Nine years after being hurt by Draco, Ginny finally gets her chance for revenge.Category: Long and Completed
CHAPTER SIXTEEN QUOTE:
I sighed and went to the door, removing the deadbolt that I had put in, and opened it without even looking. I gasped when I saw who it was.
Great ending to the chapter. Nice to see laughter, not all the weeping! Like how you brought Pansy into the story.
Author's Response: I hate making Ginny a weepy character by any means because that tends to pull her out of character, but she definitely has some conflicting emotions so I did have to show another side of her. But she's back on track now! :)
loving the story- couldn't sleep until I was caught up! Liking the direction, but that Ginny runs hot and cold!
Author's Response: Ginny is a bit of a weird one. I guess it's different when you read a story in first person because we get all of one character's thoughts, but I just feel like a passionate character like Ginny /would/ be a bit over the place, knowing what's good for herself on one side, but then again not entirely able to control how badly she wants Draco, so she lets herself go a bit whacky. I'm glad you're enjoying the story though! I hope to update again very very soon. :)
Oh that was just mean!!!!
Author's Response: :) Heh, it was a bit. Thanks for the review!
Oh, what could it be!!
Author's Response: :) Thanks for the review!
I am loving this story!! I love Stephanie Plum so this is a natural to me. Hope you keep it up!! Thanks!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying this story. I am a big fan of the Stephanie Plum books as well, so I am glad not to disappoint! :)
"Hello,” he said casually, as if speaking to a perfect stranger. She supposed that was what they were, now.Category: Works in Progress
She said nothing.
“Those cigarettes will kill you, you know.” Oh so now he was giving medical advice.
She held up the cigarette in a salute to the sky, as if to say “Here’s hoping,” but still no words escaped her chapped lips.
Great start, very intriguing! You may have scared me off with the warnings, but so far you have created a very compelling Ginny!