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The Reality of Being Draco Malfoy by sweetproserpina    (Reviews - 27)

Draco realizes that his greatest challenge is right under his nose.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1049 | Read count: 3282 | Published: Aug 02, 2005 | Updated: Aug 02, 2005
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Reviewer: svadilfari Signed
Date: Apr 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Reality of Being Draco Malfoy

Hehe, very sweet. Nice, logical relationship between the two married adults.

Harry Potter and His Rather Large Ego by nun outfits are cool    (Reviews - 98)

It is three years after the war has ended; five years after Dumbledore's death. Harry is invited to a wedding where he sees all the people he has been studiously ignoring for all this time.


Just some D/G Harry bashing(ish)


Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 8387 | Read count: 10198 | Published: Oct 20, 2006 | Updated: Jan 08, 2007
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Reviewer: svadilfari Signed
Date: Apr 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Harry Gets a Bit of a Crush

BY Heavens, I adore your sense of humour. Your specific capitalisations are sooo darling and almost always earn a giggle. Ooohh...am also tres impressed that you brought in that that ridiciolus green-eyed monstor. I must say it reads better here and in the original. Sorry Rowling!

Author's Response: aaw cheers!! this story is my darling, and I love Harry\'s ridiculous monsters very much :) thank you for a lovely review, I only wish I could have more to give you... I\'m working on the next chapter but with my Very Large exams and other stuff, life\'s not letting me... there\'ll be more when there\'s more, though...

The Mournful Soldier by nun outfits are cool    (Reviews - 31)

Harry's back! Much angst and woe at Hogwarts school. However will Ginny cope?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4025 | Read count: 3377 | Published: Apr 06, 2007 | Updated: Apr 06, 2007
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Reviewer: svadilfari Signed
Date: Apr 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Mournful Soldier

Lol loved how Good Deed was capitalised. Utterly splendid and endearing and dear lord your sense of humour is utterly darling. Very Good job :-)

Author's Response: Cheers! Good Deeds should be rewarded with Capital Letters, because they are fabulous and very fun to write :)

Trust by LadyRhiyana    (Reviews - 19)

"Master listens to you," the house-elf whispered. "Master trusts you..." Set 5 years after Footprints.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1120 | Read count: 4880 | Published: Apr 08, 2007 | Updated: Apr 08, 2007
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Reviewer: svadilfari Signed
Date: Apr 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Trust

I adore your Malfoys! Oh I do, I do. Adore the intricate and complex relationships as well as personalities. Can't get more real than that. Oh an another, entirely different note. I love, love, love Lucius, that great blond bastard, I do. And just in case you're asking, yes, I DO happened to be in some exotic, excluisve part south of France with a certain Mr. Monfort lol

Shields by nun outfits are cool    (Reviews - 24)

Sometimes, protection comes at a price we are unable to endure.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2497 | Read count: 3066 | Published: Apr 22, 2007 | Updated: Apr 22, 2007
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Reviewer: svadilfari Signed
Date: Apr 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Dear Merlin, she CAN'T end up with Seamus, especially NOT after that outburst. Come on! No, I object. Can't you at least, for my own pitiful need of closure, so a shorty? Just an ickle one? Lol otherwise great job.

The Lolita Looter by Vixenize    (Reviews - 26)

Third Place in Pud's Great Draco & Ginny Contest Spring 2007. After a long mission abroad, top Auror Draco Malfoy is looking for an easy assignment as a change of pace. Little does he know what's in store...
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 7214 | Read count: 4367 | Published: Apr 23, 2007 | Updated: Apr 23, 2007
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Reviewer: svadilfari Signed
Date: Apr 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Lolita Looter

Hi there, excellent piece of work for a one-shot. Your flashbacks were clear and never got in the way of narration. Everything was pretty well fleshed out. Lolita Looter is ever so divine, I wish I had a cat to name her that.

