 2010
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Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Jun 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Before I even read anything, I'm telling you that I saw Astoria Malfoy in the Title, along with the words "wedding night" and "draco" and I wanted to throw myself down on the ground and start bawling. Okay, now i'm going to go read the actual thing. *sniffles*

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: (more Kleenex) It's okay!

Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Jun 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I feel so sad...BUT AT LEAST DRACO AND ASTORIA DIDN'T DO IT! YIPPEEEEE! Whew, okay, going to calm down now. But still, I feel so bad for Draco and Ginny. I mean, they can't be with each other, and ain't that just the saddest thing? I will take comfort in that photo Draco/Ginny are probably off doing it somewhere like crazy. Oh, that and that there's a part 2. :) Update both this and DDD soon!

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: Come on, you KNOW I wasn't going to have a D/A sex scene (shudders. I must wash my brain with bleach now.) More soon...

You and Me by BlackRaven    (Reviews - 24)

She was tired. Tired of hurting. Tired of trying to move on. Tired of wondering why. He was scared. Scared of the future. Scared of his past. Scared of forgetting. Mostly, they were lonely. Sequel to both "You Bring Me Closer to God" and "Reach Out and Touch Faith."
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: Something to Believe In
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Chapters: 10 | Word count: 15390 | Read count: 25878 | Published: Jun 29, 2010 | Updated: Dec 17, 2010
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Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Sep 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Then the Sun Refused to Shine

Wow! Suspense!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: I'll try! I'm back at school and have zero time! It's a three day weekend, so I'll try to write at least one more! Thank for all of your reviews--it's good to know that people enjoy the story enough to continuously review!

The Consequences of Deception by CCC    (Reviews - 19)

Ginny follows Draco hoping to find information that will ingratiate her with the Golden Trio. What she finds changes her life, but not in the way she expected.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action, Angst, Horror
Warnings: Blood
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1956 | Read count: 3279 | Published: Jul 11, 2010 | Updated: Jul 11, 2010
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Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Jul 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! This is so different from your usual work, but I love it! Have I told you how much I love evil! Draco who's obsessed with Ginny. I'm telling you, you really should continue this with another chapter fast-forwarded a few years to see if Ginny's feelings have changed since then...Good job!

XOXO, JT

Christmas in Hell by dykeadellic    (Reviews - 95)

When Lord Voldemort gives an order, no one dares defy him. So when he orders Draco to reform one of the biggest blood traitors, Draco has no choice but to follow through, even if it means risking his heart in the process.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 16 | Word count: 46565 | Read count: 16934 | Published: Jul 16, 2010 | Updated: Jul 22, 2012
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Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Jul 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Proposition

I'm liking the "true story" to the Deathly Hallows ending, and interested to see how this goes. update!

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: I will be updating either today or tomorrow, actually. Thanks for the input! The next chapter will be a bit slow, but things will speed up fast.

Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Aug 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Crawling in My Skin

This is really good! I'm glad that the plot seems to be building and I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us. I just read a story where Ginny gets turned to the dark side (LG, though, not DG). So, right now, I'm interested to see if maybe Draco will escape with her or if she'll change...Anyways, keep up the good work!

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy future chapters as well!

A Marriage of Convenience by ClairdeLune    (Reviews - 172)

The post-war world is hardly the utopia it claims to be. Freedom is an illusion, and getting into the good graces of those with power takes precedence over morals. In this unhappy world, can Ginny, forced into a marriage of convenience, find happiness? And does she know the people around her as well as she thinks?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Luna Lovegood, Narcissa Malfoy
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 14 | Word count: 32605 | Read count: 28384 | Published: Jul 23, 2010 | Updated: Dec 10, 2010
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Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Confrontations

awww, that was cute. i was really worried with that pansy thing back there, but I am reassured now. hopefully, more answers to come soon, and ginny and draco will do it. :)

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you liked it. More answers will come in time, I promise :)

A Suitable Young Man by Blue Phoenix    (Reviews - 78)

After a year playing Quidditch for the Harpies, Ginny finds herself whisked off to Italy for a summer holiday by none other than dear Aunt Muriel. Although Ginny might welcome a holiday, Muriel is not the best of traveling companions. And when one Draco Malfoy comes rather literally tumbling into the scene, will this prove to be the nightmare holiday Ginny envisions, or something else entirely?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Molly Weasley, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 21150 | Read count: 29266 | Published: Aug 14, 2010 | Updated: Sep 12, 2010
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Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Aug 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Woot! Woot! I love the personality that Malfoy has sporting. Very mean, sarcastic, biting...can't wait to see how in the world you will get these two to fall in love with each other!

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: He's a Malfoy alright! Glad you liked him. Thank you!

Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Aug 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the last sentence, the part about Blaise, Auntie Muriel and her comments in general, and the fact that the Malfoy name is still as good as gold!

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: What sort of society can't forget just about anything with enough gold to pave the way ...? heh. Thank you!

Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Aug 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loving, LOVING Auntie Muriel. (You’re brighter than that lummox, Ron, but that’s true for most people. I’m sure there’s room for a lot more inside your head.’) and the whole ancient Rome thing...haha. And I have a theory: Draco was looking at GInny in her bikini, which sent him into daze, which sent him tumbling down! He did react quite...forcibly to that bit about him liking her....Please update soon!

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked my take on Aunt Muriel. I had great fun writing her - a person who just say out loud all the mean things she's thinking - blaming all her bad behaviour on her old age. Somewhere in a future chapter there's more of Muriel bullying Ron - I couldn't resist the temtation! Thanks again :)

Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Aug 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yay! I'm glad that you updated so fast. I'm loving the fact that Ginny is slowly (but surely!) falling in love with Draco. *le sigh* Just wonderful....I can't wait to read more. WOuld love a jealousy angle on Draco's part...maybe Matthew Turpin has turned a major hottie?

Update soon!

XOXO, JT

Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Sep 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yay! I'm so glad that they finally kissed!!! Yay moment! And now they have a date! I hope Cassiopeia shows up again, just so we can find out more about that. :)

Good job!

XOXO, JT

Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Sep 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Awww, that was a cute date. i'm glad that malfoy was still in character, though. romantic, but not overboard. and another kiss! i hope they do it soon and make it official. :)

XOXO, JT

The Silver Lining by Esdee    (Reviews - 28)

The former Ginny Weasley, now Ginny Potter, is in shambles as her tumultuous marriage to the Boy Who Lived comes to an end. On a quest to rediscover herself, she must go out on her own and try to put together the pieces of her life. Can she find comfort in someone just as broken and scarred as she?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 5501 | Read count: 9811 | Published: Aug 16, 2010 | Updated: Oct 19, 2010
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Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Aug 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Interrogation

Hahaa. This part made me crack up. Especially the bit about how he hadn't aged a day! And then, I started thinking, "what the heck is the author doing" when you made "Draco" all nicey-nice with BLUE-GREEN eyes (everyone knows that Draco has grey eyes!). It all made snese in the end, though, and was hlarious. Please update!

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: Thanks! I love that part, too. Mainly because it reminds me of a lot of stories I've read where Draco is suddenly a completely different person when it comes to his relationship with Ginny. Updating soon!

Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Aug 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Interrogation

There's something weird about Scorpius going on here....I hope you update soon so that we can find out!

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: All will be revealed.... eventually. ;) Thanks for the two reviews!! I promise, an update is in process!

Middles by scarysnapey    (Reviews - 9)

Ginny is stuck in a very unpleasant position.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1045 | Read count: 2981 | Published: Aug 17, 2010 | Updated: Aug 17, 2010
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Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Aug 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww, I see that this is Fully Compliant, whch means that Ginny chose Harry. :( Please make a continuation of this an change the ending so that DG can be happy! Good job otherwise!

XOXO, JT

Curiosity: Part II by la_rubinita    (Reviews - 14)

Ginny and Draco continue their illicit affair. Seriousy MATURE content.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Sexual Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1876 | Read count: 4269 | Published: Aug 18, 2010 | Updated: Aug 19, 2010
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Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Aug 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: II

Ooh, when's part three going to be coming in? This was great, just the way I liked it. hopefully, part three won't take three more years to show up. ;( You really have a talent for writing smut! I hope DG get their happy ending, and neither dies or ends up with anyone else. Please continue this ASAP!!!!!

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: It shouldn't take three years, but I can't say when I'll get to it because whoa does Ruby have a lot on her plate. Thanks for reading and liking it enough to review :) Means the world

Love Me by geniadreams    (Reviews - 2)

What they mean to each other.
Category: Poetry
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 856 | Read count: 1688 | Published: Aug 18, 2010 | Updated: Aug 19, 2010
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Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Aug 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Love Me

This was beautiful. I really liked the lettering format that you did with this. So sad too...:( Maybe consider a possible continuation where reunite in heaven?

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it, it is always nice to get feedback :) Sorry for the long wait between responses.

The Palest Nights Are Yours by Eustacia Vye    (Reviews - 17)

Ginny was used to not dealing with things that bothered her. She was used to ignoring when things went wrong. She's not used to having to deal with things, and she's not used to sharing her thoughts. This is now something entirely new to deal with, and she never expected Draco Malfoy to be able to help her. Or become as important as he does.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 6722 | Read count: 1703 | Published: Aug 23, 2010 | Updated: Aug 23, 2010
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Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Aug 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Palest Nights Are Yours

Wow. THis is so touching. My grandpa died of cancer after fighting it for seven years, so I know about cancer coming back again and again to haunt you. I really hope that he doesn't get sick again, because there's part of me that wonders if he will after the end of this story. Great story with fantastic emotions, though. Good job!

