Draco can’t stand the reporter for Quidditch World Weekly. She grates on his every nerve, until she’s gone.Category: Completed Short Stories
I loved the starbucks joke. Good job.
"Starbutts or some such rubbish. What the heavens and derrieres had to do with the murky liquid, he really didn’t want to know."
“Don’t you have plans?” “They can wait.” Short pieces examining moments in Draco and Ginny’s unorthodox relationship.Category: Works in Progress
I love the line about being allowed to say 'please' in French.
Author's Response: i'm just glad i was finally able to put four years of high school french to good use :)
To him it was a relationship, to her, a shag. Love, jealousy, sadness. (Draco's in seventh year. The Second War of Voldemort was concluded last summer, and Draco's becoming or not becoming a Death Eater is not important in this story. A happy ending.)Category: Completed Short Stories
Awwww, that was so sweet.
Author's Response: thank you :)
“What do you want, Weasley?”Category: Completed Short Stories
“You were listening to Muggle music?” she asked, wrapping her hands around the warm cup.
“Michael Jackson, if you must know,” Malfoy answered, rolling his eyes in exasperation, although his cheeks had an unexpected pink tinge. “Now, can you leave so that I can eat my pancakes in peace?”
A little tribute to the late King of Pop.
What a nice way to recognize MJ's passing.
Lost and wandering the dungeons, Ginny stumbles upon Draco. They share a moment that could grow into a lifetime. How far will Draco go to have her and how much will Ginny give up to be with him?Category: Works in Progress
I loved the line "When you get lost, I'll find you again." It sounds like she'll take care of him and bring him back from the dark side.
I'm intrigued by ypur character's logic. I loved it when Draco says they were both betrayed by their parents.
The fact that she considers herself broken is sad. Harry recognizing her condition and talking about what could have been was a great moment.
When Draco finds Miss. Weasley dancing on the bar at one of London's fanciest nightclubs, he is more than a little bit surprised. Intrigued, amused, he finds himself drawn to her; the interest seems reciprocal. Little does he know that Ginny is looking for more than sex, money, or even love...Category: Works in Progress
The idea a serial killer who engraves symbols onto his victims skin is intense and disturbing. Ginny posing as a secret agent is a fun idea. I'm interested to see where this fic goes.
Married for wealth, Draco regrets his decision to leave behind his love and allow her to marry second best. Now years later, lust and envy fill the air as they fight the passion and want to be together.Category: Long and Completed
I have a lump in my throat and my eyes are hot. I'm going to hug my dog.
Author's Response: It's always nice to hear I have moved someone! Keep reading, I should have chapter Seven up soon!!!
“Must be nice,” the girl’s voice continued, “to have lasted this long in our crazy world before you were forced to see death.”Category: Completed Short Stories
“I don’t know what you mean,” Draco replied stiffly.
“Don’t you?” the girl laughed. “Well, the Thestrals never lie, Draco Malfoy. It’s too bad you’re the cause of your own loss of innocence.”
Bloody hell. That was depressing. Your characterization was wonderful, but good god, I need to go hug my dog.
A small creak caught her attention, but she didn’t look. Her eyes were glued to the roof above her, and looking elsewhere would cause discomfort. “Is it morning already?” she asked quietly, hands fumbling underneath the blanket. She didn’t blink.Category: Completed Short Stories
I think they took dysfunctional to a whole new level. Yikes.
Author's Response: I'm sorry you didn't like it. In my book, passion is a good thing, and if that is the string keeping them together, then they can be as dysfunctional as they like. :]
I think you took my review the wrong way. I didn't say I didn't like it. I just said your characters were extreme. You managed to write them in a way where I thought they needed psychiatric care and possibly some happy pills. As a reader I felt concern for them because eventually one of them would probably kill the other. Then the remaining one would probably commit suicide. If I put this much thought into it then you did your job as an author. You made me care/worry for them. Also, I thought the way you changed back and forth using different font to show the two conversations was a great idea.
Author's Response: Ha! Thanks.
