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A Bedroom in the Gazebo. by Anise    (Reviews - 9)

No matter how much has changed since Draco and Ginny were last together, she will never be able to let him go. So she returns to Malfoy Manor to find him... but there have been even more changes than she expected. Originally written for a Christmas challenge at the FFN forum.

Chapter THREE Quote of the Day:

"I can't blame anyone anymore," said Draco, still not looking at her. "I haven't the energy, I suppose."

Ginny turned on him then, unable to bear the impasse a moment longer. "What rubbish. You've got the energy to mope around and feel sorry for yourself, don't you?"

A faint color began to rise in his cheeks. "I've lost the ancestral seat of the Malfoys and most of the money to boot, not six months ago. And I'm lucky I'm not rotting in Azkaban into the bargain. I'm not feeling sorry for myself."

"Then you're doing a bloody good imitation," she retorted.





Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 5293 | Read count: 8931 | Published: Mar 08, 2014 | Updated: May 22, 2014
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Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Mar 31, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I wanted to read more! The story captivates you and I feel like I want to know everything right now^ what happened between the pair in the past, what will happen now, how Ginny can help his emotional state and so on. You are amazing as always!

Author's Response: Don't worry-- there's one more chapter! :) And thank you so much!! This was an interesting one to write... I originally had another idea. A very strange idea. It was really a crackfic, and maybe it's better that it never got written at all. ;) Anyway, more soon!

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Mar 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sorta naughty, Anise? I can't believe it. But I anticipate the continuation anyway!
And did the computer guy manage to save Taxi driver and the essay?

Author's Response: Well, it might possibly go up in the end... I never seem to be able to keep things to PG-13. ;) And... um... there's some bad news... nobody could save the files on that drive. It went to the specialists in CA and everything... they tried... it didn't work. :( BUT! The essay will go on. And it will be posted. Yes, oh yes, it will. (said determinedly.) I have a version of Chapter 5 done already, but it needs some polishing. I think I'll post it after the exchange. TD is going to be a little harder-- I'll have to recreate a LOT. But that WILL happen too. And the forums will be revamped and will live again!!:) I'm working on it with the exchange mods now. And more of this fic very soon. I'll probably add a little to it from the original ffn version.

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: May 22, 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh, this was so touching!
Too short for Anise story but still...
Ha, ha, you couldn't ignore the Teddy Bears, could you?

Of Sun Breaks and Salacious Delights by Anise    (Reviews - 145)

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Ginny fled the wizarding world when betrayal, deception, and heartbreak tore apart her life. A year later, she lives and works as a Muggle-- and the co-owner of Athena's Saucy Shoppe of Salacious Delights. But she's about to learn that it isn't so easy to leave the past behind... especially when it comes packaged in the person of Draco Malfoy.

Chapter TWENTY Quote of the Day:

Ginny tried again, deciding that it was time for her glowering blond companion to help her out whether he wanted to not.

“It’s so great to catch up with old friends, Draco. Don’t you think?” She jabbed Draco lightly in the ribs under cover of darkness.

Draco clamped his hand around her waist like a band of iron. Oh, no, Ginny thought despairingly. This was not going well.

"She's mine alone,” said Draco.

"But she's got other customers, right?" asked Theo.

"She is not to be shared,” said Draco. “I… ah… don't share my toys. You ought to remember that, Nott.”

"But if she's no more than a toy, then it shouldn't matter." Nott's expression was turning crafty. Suddenly, Ginny had a very, very bad feeling about what might happen next.

“Seems as if you shouldn’t mind sharing Ginny with me, don’t you think, Malfoy? After all we’ve been through together? You know what I mean, don’t you?”
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Drama, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 20 | Word count: 61436 | Read count: 14472 | Published: Jun 09, 2014 | Updated: Jul 21, 2020
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Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Jul 19, 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ginny's denial is kinda funny at this point but I really see her struggling not to get her hopes high about Draco...
And now I need to see to my air conditioner as it is suddenly too hot here....

