Category: Works in ProgressDavid Malfoy and his twin sister Diana have a serious problem. After one of their parents' many heated rows, Draco and Ginny Malfoy part. It's worse than ever. Everybody is talking about divorce and even their elder sister has given up hope that their stubborn parents will ever get together again. Diana and David decide that there's only one way to save their parents' marriage: Magic! But something goes horribly wrong and David is transferred to the year 1997, while the seventeen-year-old Draco takes his place in the future. Now it's up to Draco to save his future marriage with the help of his daughters. Pre-HBP!
I am so glad that you updated. It was driving me crazy not knowing what was going to happen. I hope up post the next chapter very soon.
I have been waiting on giving my review (I have been with this story since you posted the first chapter) but my opinion has not changed yet. I'm probably in a very small minority but I don't really like anybody in the Malfoy family, maybe David a little bit. My opinion on them is that they need to all stay out of each other's lives before they ruin them anymore than they have now. I have not found any really good characteristics in them that would make them more likeable to me. Draco is a cheater, Ginny is keeping secrets from her husband, and all of the children seem to be brats. And they all seem very selfish, too. Despite all this, I can't wait for your next chapter. Maybe something will happen to change my opinion. =)
Author's Response:
Well, I never looked at them that way. They are probably all human, but I see what you mean. I think they are the Malfoys and I couldn't bring myslef to picture Draco as a perfect husband (sometimes it seems to be out of character for me in some fictions), being married to him has changed Ginny probably, and the children... well they are in between the Weasleys and the Malfoys and of corse Draco had a lot of influence on them. But I hope that as the story continues you'll see that my dear Malfoy siblings aren't only bad and spoilt. I'll try my best ;)
Please, please, please update soon! This first chapter was wonderful and you seem like a writer that is capable enough to write a time traveling fic. Please try not to take to long updating because I am sure that all your readers are eager to know what is going to happen next.
I thought it was hilarious when Draco said ‘My father used to say that there would be a time when my children would do everything to me that I did to my parents. I hate it when he's right!' It is a wonderful little line. I am glad you updated and I can't wait until the next chapter to see what is going to happen next.
Twelve days can be a lifetime, yet Epiphany must always come.Category: Completed Short Stories
Wow! It was just wonderful and the ending was quite a surprise. I was tearing up a bit at the end.
Author's Response: Yeah, me too! I really did try to write a happy holiday piece. I think I did, though. They ended up together, right?
When Harry leaves Ginny for Hermione, Draco decides it's time to fulfill an old fantasy. Twenty five is a little old to experience her first one night stand, but Ginny thinks she can handle it.Category: Works in Progress
I loved this. I don't exactly sure why but I am really amused that you actually had Blaise smack Draco in the back of the head. Please update soon.
Potter is an idiot. He sits there, flirting, horribly, I might add, and still he gets no where. That’s because he doesn’t know the rules, wouldn’t know them even if they bit him. Fortunately, I know the rules. Not that it matters, the rules don’t apply to me. I’m not arrogant; I’m right. It isn’t being cocky if it’s true. When he wouldn’t pay her any attention, she went and found someone who would. Lucky girl, she caught the eye of the only man in this school who knew how to worship her properly.Category: Completed Short Stories
I really enjoyed the story and song. I always like to read stories were Ginny is not all sweet and innocent. I loved your clever little song that inspired the fic. Always enjoyed your stories and can't wait for your future ones.
Author's Response: :-D Thank you! I\'m working on about 20 one shots right now, so we\'ll just have to see what comes out next.
Even as I gaped in horror, Ginny emitted a happy giggle, one that I had not heard in years. How had none of us noticed? How much more to their story was there?Category: Completed Short Stories
I am going to be honest. I am not exactly sure why, but I really, really like this story so far. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you!
I am going to be honest. I am not exactly sure why, but I really, really like this story so far. Please update soon.
"The day began just like any other for Astoria Malfoy, but it didn’t stay that way for long."Category: Works in Progress
Ten years after the DH Epilogue, Harry Potter dies and everyone else is left to pick up the pieces.
I really like this story. This chapter was very intriguing and I was very surprised by the last sentence. I am waiting for the next chapter.