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: I'm so sorry for your loss. It's because it's such a real topic that I really wanted to tread carefully with this so it's not a cheap offensive kind of thing just to do a box fill on the card. It was hard to write, if only because the story kept sliding toward character death, which I really, really, really didn't want to do. I don't think I would ever write a sequel of any kind to this one, if only because I *don't* want to deal with the possibility of Draco getting sick again. *sticks fingers in ears* lalala, he's fine now, it's all good. :)

Walking Away by fireofthestars    (Reviews - 5)

"Then tell her nothing. But know this, Potter. You may think I'm being a coward, and you may think I'm carelessly breaking Ginny's heart. But when the war is over, I will return for her, and I will make it up to her. Because what I feel for her is something your tiny brain cannot even begin to comprehend."
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1305 | Read count: 2800 | Published: Sep 05, 2010 | Updated: Sep 06, 2010
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Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Sep 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

the end is so sad!!! i hope you continue this!!!! i like that he runs, though. I see that being more of a logical choice for him than serving the order.

Plus update this!!!

XOXO, JT

She Says by Loveable Punk    (Reviews - 12)

“When she says she wants someone to love Harry, she doesn’t mean you. Trust me on that.” His head turned away, looking out over the sea through the window. “No matter what she says, she doesn’t mean you. And she doesn't mean me."
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1426 | Read count: 1112 | Published: Sep 21, 2010 | Updated: Sep 23, 2010
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Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Sep 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: She Says

Wow! This piece was really sad. I'm really glad that you wrote this, though. As a woman who knows about infidelity, it always hurts. I've kind of been on the prowl of a good DG fic where one (or in this case, both) cheat on the other and the cheater has to, well, make up and grovel and regain the trust of the other, letting us as readers see insight on why the cheater cheated in the first place. Now, this may be a bit different because they both cheated (even though, Draco's case is severely worse and I feel like Gin did it because he was distanced and cheating on her). But, I hear that you are writing a follow-up (yay! please do, and post it soon!!!), so I have hope that they will--through a lot of pain and hard work--work through it together. Normally, couples who do face infidelity and talk it over and work it out claim that they are stronger after the infidelity than ever before. I really hope the case is true for our DG. I like that you can see Draco's remorse at the end, and that he was the to tell her (rather than having Gin find out). There's hope in that, I think.

P.S. I think your characterization of Harry is spot-on, and I think the girl is Pansy. Or one of the Greengrass sisters. It is one of the HP original characters, right?

Anyways, good job! Please update the follow-up soon!

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: I'm really glad to see you enjoyed it. As a guy who's been on both sides of this story, it felt like a piece that needed to be written. Yes, there will be a follow-up (at least one) because ideas just keep popping up along this plotline. I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed the characterization of Harry and as for the female, well, I can neither confirm nor deny if you are correct. The sequels, however, will hold the answer. Once again, thank you for the review. LP

The Christmas Scheme by Saskia_181    (Reviews - 9)

Ginny has a life so neat and happy that she is getting bored. She is not a witch to take matters lying down and lures Draco away on Christmas night to carry out her wicked Christmas Scheme.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3045 | Read count: 1582 | Published: Jan 08, 2011 | Updated: Jan 09, 2011
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Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Jan 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ooh, naughty naughty. i have to say ginny's innovative idea is quite wonderful...and the fact that you said this was inspired by a true story makes me laugh, haha.

great job! what a wonderful christmas piece!

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: Thanks much. The idea was just too much, I had to write a story about it :)

Trying Something New by Eustacia Vye    (Reviews - 12)

She'd heard about this from a friend of hers, and Draco had thought that they were crazy. But Ginny was curious, and he was willing to try just about anything with her.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU
Genres: Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 739 | Read count: 3041 | Published: Feb 02, 2011 | Updated: Feb 02, 2011
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Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Feb 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i read the reviews before i actually read this, which was maybe why I was not as grossed out because i thought she was going to sexually drink his pee or something, lol. that being said, smut aside, your writing is very talented as always and it's always interesting to experiment and write something new. :)

XOXO, JT

Author's Response: I may try writing different kinks, but drinking pee is something even I wouldn't write. ;)

Watch by Shadow Rise    (Reviews - 6)

Or, "A Life in Headlines" ... 'You watch him leave and your heart, what's left of it anyway, follows him out and doesn't look back. You watch your chest rise and fall with gentle breaths (how was it not heaving with heavy sobs?) and expect it to rip open at any minute and show the world the great crater he's left you with.'

Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Future AU, Next Generation, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2310 | Read count: 2571 | Published: Apr 12, 2011 | Updated: Apr 12, 2011
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Reviewer: Jack Tamara Signed
Date: Apr 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm so happy that I gave this a try. I normally don't read sad DG and the summary seemed a bit sad, but I'm so, so happy that they got their happy ending in the end!!! And I'm really glad that you clarified Ginny wasn't a cheater, since that would've bothered me a bit. The narration was very nice and I like how the no-dialogue let us see DG develop and eventually come together over the years. :)

Nicey done!

XOXO, JT