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I think that Ginny is just too afraid to risk her heart again, because she and Draco never discussed exactly why things ended between them after the blackmail disaster the year before. Then he suddenly comes back, and he doesn't seem to have any explanations for her so far... so her reluctance is understandable, I think. Yep, you might want to get the AC fixed. ;) More coming soon...

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Jun 19, 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

"I must test your responses more thoroughly. "- ha, ha , of course he must! All in the name of a spell. I suppose they are going to go pretty far with the "testing"...I hope Ginny realizes that the test wasn't supposed to be done THAT thoroughly...I can't imagine what will happen in the end. I can't picture Draco just standing by and allowing Knott to touch Ginny.

Author's Response: Hey pitzi! :) The next chapter is on its way soon... so we'll find out exactly what happened. ;) And that question about Draco allowing Theo to touch Ginny is going to be kind of pivotal in the end, let's just say.

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Jun 01, 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

i"m so happy ou are updating!
I think this truth spell is going to affect Draco and Ginny too...
Hope for an update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter... ;)

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Jun 11, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Where are the other chapters? I want them now. Ginny working in sex shop is not something I ever thought of so it's really new.

And I loved Draco's appearance.
And... HAPPY BIRTHDAY

Author's Response: Thanks! :) Well, the sex shop thing was all Incognito's fault... ;) And trust me, there will be more of Draco.

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved this chapter. Ginny's emotions in the first part of it were so genuine and though she forces herself to believe that he doesn't care about her at all, we can see that there's more going on in his heart too. And of course his brilliant plan had to involve sex.Ha ha.
And I'm relly intrigued what really happened with the blackmail and other staff. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks! :) Yes, I think you've picked up on some of the emotions involved... they're both going to be struggling with their genuine feelings for each other, which I don't think is really giving anything away. And yep, it's safe to say that Draco's brilliant plan involves sex. :P I am ABSOLUTELY going to hell for posting the next chapters!!! ;)

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Jul 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Between alarms and bomb shelters, I want to say that I'm intrigued beyond words as to why Theo is pursuing them. It looks to me like a kind of personal vendetta against Draco where Ginny is just a means to get to the target. Or was it that he wanted to get Ginny for refusing his advances? I can't tell, there could be lots of reasons.
Also, I'm not sure Draco's only motive for refusing to pay was his reluctance to give in to blackmail. Perhaps he wanted to be find out so they can carry their relationship in the open but things went wrong.
There are so many guesses that you better post the new chapter soon!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! :) Yes, Theo has something very specific in mind here, and we'll find out what it was. And you're right!! (Here's the Smart Reviewer Award. :) Draco did have another motive for refusing to pay Theo a year before. Yes, we'll find out what it is... And the next chapter is coming soon. That's when... well, let's just say that Draco and Ginny get back to that tour. ;)

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Jul 16, 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thank you for such a quick update!
It seems that Nott does have a "thing" for Ginny if Draco wants to use her as a bait. Ginny agreed to this whole plan too quickly. I'm kinda angry with her for that. But Draco is irresistible to her so... And I'm sure Draco has more motives that Ginny hasn't discovered yet!

I hope next chapter won't be a long wait!

Author's Response: Thanks! :) Yes, Theo does have a Ginny thing going on, no doubt about it. She did agree quickly. I didn't even realize it until I read the last chapter over again. I think that SHE didn't quite realize it either (until it was too late.) But she's having a very hard time resisting Draco, now that he's back. The problem is that she swore she WOULD be able to resist him from then on after the disaster of a year before... so her heart and mind are going to be a little at odds here. And yes... Draco isn't telling everything he knows! ;)

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Jul 28, 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I totally enjoyed how Draco made Ginny nervous without really doing or saying anything. This chapter was awfully short for me. I really want to already read what's next!
Thanks a lot for the chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! There's another chapter coming soon.. ;) And now that I'm back, I will write you a LONG email. Okay, a medium email. :)

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Sep 17, 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ew, Ew, Ew Theo is so disgusting. Yuk. I just imagine Draco tearing him to pieces if he so much as lays a hand on Ginny.
Draco's conversation with Crabbe was touching. It seems Draco had done some thinking and apparently underwent some changes. Otherwise he wouldn't have said what he did to Brutus.
I'm waiting for what's next. Who knows what will happen in this Kit Kat Club ? Oh, wait, YOU know...Share with us soon!