Draco brings out thirteen darn good excuses, but none of them seem to be working. Inspired by this site's "blanket" skin.Category: Completed Short Stories
First off, the "blanket" skin is the one I have set on my account since it is my favorite. When I saw that you were writing a story about it, for some I squealed like little girl. When I finished reading the story, I did it again. Being serious, I loved the story, all the little funny lines and images. Even the way it was written (which I have not always enjoyed reading in the past).
Author's Response: Hee! HEE! ...There, I got MY little-girl-squeals done with too, and now I can write a coherent response: Thank you! I'm very glad you like it. I know that the "blanket" skin is a lot of people's favorite, and so I don't want to ruin it for them, or anything. So hearing that you (who liked "blanket" best) loved my story, especially since it wasn't your favorite style - well, that just made my day! Thanks! :D
The morning after she married Draco Malfoy, Ginny reflects on the love and tears that led to this moment of now and forever.Category: Completed Short Stories
A little bit more sugary and sappy than the stories I usually read, but it was still a very enjoyable story to read.
Ginny Weasley is absolutely sure that Draco Malfoy is hatching a particularly evil plot as junior head of the Ministry Department of Culture, and that it definitely involves puppy-strangling, bribing officials, and consistently wearing trousers tailored very tight in back. Or at least it's a theory that makes sense when she's been surviving on two hours of sleep a night for far too long, and Draco keeps vetoing her sketches for the new marble statues at the Ministry fountain. But then Luna Lovegood gives her a potion with some very curious effects, and Ginny finds that she just may have to revise her opinions about those evil trousers...Category: Works in Progress
I already love this story. I really enjoy the way you have balanced the different elements of the story. It not overly humorous and Ginny is still herself even though she is acting a little crazy. I hope you get what I am meaning because I don't feel like I am explaining myself properly. I can't wait until you post a new chapter because I really have no clue what is going to happen next. I enjoy fics that are not predictable. In addition, when I read the line "And on top of it all, you’ve drawn the vampire to look like Cedric Diggory again", I was laughing so hard that I nearly started hyperventilating. I just loved the Twilight references.
This chapter was hilarious and I was giggling the whole way through it. There were so many funny lines that I can't just pick one. I love it that you have Draco blushing so much in this fic. And your unique descriptions are causing me to have strange, but very pleasant, images containing Draco pop into my head. I am really surprised at how patient Draco is with Ginny because I think that I would have knocked her out myself by now. I can't wait until the next chapter.
Wonderful chapter! I loved how fast paced this chapter felt for me. I thought the line you snuck in there about "and the rubber duckies of various sizes" was very clever. It was simple, but very funny. (Since I am talking about Draco's bathroom, I have to say that I just love it and wish I had one like it for myself. I would probably never leave it if I did.) I not exactly sure why, but for some reason I really enjoyed that Ginny literally jumped Draco. Maybe I just like the woman taking charge, even if it a slightly crazy one. LOL! I really feel terrible for Ginny since Draco just seems to be making things worse for her. However, her big mouth is not helping her either.
I am so happy that I was eating ice cream as I was reading this. I needed something to cool me off. I love the gradual shift of this chapter. At first Ginny was in charge, trying to tempt Draco into taking her. Then you begin to see Draco crossing the line, even though he is struggling not to. Next, you see him caving in until Ginny begins to mention the past and then you see Draco morph into a dark, sensuous, almost sinister being. That really girly side of me just melted into a puddle.
I have to admit that I was a little shocked about Draco's admission. I have to agree with Ginny because I don't think he would have done it either. I also want to know what Ginny was thinking when she pointed the wand at Draco. The "Junior Death Eater camp" bit was kind of funny to me. I don't know if you meant for it to be, but it was for me.
I can't wait until the next chapter. I love this story and really want to thank you for updating so quickly. You are almost updating every day. I don't like waiting to long for chapters of stories that I real love, but you are going above and beyond.
Wow! This has left me speechless... and a bit dazed. I think that we are all going to be right beside you in hell. Ha ha!
I really enjoyed the bit that you included in you author's note. You keep on making those strange, yet enjoyable, images pop into my head.
