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Keeping Christmas on the Death Train by Anise    (Reviews - 2336)

Two and a half years after his failure to kill Albus Dumbledore, Draco has long been accepted back into the ranks of the Death Eaters. He is still obsessively searching for the rebel Ginny Weasley, but he hides that secret well. When she is found one snowy December night, he smuggles her onto the Death Eaters? train with him. And he begins to learn that nothing will ever be the same again?

Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Bestiality, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Non-consensual sex, Sexual Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 119 | Word count: 422332 | Read count: 273107 | Published: Dec 14, 2005 | Updated: Nov 02, 2009
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Date: Nov 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

'A History of the Earl of Sandwich', 'Firewhiskeys of the British Isles' - LOL love ur sense of humor.

I also adore the way u have depicted Ron... hotheaded, mad as hell yet logical and rational - up to a point.

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Date: Nov 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

AAAggghh.... I manage to fall for the same thing every time. LOL!

You are an amazing writer... thanks for the story. I seriously can't get enough of it.

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Date: Mar 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83

Wow - hats off the way you have depicted Ron. I feel so bad for him and Ginny... to loose your father like that...

Looking forward to the scene that is gonna happen in the library between Ron and Draco. Wonder if Hermione will join then there....

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Date: Mar 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Carl Jung - LOL that's the cherry on the icing along with 'Ziggy' being the librarian in the Malfoy library!!

Love your sense of humor! And as always - YAY you are back!

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Date: Mar 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81

Hooray for daily updates!!

I felt so bad for little Draco when he thought of his Mum. Poor little boy.

Regarding the smut, LOL it's a good thing that you have laced up your running shoes huh?

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Date: Mar 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Wow - Harry's so totally lost his marbles. Love the way you have gone about depicting Ron. How I wish Hermione would grow a backbone and make up her mind whether Harry is bonkers or not! Can't wait to read more!

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Date: Mar 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

Ooooo so Harry gets worse? Wow can't wait!

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Date: Mar 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

Think I like the Lady Death part the best... or is it how Draco wanted Hermione as a big sister... LOL what ever the case, brilliant writing as always.

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Date: Apr 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

AAaagghhh!! Please pass the parachutes!

Excellent stuff - as always!

The Hidden Doorway by kjcp    (Reviews - 201)

Ginny, Harry, and Draco have been leading separate lives for years, but then a disturbing case involving mind manipulation brings them all together. Rows break out, animosity and hatred grow, people die, and friendship is tested. In the midst of all that, is it possible for romance between two unlikely people to bloom?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 12 | Word count: 72909 | Read count: 9554 | Published: Jan 27, 2006 | Updated: Feb 11, 2007
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Date: Sep 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 8: The Boy Without a Name


Himm... very creepy, with vivid details... You guys have definitely done ur research coz everything was very believable...

Some Grand mom that poor boy has... wonder what would have happened if he wasn't cursed by her... kinda feel sorry for him... and wonder if he would have ended up so twisted if he had a normal childhood...

Stolen Notes by Serenitey    (Reviews - 155)

Five years ago Ginny Weasley disappeared from Harry Potter and the Wizarding World. What happens when she is found, a hidden passion and a forbidden relationship are revealed? [On hiatus]
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 11 | Word count: 55304 | Read count: 20370 | Published: Feb 12, 2006 | Updated: Sep 07, 2007
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Date: Oct 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: Once in a Lullaby

The wait for the update was definitely worth it. Great chapter.

Author's Response: thanks :D sorry to say there will be a a bit of a wait for the next.

Hesperides' Apple by ogygiasylph    (Reviews - 871)

When Ginny Weasley becomes Draco Malfoy's wife, he suspects neither her true identity nor her dangerous motives. But when all Hell breaks lose and their relationship takes unexpected turns, there is more at stake than preserving their marriage--namely, preserving their lives.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Graphic Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 33 | Word count: 166850 | Read count: 239464 | Published: Jun 29, 2006 | Updated: Sep 17, 2009
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Date: Aug 24, 2006 Title: Chapter 14: 13. Good tidings

Fabulous chapter. You managed to get so much of information into this chapter... and yet it flows so well...