Author's Response: I know!! Theo is AWFUL. But we'll eventually find out more about exactly what's going on with him... ;) I really see this Draco as having changed in the past year because of what's happened to him. And other reasons, too. Snerk... the infamous Kit Kat Club... (hides) Yep, there's a lot coming up.

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Aug 23, 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I really sympathized with Ginny when everything reminded her of the time she and Draco were in a relationship and her frustration with the fact that he doesn't acknowledge said relationship in any way. Ginny is clearly not over him and he better beg her to take him back!!

Also, I'm afraid Draco's plan will backfire. Knott may not be as predictable as Draco thinks and who knows what he would try to do to Ginny. And I wonder again just what the other girls know about Ginny and Draco's relationship. Hope for a quicker update now!!! Please!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! :) Oh, believe me, the time will come when Draco will do some begging... and I LOVE your guesses in other areas. I'll try to update ASAP, but I'm in Minnesota right now visiting family, and, well, I kind of had this fantasy that I was going to get lots of writing done this week... it's just not happening. I really think that the only way this would happen would be to have an actual *writing vacation.* It's a great idea... I'd love to come up with a way to do it... but right now, um, not so much. As soon as possible, though, there will be more! :)

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Dec 20, 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ha! Where's the picture of the look on Draco's face when Ginny told him she's going to take control? And what is she intending to do?I cant see her actually letting Theo watch her naked? MAybe if zDraco coveres her with his body. Yuk. I want to kill Theo too. I suppose after this is over Draco will have a hard time convincing Ginny that he feels something for her.
I suppose Theo suspects that their relationship is not exactly what they try to convince him of. And him mentioning 8 girls they shared was deliberate I think. Is he trying to create antagonism between them?
anyway, thanks a lot for the new chapter!!

Author's Response: Hmmm.... now I can't get the picture out of my head. ;) Maybe I'll work on it. Okay, I can't reveal EXACTLY what's going to happen with Ginny's plots and plans, but don't worry TOO much. It'll all be okay. Actually, I think that Draco has more to worry about... and that's all I'm going to say. I think I would say that Theo would love to drive a wedge between Draco and Ginny, but when it came to the eight-girl story, he wanted to get more of a negative reaction out of Ginny. He didn't exactly get what he hoped for, because Ginny is better at controlling her temper than she used to be. More soon! Hopefully right after the holiday break. :)

A Very D/G Christmas by Anise    (Reviews - 4)



HAPPY NEW YEAR! And here's Part 2. :) Can Draco survive Yuletide Eve when he's thrown to the Weasley wolves at the Burrow? Will Ginny be able to save him? Is Fred going to stab him with a carving fork? And who's George's significant other? These questions and many more will be answered in the artistic extravaganza that is... A Very D/G Christmas.

A Quote from Part Two:

“It’s true then,” said Fred, continuing as if Draco hadn’t spoken, He moved around George to confront Ginny. “You’re really seeing him. You’ve really brought him to Yuletide dinner. You’ve actually done it, Ginny.”

That did sum up the situation quickly, at least, thought Draco.

“Look, Fred, I know. I should have just come straight out and told you,” said Ginny, stepping out of George’s protective embrace.