I am going to warn you now that I am going to be using the word "love" a lot. I love how you have Draco describing the different knots he is using as he is tying her up (and how he tore her clothing to shreds). I love your original idea about the "invisible" ropes since most authors use things like real bindings, the Body-Bind curse, or the imperius curse to secure a person. As bad as this might make me sound, I love that Draco is living out his fantasy and that he is making Ginny admit that she is a "bad girl". I thought that it was quite torturous of Draco to make her beg so much and then act, if only for a moment, as if he was not going to touch her. I have to admit that I was shocked that Ginny was virgin, though I did pick up on the hints beforehand. As much I love to see Draco agonizing over this, I wish that he would just hurry up and do it. I am about to cry in frustration. I am exaggerating a bit, but only a little.
I had a much better and detailed review before, but I unfortunately did not noticed that my internet and (later the electricity) had went out because a storm before I tried to post.
I think I just melted into a puddle on the floor. This literally gave me hot flashes. I had to turn on my little fan so I could try to cool myself off. This was just... incredible. Right now, I feel like I just need to continue exclaiming how wonderful this chapter was.
"She felt as if she had been crawling through the desert for days on end, starved and parched with thirst, and had finally reached a glorious oasis that stubbornly kept scooting away from her" was one of my favorite lines in this chapter. I thought that Ginny's description of Draco's actions was perfect. I think that this is how some of your readers feel like too. I was beginning to get annoyed with Draco because he kept flip flopping back and forth. I swear that he is worse than a kid that can't choose which ice cream flavor he wants. Why must you torture us so much? Kidding... mostly. Thank goodness, he actually went through with it in this chapter, but I am very happy that they seem to be nowhere near being finished.
I have to admit I bit curious about Draco's jealousy of Harry. I am not 100% sure if it justified, but that is probably just me. I love, love, love that Ginny manipulated Draco. I always enjoy seeing a female that is strong, smart and a bit manipulative and not one that acts weak, defenseless and dumb the entire story.
“Ginny realized that the fang of jealousy was biting Draco Malfoy in his perfect arse. “I don’t know,” she said as innocently as she could, considering that her lust-crazed brain was screaming at her to discard clever stratagems and just make a sudden grab for Draco’s cock, which still looked suspiciously erect, if you asked her.”
I thought that these were the two funniest lines in this chapter. Ginny is again thinking about his arse. In addition, I love the thought of Ginny trying to be all-innocent while she is thinking of attacking Draco’s cock.
“He quirked one dark-blond eyebrow at her and propped himself up on one elbow, pausing to catch his breath. "Ginny, Ginny, Ginny. You don't know me very well, do you? Well, never mind." He smiled at her, and she wondered for a moment if it was the sort of smile that Lucifer had worn during his long, long fall from heaven.
"You will," he purred, and then he reached for her, and it all began again.”
This last bit gave me goose bumps. I must tell you that your description of Draco’s smile is the best I have ever read.
I want to compliment you on how you were able to expand a scene like this without making it seem as if you were just dragging it along. Very few fan fic authors are able to do this. (I have even seen a few professional authors that have had this problem.) Though I am sure that other reviewers have stated the same thing, this was still one scorching hot chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh, before I forget, I would like a review crown that has blue sapphires. The blue color would go very nicely with my hair color and skin tone. =)
The last thing Ginny expected when she got called into work was a promotion; and she certainly didn’t expect the disruption it would cause to her carefully constructed life.Category: Works in Progress
I really enjoy this fic. I reread it a couple times a year. I know it has been over a year since the last chapter was posted, but I hope that you finish this story because I can't wait for the two to finally get together and to see the others' reactions when they find out.
When her family perished in the great wizarding war, Ginny turned her back on the magical community and eeked out a life for herself in the muggle world. Struggling to make ends meet, Ginny seeks to escape her hum-drum life and a throwaway comment from Draco galvanises her into action. Afraid of losing her, Draco intervenes and nothing ends up going to plan.Category: Works in Progress
Please don't abandon this fic! It has been a few years and most authors never come back after this long, but I am still hoping. I read this every few months and hope that it has been updated. I really like your take on this trope and I love your characterizations of Ginny and Draco.
Ginny doesn’t trust the Malfoys, or their meteoric return to the centre of society, but a mishap at a party could change everything she thinks that she knows.Category: Works in Progress
I have read this few times since you last posted and I hope you will continue the story. I am quite looking forward to learning more about Draco's thoughts and intentions.