Memory is a maze of secrets, and the key to unlocking them comes from an unlikely source.Category: Long and Completed
Oh no! It's the end already...? It'd be really cool if you wrote a sequel, or something...
Author's Response: So far, I don\'t have anything else to tell in this story. Maybe I\'ll return to this universe, but only if there\'s something just as good to tell.
*DH SPOILERS* Consider yourself warned.Category: Completed Short Stories
This is my attempt to correct some of the wrongs...
WOOO! PINK-HAIRED BABIES FOREVER!!
Author's Response: Darn skippy! *snuggles a pink-haired baby*
A simple game in the Gryffindor tower turns into a complex heist, but in the end, whose heart will be stolen? DG with just a smidgen of BZLL on the side. Written hurriedly for Pud’s Great Draco & Ginny Fic Contest 2007. Crossposted at Fanfiction.net.Category: Long and Completed
haha... nice ending. made me smile.
Colin Creevey, with the help of his trusty camera of course, has discovered something terrible happening at Hogwarts. And it's all Malfoy's fault.Category: Completed Short Stories
haha! i loved that ending, it's so perfectly colin and absolute mcgonagall. thanks for giving me a laugh today. :)
Author's Response: Oh, glad you think so. I love Colin, it was so much fun to write him, and I personally can just really picture McGonagoll saying that. :)
Both hands toyed with the envelope, flipping it over and over again. After a few moments, she ripped open the top of the envelope, finally tired of her own hesitance. A black and white picture slipped onto the floor, yellow around the edges from years of hiding in some wayward shoebox.Category: Completed Short Stories
Draco Malfoy. Draco Malfoy was her next hit.
Interesting story! The biggest point I want to make is the line "The lifeless form of Draco fell onto the floor." I think you're trying to build suspense by delaying his name, but it just sounds awkward. Going for something like "The body hit the floor. His face was peaceful..." would be easier to read, and also give suspense. Overall, though, good stuff. :)
Author's Response: I read that sentence over and over after you pointed it out, and it does sound a bit awkward. I've been rolling it in head trying to reword it. Thank you for the constructive criticism. Its really, genuinely helpful.