“No, you shouldn’t have done,” said Fred. “You shouldn’t be doing this at all. I’ll do *him* a favor. How’s that?” He shot Draco a look of intense dislike. “I’ll let *him* leave instead of unleashing every hex I can think of. “

Draco groaned inwardly. This was not going to be a good holiday dinner.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 2 | Word count: 10075 | Read count: 804 | Published: Dec 20, 2015 | Updated: Jan 01, 2016
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Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Dec 23, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ha!
Thaks for posting this. At first I felt sorry for Draco for having to admit his insecurities and for having to give in to Giny's demands but then you made up for it with Ginny admitting to not notifiying her family because she was scared to fo so.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) There's more coming soon... and I'm working on the next chappie of MiaG, a little bit at a time.

Of Snowfalls, Firewhisky, and Mistletoe by Anise    (Reviews - 18)

During his sixth year at Hogwarts, Draco balances on a knife's edge of danger, at constant risk of losing his footing and falling into an abyss of darkness. He can't trust anyone at all... or can he? When it comes to Ginny Weasley, he's determined to find out.

Chapter TEN quote of the day:


“Ginny, I didn’t lure you here for some underhanded reason,” he said, stroking the hand under his, glad that she didn’t pull away from him. “I swear I didn’t. I just… I wanted to be with you for a little while, someplace where nobody could find us. I think..” He hesitated, and then confessed the truth. “Ginny, I think I wanted to tell you these secrets all along.”

“Maybe.” Her mouth quirked up. “But you could have told me at the very start that this was your grandfather’s lodge, you know.”

“I should have done,” he admitted. “Honesty is not a Malfoy trait, Ginny.”

She rolled her eyes. “As if I really needed to be reminded of that.”

He enclosed her hand in his, feeling her small, strong fingers. “But I’ve told you the truth about everything now. You do believe me, don’t you?”

“Yes,” she sighed, moving back against the headboard, bringing him with her so that they were seated more comfortably. “I wish I didn’t. I wish I thought you were only lying, or even bragging, trying to make yourself sound more important than you are. But I know you told the truth.”

Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 10 | Word count: 33725 | Read count: 2324 | Published: Jan 22, 2017 | Updated: Apr 06, 2017
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Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Jan 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What? Only one review? I protest! I'll try to find time soon to read and leave a real review. For now - I'm glad you're writing again!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! :) I agree-- there should be more reviews. Um, I could possibly be just a slight bit biased, though. ;) Another chapter is coming soon.

The Language of Flowers by Anise    (Reviews - 8)

Draco and Ginny once shared a night at Malfoy Manor that they've never forgotten. In the years between, they've drifted very far apart. But now, when the wizarding world is plunged into crisis, they just might find each other again...

Quote from Chapter 4...

“If you think I’m going to… to do things for you so that you let my brother and Hermione and Harry go—“ she said heatedly.

“What?” Malfoy blinked, and for a second, he honestly looked shocked, as if he hadn’t expected things to move so quickly either. As if he didn’t have any more control than she did.

As the two of them stood staring at each other, a number of quick, sharp raps rattled at the door.

He muttered something that had led to Ginny getting her mouth washed out with soap when she'd said it at the age of nine and then raised his voice just enough for her to hear his next words. “Weasley, be quiet, for gods’ sake.”
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: Fully compliant, GoF and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Drama, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 4 | Word count: 24177 | Read count: 1661 | Published: Jun 26, 2018 | Updated: Sep 30, 2018
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Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Aug 12, 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Thank you for the new chapter.
It's interesting how Ginny was so quickly ready to trust Draco 4 years ago. She believes that he will protect her where he can.
The mystery is thickening. I wonder if Ron and Draco are really at the same place somewhere at the Manor...

Author's Response: Thanks-- I actually didn't see this until now!! I'll post the next chapter soon. The last weeks have been NUTS.

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Jun 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Anise!!!
You are back!!! Yay! Yay! Yay!
I'll read soon and leave a normal review.
But I had to tell you how extatic I am!!

