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Real name: Jewel Syquia
Registered: Sep 27, 2009
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Bitter Sweet Temptation by xNymphadoraX    (Reviews - 16)

Why has Ginny Weasley found herself in the arms of Draco Malfoy, not once, but twice?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4090 | Read count: 5559 | Published: Nov 07, 2005 | Updated: Nov 07, 2005
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Reviewer: Oriole Signed
Date: Sep 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

I thought overall this story was very cute, and I liked the surprise of Ginny being a virgin because it gave the story more innocence than it initially had. I would, however, give this story more detail and description which will provide a richness to the sexual connotations, and more words to spark the imagination :)