It's hard to learn how to live without that one person you thought would be in your life forever. But Ginny Weasley had always been a quick study, and there are always certain grey-eyed boys to help speed up the learning process...Category: Works in Progress
This is cute. I'm enjoying it . The idea of Draco being terrified of a cat is quite amusing.
Ice cream for lunch is a lovely idea. Draco hiding from Astoria was funny. Plus, you mocked the epilogue. That was beautiful.
Let me tell you a small tale - one that is not about death and mayhem, because those things do not come naturally to me. So, instead, let me tell you a tale with little lies and the twists of the heart. A tale with smiles, kisses and a happy ending.Category: Completed Short Stories
I love how this was told like a fairy tale. It was fabulous. There is never any reason to apologize for fluff. Fluff is wonderful.
“There’s this mirror,” she told him. “And I need to use it.”Category: Completed Short Stories
Winner of Darkest Fic and Best Interpretation of the Prompt at the 2008 D/G Fic Exchange.
What a cool idea for a story. I love the trading of the character traits and life situations.
She liked watching people and taking pictures.Category: Completed Short Stories
That was powerful. You have a gift for description. I have one suggestion though. There were times you shifted between ed endings and other endings, and that kind of pulled me out of the story. Most writers stay in the third person. Of course it is your story, and it was lovely. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I really tried to make it a visual piece. I\'m not sure what specifically you\'re referring to as far as tense, but perhaps you\'re looking at the first section? It\'s possible there could be a few anomalies, but for the most part the changes in tense were purposeful. The first section and the last section are meant to be in the present tense as a more narrative tie-together than part of the main action; however, because the first paragraph or two of the first section are more summary than anything else (\'when Ginny was a little girl\', etc.), it would naturally have to be in the past, especially the pluperfect since it refers to an action in the past that has already ended (coupled with the imperfect action of \'was\'). Anyway, I don\'t mean to go all grammar-nerd. My education on this subject has been entirely in Spanish, which actually makes the past tenses quite a bit more distinct than English, so it\'s entirely possible I made a few errors without noticing (I don\'t exactly always speak properly).
Ginny and Draco's story ends in a photobooth. Inspired by the D/G fanart and the Death Cab for Cutie song of the same name.Category: Completed Short Stories
Oh, that was sad. I always hope for a happy ending, but yours was more realistic. Good job.
When Draco’s best friend marries into the Weasley family, he finds himself in the company of a certain ginger-haired lass with amazing regularity.Category: Completed Short Stories
I loved this. There were several lines that made me laugh. Great job.
The greatest power that a person possesses is the power to choose.Category: Completed Short Stories
I am not happy with how this ended. I thought this was going to be a happy fic. I must not have read the description correctly. It's well written, but I really wish you'd change it to a happy ending. I can't believe she would watch him be murdered. There has to be another way. I am pouting until you fix this.
Author's Response: *giggles* I\'m sorry to see you pout. I was trying something DIFFERENT! I usually write FLUFF - this was a departure for me! I\'m glad you think it\'s well written though.. that\'s always a plus. ;)
The idea of "renting" her soul out to anyone - let alone a former Slytherin nemesis - did not sit well with Ginny Weasley. But circumstances always tend to go askew and when she finds herself in a dire position, Ginny has no choice but to relent, accepting the deal and the seven wishes offered as payment.Category: Long and Completed
I loved this. Draco was a jerk, yet his good qualities shone through. I will have to take you to task for ending the fic with a cliffhanger. It's very rude. Ending chapters with a cliffie is fine, but not the whole bloody story. That being said, you rock.
Hired by the Malfoys to manage their public relations after a bout of bad press, Ginny discovers that some relationships just aren't meant to stay strictly professional.Category: Long and Completed
Cute cute cute. I loved Reeta's thoughts, especially about the Malfoys staying away long enough for her to go to the international apparition office. This fic looks like it will be great fun.
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you\'re liking it so far!
I love the banter between Blaise and Draco. The bit about being pasty and pointy was great.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing their dialogue.
I'm loving this. It's midnight and I have to get up in the morning. I should have stopped reading a while ago.
Author's Response: We\'ll still be here in the morning! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
I hope you type quickly. I'll be checking back often.
Author's Response: :) Next one will be up soon!
That was quite satisfactory. You get an A.
Author's Response: Hurrah, thank you!
