This poem is about Draco and Ginny (duh) though it doesn't directly say it. Its my first fanfic. Also its very dark and such with lots of symbolism.Category: Poetry
Your imagery is really nice! You captured the battle of opposite wills very matter-of-factly. I'll be looking forward to more beautiful poetry from you. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I kept changing it around before I posted it, so I am glad that it turned out well! I am so going to continue writing and hope to put out another poem shortly.
The war had pitted everyone and everything against each other. Now, while darkness is rapidly enveloping the world, two enemies find each other again.Category: Works in Progress
wow. you have me captivated, hanging on from your first word to your last. i can't wait to see how you develop this promising story! the images you paint are so vivid that i can almost reach out and touch them... bravo! a piece of advice, if i may: try putting spaces between paragraphs so the lines don't overlap when one reads them. :) i almost didn't read it when i saw the nearness of the lines, but it was sooo good that i didn't mind sticking my nose to the computer screen. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, not just for your delightful review, but also for alerting me about the spacing. I just realized that I had to add to breaks to make it skip a line. :) thanks a ton.
Author's Response: oops. can\'t spell two!
Author's Response: oops. I can\'t spell two!
'It was not because she believed in the Dark Lord, but because he departed for the other side. Now he was darkness, and she was light. They were enemies now, in the truest meaning of the word.' ~~~ 'She had betrayed him. He had revealed all his secrets, bared his heart, but she had walked away. Just the very thought of her made his usual cold blood boil.' i'm sensing angst time! :) and a serious case of misunderstanding... :'(
Author's Response: ahh, the most insightful reader you are. ;)
‘Like Mother like Daughter.’ Sometimes even trite sayings bear striking accuracy. Follow three different redheaded girls, divided by time and bound by blood, make the same disobedient choice.Category: Long and Completed
bwahahaha! i LOVE it! the history-repeats-itself scenario with all the parallelisms---great writing! :D
Ginny goes for a little walk after a quidditch match.Category: Completed Short Stories
bwahahaha! :D that was hilariously great! i couldn't stop laughing at seeing (or reading, but more like seeing) ginny strutting around naked with draco scrambling after her. pure comedic genius. and my fave line: "I do know where you sleep, and I'm already irritated with you." exactly draco.
As the war came to its end the ones who were left behind began to scour the land looking for their lost loved ones and friends but with the dead laid the stories of their deaths...Category: Poetry
that was sad. :'( beautiful yet sad. ginny's search for draco brought to mind scarlett walking through the field of bodies in 'gone with the wind.' i love this line the most: "And there staring hauntingly at her was the mark that gave him death" poor, poor draco. :'(
Author's Response: You know, surprisingly Noel told me the same thing and I see the connection now. I\'m glad you enjoyed it.