Guess Ginny knows that she is pregnant huh... that's why she is using a Tawaret amulet... how come she hasn't brought it up with Draco yet?

Also, now that the 'pale witch' following Ginny has witnessed her reunion with Neville... how soon will Zabini get to the bottom of things?

Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad you enjoyed it. again, it appears I\'m going to have so rewriting to do: Ginny doesn\'t know (how could she even imagine, after all those contraception spells) that she\'s pregnant. In a way the amulet found her rather than she found it. Zabini will get to the bottom of things very, very soon. In fact, we can assume he\'s there already. Now all we have to wait for is the moment when he finds himself forced to tell Draco the entire truth... Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: WG13 Signed
Date: Aug 24, 2006 Title: Chapter 14: 13. Good tidings

Sorry to point this out... but u have to correct the following:

"The Potters and Sirius Black had ensured that his vault was well furnished."


Author's Response: can you not say \"well furnished\"? it\'s definitely a Gallicism on my part apologies for that, but I\'m afraid I don\'t know what the correct term should be. Feel free to tell me, and thanks for pointing it out!

Reviewer: WG13 Signed
Date: Aug 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 14: 13. Good tidings

Sorry, I was half asleep when I submitted my review last night... and I see I wasn't very clear about what I wanted to say...

By the 'pale witch', I did mean Shehzin. What i was trying to convey was i wonder how long it will take for Blaise to connect the dots.

Another thought, aren't the goblins supposed to be very secretive about there clients... wonder how much luck Blaise will have finding and talking to the goblin who met Ginny and Virgryph...

Regarding the Tawaret amulet, Anya - think u hit the nail on the head... didn't think of that angle.

Wonder how Ginny is going to react when she finds out though....

Again, great chapter... can't wait for the next installment!


Author's Response: No problem at all! Maybe I was half asleep when I wrote this, lol, if it so encourages confusion... Blaise isn\'t going to be very lucky--but maybe Draco has a chance? As to the Tawaret amulet, indeed, Anya got it :) You\'ll find out soon enough how SHE reacts when SHE finds out. Thanks for the many reviews :D

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Date: Aug 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 15: 14. Escalating tensions and subsequent blows

Eeeeeks! I actually felt revolted reading bits of the story...

Himm... that again says a lot about ur writing; if u can make people feel for ur characters...

I wonder how things will go from here... I fell very; very sorry for Blaise; being in the position that he is in. It won't be easy telling Draco what's happening under his nose... he might just shoot the messenger...

Author's Response: I\'m glad you felt revolted. Errr... mmh. Maybe not... 0:) You know what I mean ;) If Draco decides to merely SHOOT the messenger, said messenger will be lucky... Thanks for the review!

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Date: Aug 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 15: 14. Escalating tensions and subsequent blows

PS: Love the footnotes...and the details about the architecture... LOL have I found another writer hooked on history?

Author's Response: Well... You certainly found someone hooked on mythology, other countries, and arabic architecture (that is, in my mind, one of the most beautiful of all times)!!! (though any historic detail I can incorporate always makes it better....) Please, do tell me if I muck up some of the history!

Reviewer: WG13 Signed
Date: Sep 11, 2006 Title: Chapter 16: 15. Christmas secrets

WOW - that was some chapter...

Every time u kinda guess how things are gonna go u throw in some more twists and characters. Again, your attention to detail is just astounding… I can't even imagine how much time and effort you must have put into researching this.

On a different note, i feel really sorry for Blaise... think it would have been easier for him to get Shehzin himself, rather than get stuck in a debt like this... wonder if he would still offer to do this, had he known what he was in store for... or did he already know....

All the best for college by the way…

Author's Response: Thanks :) Yes, I may be adding TOO many twists... Hopefully I can tie the threads by the time the end of the story rolls by 0:) Blaise didn\'t have the presence and notability required to get Shehzin himself. Though you were spared the discussion between DM and Shehzin\'s family, think of it as having been intellectually bloody. \"If looks could kill\" and stuff like that. Thanks for all your reviews!