**** COMPLETE **** Ginny's sixth year is far more painful than she could have ever imagined. Nominated for Best Support Character (Molly Weasley) in the Spring 2009 D/G Fic Exchange.Category: Completed Short Stories
I like your depiction of Draco in this fic. He seems more realistic/cynical. He cares for her but he doesn't baby her. I like it. I like it a lot.
Author's Response: thank you so much! i was worried that he was too much of a softie!
PS. i am flattered by the review. i always read and adore your fics.
Draco is looking for an engagement ring for Astoria, but is it really what he wants? Ginny will help him find out...Category: Long and Completed
I liked your descriptions of Ginny and the store. It lent an air of mystery.
Go back into the mineralogy section you dolt.
Draco's got a new friend. Scorpius is not amused. Oh no, not at all.Category: Completed Short Stories
I wanted scorpius to tell Albus what his father was doing with her mother.
When Draco is sentenced to community service for his crimes in the war, he finds himself on the doorstep of Ginny Weasley's animal sanctuary. Stuck with each other and surrounded by beasts, Draco reluctantly does good while Ginny finds the company of Death Eaters surprisingly useful.Category: Long and Completed
I am in awe of your story writing capabilities. I teared up when she thought he'd abandoned her even though I knew he hadn't. I am sitting her sniffling and smiling. Wonderful job.
Draco and Ginny cooperate and conflict in the world of business.Category: Completed Short Stories
I liked being privy to Draco's thoughts showing his scheming side and his guilt over what he was doing.
Summary: They have been going out for a while now - they go on a date every Friday and spend Saturday together, and often Sunday too. Then there are week nights that are too long to spend apart, and lunches between work on Diagon Alley. Her stuff is all over his place - and did she really propose to him? He's sure she did. She's not so sure.Category: Completed Short Stories
(Previously titeled 'The Proposal'.)
Any woman who pushed a ring box back towards a man needs to visit st mungos.
He wishes he could turn back time and make things right.Category: Completed Short Stories, Works in Progress
Is she dead? I hope not. I hope he wins her back. This was sad.
Author's Response: Not quite dead, no. I would have included character death in the warnings. -seegrim
Malfoys do not cry. Draco Malfoy learnt this unshakable rule at the tender age of three, but when has Draco ever followed the rules?Category: Completed Short Stories
That was a bummer. I think you should change the ending to make it happy : )
You thought taking care of a plastic baby was hard work? At least it wasn't magical. Hilarity ensues as the students of Hogwarts learn a lesson in responsibility through Dumbledore's new parenting project. AU DG with several other minor pairings.Category: Works in Progress
I love that she fainted at the end. I hope this isn't a one shot. (hint hint)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. This definitely not a one-shot, there will be a new chapter up soon.
Ginny doesn't recognize the room she wakes up in. The same cannot be said for the man she wakes up next to. If only she could remember what happened the night before.Category: Long and Completed
Googley Moogley, Your Draco is...wow. I don't think I've read a fic where he seemed so grown up, brooding, and unbelievably hot.
Author's Response: I love your stories (I fought with myself not to write that in all caps just now). Now that I've gotten that out, thank you. This was my first attempt at writing this sort of Draco. I was extremely nervous when it came to him because I'm used to writing him in a different light. So, I'm relieved to know he came off just the way I wanted him to. Thanks for the review! Oh, and I giggle when I read 'Googley Moogley.' I'm not exactly sure why.
Some wars never end. A dive into the past reveals how theirs began.Category: Long and Completed
Winner Best Kiss, Best Interpretation of Prompt, and Mod's Choice in the 2009 D/G Fic Exchange on LJ. Written for fallingskyes.
The Malfoys attracted the attention of the people around them in the same way that a flame attracts moths. The acquaintance of one with the other burned just the same; she, of course, knew from experience.
I love this line. It's one of the best lines I've ever read. This is such a unique idea for a fic. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you! That is one of my favorite lines. :)
Memories are a special kind of torture.Category: Long and Completed
I love the use of flashbacks. Great idea for a fic.
Author's Response: Thanks! It was a terrific prompt :)