I'm smiling. Good job.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Potter is an idiot. He sits there, flirting, horribly, I might add, and still he gets no where. That’s because he doesn’t know the rules, wouldn’t know them even if they bit him. Fortunately, I know the rules. Not that it matters, the rules don’t apply to me. I’m not arrogant; I’m right. It isn’t being cocky if it’s true. When he wouldn’t pay her any attention, she went and found someone who would. Lucky girl, she caught the eye of the only man in this school who knew how to worship her properly.Category: Completed Short Stories
Googly Moogly. That was disturbing yet hot. I've never understood the whole nipple twisting thing. That is a very delicate area. I suppose to each his own. Great story.
Author's Response: I don\'t actually know what Googly Moogly means, I\'ve heard it a few times now though. :-) As always, I\'m so grateful when I get reviews from author I admire! Despite the disturbing, I\'m glad you liked it well enough to leave a review!
Category: Completed Short StoriesWhen Ginny meets his parents for the first time, things don’t go quite as Draco expects.
I love that he was jealous of his parent's affection. I'm smiling as I type.
Author's Response: Thank you! I always picture Draco as extremely jealous, so why wouldn't he be jealous of that too? I'm glad you enjoyed it!
An unexpected guest crashes Ginny's wedding.Category: Completed Short Stories
Well crap. That was not a satisfactory ending. He wasn't particularly kind. She was a bit of doormat. I want him to fight for her. I want her to grow a spine. The writing was good, the characters ticked me off.
If I should meet thee/After long years,/How should I greet thee? -/With silence and tears. Written for D/G Fic Exchange 2008Category: Completed Short Stories
Oh, that was so sad. I think everyone has one love that they thought they'd never recover from. You paint their emotions so well. I have goosebumps.
Author's Response: Thank you. I\'m glad you enjoyed it.
All his life he has acted as if he had all the choices in the world, as if time itself asked him before it dared to move. But the truth is he has rarely ever made a single decision. His life has been preplanned since the moment of his conception. From the very day Draco was born, his freedom was striped from him, and his life laid out like a road map before his eager silver, eyes: something to be studied, learned, and excepted as truth.Category: Completed Short Stories
Wait a minute. I'm confused. Did he die? Which is the fantasy and which is the reality?
Author's Response: Well, that\'s the point :-) You\'re supposed to decide for yourself. I know which one I believe happened, but if I tell you, that would ruin all the fun. Thanks for your review !
In her sixth year a mysterious condition renders Ginny Weasley unable to touch the opposite sex. What happens when Draco decides to challenge her illness? Sparks of denial and attraction will definitely fly.Category: Long and Completed
Awww! That was so cute. What an original idea. I loved it.
Author's Response: The idea is all my prompter - emo_globina. It was brilliant and I hope I did it justice. Thanks!
Each and every time I heard his knock upon my door, I used him in my own absurd fantasy, pretending, if only for the hours he was there, that I was in a normal relationship.Category: Completed Short Stories
Oh, how sad. I love the part about seeing the madness in his eyes. I think one would go insane if they were in love with the enemy.
Author's Response: I think it could be enough to push someone over the edge, yeah. Thanks for the review.
Okay, now in chapter three he comes back to her. Right? Right? *pout* There better be a chapter three. (One small note. You used tired in place of tried several times. Spell check doesn't catch those little beasts.)
Author's Response: Oh come on, I think you'd know my writing well enough by now to KNOW there isn't a third chapter coming. There was a second chapter though, and that is a start. : ) Thanks for your review. Thank you also for point out my word mishap. I'll get on that. ;)
She only tolerates the blasted season for him. One-shot. Companion piece to Snow.Category: Completed Short Stories
I'm with Ginny. Snow is pretty when observed from the inside of the house. I prefer to view it while drinking hot cocoa. Stepping in the wet frozen mush isn't my favorite thing to do.Of course she had a wonderful incentive.
Author's Response: I've never lived where it snows a lot, so I don't know whether I would like it or not. But put a Draco out there and I'll be sure to love it too! :D
Draco is being haunted by an unknown admirer. How will it turn out? Companion piece to "Parchment Pieces".Category: Completed Short Stories
Aww, I missed this one before. I love your portrayal of Draco and how in depth you are with his feelings.
Author's Response: I think I just squeed on myself a little. I'll clean that up later. Thank you so much for your review. You are one of my absolute favourite writers and to hear that you liked my Draco here means a lot to me. I was really nervous about that, he's a complicated guy and I didn't want to make him too sweet or soft. But he's falling for Ginny so of course he's a little off these days. Anyway, thank you so much again for taking the time to review.