Reviewer: WG13 Signed
Date: Sep 11, 2006 Title: Chapter 16: 15. Christmas secrets

PS: for those of us who are really dense, please do provide us with a family tree diagram. LOL i am getting really confused as to who is related to who and how so...

:) as u can tell, extended family reunions are not exactly my thing!

Reviewer: WG13 Signed
Date: Sep 23, 2006 Title: Chapter 17: 16. A happy couple

Another brilliant chapter... i am so glad that ur posting again... missed reading ur story at the end of the week. it's so good, that's its like this lovely treat that u can relax and chew on, till the next one pops up.

Looking forward to Ginny's conversation with Hermione... that should be very interesting...

What i also really liked was the way Draco keeps reminding himself ”The Potter and Weasley vaults... Potter and Weasley... Potter and Weasley..." even when he is making out with his wife... shows u a lot about how his brain's functioning.

As always, i can't wait for the next update!


Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m really sorry for the delay... You\'re right for one thing: Hermione and Ginny\'s conversation will be, ah... interesting... Draco doesn\'t like to be double-crossed, and I wanted to show that. Thanks for the review(s)!

Reviewer: WG13 Signed
Date: Oct 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 18: 17. The Weasley lineage

'The sea crashes in explosions of salty water against the stone, seeping between the dark rocks, then withdrawing to prepare a second assault'. – Your writing never fails to amaze me.

On another note, i don't think that Ginny has the capacity to get rid of her baby... she seems to be too attached to it already. or are u going to add another twist to the story?

As always, u have stopped at just the right spot. REALLY looking forward to the next installment.

PS: the chapter's name - The Weasley Lineage is so spot on. i am so glad that it did continue.

Reviewer: WG13 Signed
Date: Oct 15, 2006 Title: Chapter 19: 18. Truth be told

Eeep! I actually found myself alternating between wanting to read the whole chapter as fast as possible or not wanting to get to 'the main part' of the story.

Great writing as always... i can't wait for the next update. but hey, waiting for it will def be worth it!!

Reviewer: WG13 Signed
Date: Oct 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 19: 18. Truth be told

I remember u mentioning that u would leave us some story cookies on your Live Journal account... but unfortunately I have seem to have missed the part where u mention what your account is... :)

Yeah, I do miss this story. Hey - I can wait though! Hope college life is treating u fine.

PS: Just realized that the above sounded slightly stalker-ish... sorry didn't mean to scare u! Just love your writing. If u like, I am 13Oct on LJ...


Author's Response: No problem... :) I don\'t mind stalkers ;) (errr wait, I do... but reviewers are fine!) I don\'t think I said such a thing, probably because I don\'t have a Live Journal account lol Hmmmm cookies cookies cookies... I suppose I could post them on the forum? I\'ll have to think about it--don\'t want anyone witnessing my terrible grammar :/ College is OK, just realized I was two chapters behind in orgo and I have a midterm in math next week in orgo. ... AAAAAAH! Thanks for the review, and the enthusiasm :)

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Date: Nov 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 20: 19. And baby makes... three?

Wooohooo ur back!! Hope things have eased up for u in RL. Fab chapter as always.

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Date: Dec 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 21: 20. The confidant

Yipppiee - an update!!

This has got to be the best early X'mas present I have got this year!

Fab update as always. Hope Draco gets the comeuppance that he so richly deserves. Ginny's not giving it back enough.

Author's Response: hopefully you can get another early present before christmas--ill do my best! As to Ginny\'s giving back, don\'t worry: she will.

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Date: Jan 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 22: 21. Flight

Woohooo another brilliant chapter.

Adore the research u put into your spell names...

Ya Ginny - you go girl! I am so thrilled that she hasn't lost her self and given up. It was sad to see her take all the shit that Draco was dishing out... whether she deserved it or not.