The Choice is Yours to Be Loved by tudorrose1533    (Reviews - 89)

Enter a world of thievery and transgression…a tangled web of lies and deception, passion and betrayal, love and sex, birth and death—all threatening to consume the lives of those ready to go up in flames.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 8 | Word count: 24971 | Read count: 19146 | Published: Apr 24, 2007 | Updated: May 19, 2007
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Reviewer: svadilfari Signed
Date: Apr 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: One

This is an amazing excellent, realistic, glorious piece of work. I await with the greatest of anticipation for the coming installments. I love everybody in there, I love the conversations, your descriptions and everything else.

Reviewer: svadilfari Signed
Date: May 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: One

Oh my god, WHAT is WRONG with her?! Dear Lord, she's mad. She should have just gone back to Malfoy or at the very least work on her sham marriage with Seamus. But, no...still she insists on destroying more lives. This fic is really doing a good job of representing familiar characters differently all the while ensuring some modicum of reality.

Reviewer: svadilfari Signed
Date: May 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Seven

NOOOO!! Now when she finally had the chance and she goes and BURNS it, with green flame to top it. But, really I enjoy how well you get so deep in silliy complications all because of some form of emotion.

One Perfect Day by LadyRhiyana    (Reviews - 9)

One perfect summer day, the Malfoy family goes on a picnic. HappilyMarried!DG. Warning: excessive WAFF and very little plot.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 998 | Read count: 4681 | Published: May 18, 2007 | Updated: May 18, 2007
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Reviewer: svadilfari Signed
Date: May 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: One Perfect Day

Oh hon, you must know how very much I love your stories. Queen Lucy indeed! Brought back memories of another Queen Lucy, this one from the Pevensie family. And really it WOULD be nice if the next Malfoy Lord would be a Malfoy Lady.

Ten Years Later, or Pud's Rewrite of the DH Epilogue by Rainpuddle    (Reviews - 191)

*DH SPOILERS* Consider yourself warned.

This is my attempt to correct some of the wrongs...
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1128 | Read count: 11123 | Published: Jul 23, 2007 | Updated: Jul 23, 2007
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Reviewer: svadilfari Signed
Date: Jul 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, this is certainly cathartic. It took me ten minutes of 'relaxed' breathing to put all right in my mind and Rhett Butler echoing comfortingly, "Frankly, my dear, I don't give a damn". As far as I am concerned, Potter dashes off with Snape's memories and the lurking Hermione runs in to save her beloved Snape, Draco's hairline does NOT recede (cruel unnecessary blow)and he is happily married to GINNY and Hedwig simply suffered a concussion. How the Luscious Lucius swanned through the book with only some repairable damamge to his looks and ego, Heaven above only knows. Many thanks for this.

Author's Response: Yeah, well, remember she emasculated Lucius right off that bat and kept Draco as a coward. At least Narcissa held it together a bit! But all of it was so wrong!

Nineteen Years Later... the Truth by Anise    (Reviews - 893)

What really happened in the DH Epilogue of Doom. Poor, poor Harry, so very clueless...

Chapter SIXTY-NINE quote of the day:

Ginny scowled at him. “You don’t know me very well.”

Draco shook his head, his eyes more sorrowful than ever. “No. I don’t. Eternity wouldn’t be long enough for that.”

“Why do I feel as if we’ve suddenly wandered into the set of a men’s cologne commercial?” complained Lucifer.

“Can’t you keep your damn mouth shut, Lucifer?” spat Draco.

“Please… really… I don’t think you should talk to him that way,” whispered Ginny.


Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Humor
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 69 | Word count: 315075 | Read count: 138760 | Published: Jul 30, 2007 | Updated: Feb 26, 2011
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Reviewer: svadilfari Signed
Date: Jul 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Your title is hilarious even if the story doesn't seem to promise humour. I just like the 'truth' bit. I mean, J.K.'s epilogue was one of the few bits where you clearly remember that it is written from Potter pov.