Author's Response: YAY!!! So glad to see you again! :)

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Jun 27, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow. I'm so looking forward for every new chapter from now on! I liked the idea of Ginny working with flowers and I'm really curious as to everything that happened in those past four years and how Ginny ended up where she is. And of course I'm looking forward to her seeing Draco again... You writing keeps improving and improving and it was amazing to begin with. I'm soglad you are writing here again!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Yep... I'm not even sure when the last thing was posted here, but it's been awhile. Updates will happen, I promise! :)

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Jul 11, 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Thank you for a quick update!
I think what I sence the most so far is a gloomy atmosphere and the alternations between what happened 4 years before and the present time show that as far as Ginny is concerned not much has changed apparently. She used to stifle or push to the back of her mind her true feelings/thoughts which was maybe understandable when in the middle of war and she appears to continue doing so now. While things are being revealed at a slow pace it looks like the after war world is not really what was hoped for. And speaking in flower terms (I really liked the theme), it looks like Ginny is sort of withering away. I really must compliment you for making the reader feel the atmosphere.
Also here it becomes clear that what drew Ginny to Draco in her 6 year was (at least partly) the fact that he was putting himself in danger to be with her what Harry wasn't ready to do. But of course only a tip of the iceberg was revealed so far.
I'm waiting for a quick update!!!
What happened to Ron? Why do they have to wait for that Grayson guy and what do they want from Ginny?! I'm in suspence...

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! :) I just love your insights... a lot of them are things that I guarantee I didn't see when I was originally writing this. And there will be more soon...

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Oct 03, 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Thank you for the new chapter!
It was actually kinda funny to read how Ginny struggles between being proper and rational and her desire to actually do some naughty things with Draco. One moent she's indignant and the other she wants him to demand that of her for helping her brother. But we definitely see more of her impulsive side here - she rushes to Malfoy Manor without knowing if her brother is actually there or if Malfoy will agree to help and she doesn't have an alternative plan. I was sad though that she doesn't think someone could be interested in her because of her personality. Draco seems subdued. I imagine Ginny's arrival just added to his other problems...

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I see this Ginny as being really torn... she can't quite admit what she actually wants. And poor Draco... well, you'll see. ;) More soon!

A Tale of Two Dracos (But Only One Ginny) by Anise    (Reviews - 2)

Worlds collide when Draco and Ginny make a desperate attempt to keep Voldemort from rising in an alternate reality. But first, they must confront the sinister secrets of their shared past... in both our world and their own. And some of those secrets are dark indeed.

Chapter 4 Quote:

Ginny looked at Draco narrowly as a new thought struck her. “Or maybe you’re letting me talk to your lawyer for free because you expect me to do something for you. I think you know what I mean!”

“I didn’t say—”

“Because if you’re thinking that, then you can just forget it right now.” Just in case he wasn’t planning to trade free legal advice for sex, she decided not to spell anything out. But after all, she was now the girl next door whenever he happened to stop by his property in Sunol. If he wanted a quickie on his way to or from San Jose, she’d be convenient and available. A lot like a drive-through Starbucks, in fact. She could be his triple latte with nonfat milk and three Splendas. Ooh! Before she could really work herself into an irritated rage, he spoke again.

“Yes, I know what you mean, and believe me, I’m not thinking it.” Draco stopped short, but Ginny was sure about the rest of what he’d wanted to say. I have dozens of incredibly experienced and sophisticated girlfriends at my disposal, and they all practice exotic sexual techniques, wear Manolos, and carry Kate Spade handbags. Why would I be interested in a girl who drives a 1989 Honda Odyssey and has callused hands?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 4 | Word count: 24222 | Read count: 595 | Published: Apr 01, 2019 | Updated: Apr 21, 2019
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Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Apr 06, 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey, you're back!!!
I hope not just for a brief visit...

Author's Response: Yes! :) I'm going to post more things here, so I'll be around!

Reviewer: pitzi Signed
Date: Apr 06, 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Muggle world vs Ginny and Draco... I'm intrigued. Is it a long fic? I suppose not so much as this this for exchange.

Author's Response: This is actually a pretty long fic... you KNOW an Anisefic wasn't going to be short. :)